June 4, 2026
I would say I feel more comfortable with summer because most of the time you have sunny days, and especially where I live, which has a moderate climate in the summer, and many festivals take place. Also, I'm a fruit lover, I'm very fond of fruits in summertime, things like watermelon, peach, plum, melon and fig. Besides that its a holiday season, many people go on vacation, so it's an opportunity to relax and chill a little bit after a busy year. As an example, in the past, I loved it because the schools were closed and I could go out and hang out with friends, and we usually went to the soccer field and played football, and it ended with delicious snacks. At the moment, I love it differently because I have found myself more independent, and I can travel wherever I want and let myself go with the flow. Also, I think nothing is more enjoyable than drinking a cold beer under a canopy and not thinking about anything that can disturb me.
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I would say I feel more comfortable within summer because most of the time you have sunny days, andit is sunny, especially where I live, which has a moderate climate in the summer, and many festivals take place.
I would say I feel more comfortable in summer because most of the time it is sunny, especially where I live, which has a moderate climate in the summer, and many festivals take place.
1) I would use ‘in summer’ because it refers to how you physically feel in summer. If you use ‘with summer’ it sounds like you are making plans to do something.
2) It is sunny sounds a little more natural here for describing the weather.
3) I would also remove the ‘and’ before especially as it makes the sentence flow more smoothly. Also it adds extra emphasis on the place where you live.
Also, I'm a fruit lover,. I'm very fond of fruits in summertime, things likeespecially / in particular watermelon, peaches, plums, melon and figs.
Also, I'm a fruit lover. I'm very fond of fruits in summertime, especially / in particular watermelon, peaches, plums, melon and figs.
1) I would put a . after fruit lover to make the sentence easier to read.
2) The use of fond of here is brilliant 🙂
3) I would use especially / in particular here but that’s just to add emphasis to the fruits that you particularly enjoy. ‘Things like’ is still good- just quite casual.
4) An interesting ‘quirk’ of English is that when we list fruits that you eat as a whole item, we make them plural. Whilst fruits that we share remain singular! 😀
Besides thatSince its a holiday season, many people go on vacation, so it's an opportunity to relax and chill a little bit after a busy year.
Since its holiday season, many people go on vacation, so it's an opportunity to relax and chill a little bit after a busy year.
“Besides” does not work well here because it normally means ‘in addition to’- for example “Besides my sandwich, I have some crisps”.
I think ‘since’ works better for your sentence because it connects the “cause” (holiday season) to the effect (having the opportunity to relax).
Very good use of chill here 👌
As an example, in the past, I loved itsummer / the holidays because the schools were closed and I could go out and hang out with friends, and we usually went to the soccer field and played football, and it ended with delicious snacks.
As an example, in the past, I loved summer / the holidays because the schools were closed and I could go out and hang out with friends, and we usually went to the soccer field and played football, and it ended with delicious snacks.
This one may feel a little nitpicky but, in this sentence you say “I loved it”, which is a very vague pronoun. You could either be referring to the summer or the holiday season.
At the moment, I love it differentlyNow, my appreciation for (summer / the holidays) has changed because I have found myselfbecome more independent, and I can travel wherever I want and let myself go with the flow.
Now, my appreciation for (summer / the holidays) has changed because I have become more independent, and I can travel wherever I want and let myself go with the flow.
This sentence is understandable but it sounds a little ‘off’ to an English speaker. We would be more likely to say…
1) We don’t usually pair “love” with “differently” in this context. My suggestion adds emphasis on you change of opinion over time- you have always liked summer/the holidays but now you value them more.
2) So the process of ‘becoming independent’ is gradual and happens over time, so it sounds more natural to focus on becoming that way.
Also, I think nothing is more enjoyable than drinking a cold beer under a canopy and (not thinking about anything that can disturb me single thing or leaving all my worries behind).
Also, I think nothing is more enjoyable than drinking a cold beer under a canopy and (not thinking about a single thing or leaving all my worries behind).
So ‘disturb’ is a very heavy word and is more used to mean something like an intruder or something that deeply effects you- it is not really used in relation to chores, work or everyday stress.
1- the two suggested sentences are both quite idiomatic and also light.
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Overall very easy to understand without the corrections, just a few changes to sentence structure and word choice. Excellent job! 👏
And feel free to ask for any clarifications on things that are confusing.
I would say I (feel more comfortable with) prefer summer because most of the time you have sunny days, and especially where I live, which. Here, we hasve a moderate climate in the summer, and many festivals also take place.
I would say I (feel more comfortable with) prefer summer because most of the time you have sunny days, especially where I live. Here, we have a moderate climate in the summer, and many festivals also take place.
I put (feel more comfortable with) in brackets because it’s not really something we’d use in the context of the question you’re replying to. A more succinct way to answer is to say “I prefer summer because…”.
I feel like this sentence is too long so I’ve added a full stop
Also, I'm a fruit lover,. I'm very fond of fruits inthat grow in the summertime, things likesuch as watermelon, peaches, plums, melons and figs.
Also, I'm a fruit lover. I'm very fond of fruits that grow in the summertime, such as watermelon, peaches, plums, melons and figs.
Besides that, it’s a holiday season, and many people go on vacation, so. Thus, it's an opportunity to relax and chill a little bit after a busy year.
Besides that, it’s a holiday season, and many people go on vacation. Thus, it's an opportunity to relax and chill a little after a busy year.
As anFor example, in the past, I loved it because the schools were closed and I could go out and hang out with friends, and w. We usually went to the soccer field and played football, and it ended with delicious snacks.
For example, in the past, I loved it because the schools were closed and I could go out and hang out with friends. We usually went to the soccer field and played football, and it ended with delicious snacks.
At the moment, I love it differently because I have found myself more independent, and I can travel wherever I want and let myself go with the flow.
Also, I think nothing is more enjoyable than drinking a cold beer under a canopy and not thinking about anything that can disturb me.
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I would say I feel more comfortable with summer because most of the time you have sunny days, and especially where I live, which has a moderate climate in the summer, and many festivals take place.
I would say I (feel more comfortable with) prefer summer because most of the time you have sunny days, I put (feel more comfortable with) in brackets because it’s not really something we’d use in the context of the question you’re replying to. A more succinct way to answer is to say “I prefer summer because…”. I feel like this sentence is too long so I’ve added a full stop
I would say I feel more comfortable 1) I would use ‘in summer’ because it refers to how you physically feel in summer. If you use ‘with summer’ it sounds like you are making plans to do something. 2) It is sunny sounds a little more natural here for describing the weather. 3) I would also remove the ‘and’ before especially as it makes the sentence flow more smoothly. Also it adds extra emphasis on the place where you live. |
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Also, I'm a fruit lover, I'm very fond of fruits in summertime, things like watermelon, peach, plum, melon and fig.
Also, I'm a fruit lover
Also, I'm a fruit lover 1) I would put a . after fruit lover to make the sentence easier to read. 2) The use of fond of here is brilliant 🙂 3) I would use especially / in particular here but that’s just to add emphasis to the fruits that you particularly enjoy. ‘Things like’ is still good- just quite casual. 4) An interesting ‘quirk’ of English is that when we list fruits that you eat as a whole item, we make them plural. Whilst fruits that we share remain singular! 😀 |
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Besides that its a holiday season, many people go on vacation, so it's an opportunity to relax and chill a little bit after a busy year.
Besides that, it’s a holiday season, and many people go on vacation
“Besides” does not work well here because it normally means ‘in addition to’- for example “Besides my sandwich, I have some crisps”. I think ‘since’ works better for your sentence because it connects the “cause” (holiday season) to the effect (having the opportunity to relax). Very good use of chill here 👌 |
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As an example, in the past, I loved it because the schools were closed and I could go out and hang out with friends, and we usually went to the soccer field and played football, and it ended with delicious snacks.
As an example, in the past, I loved This one may feel a little nitpicky but, in this sentence you say “I loved it”, which is a very vague pronoun. You could either be referring to the summer or the holiday season. |
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At the moment, I love it differently because I have found myself more independent, and I can travel wherever I want and let myself go with the flow. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
This sentence is understandable but it sounds a little ‘off’ to an English speaker. We would be more likely to say… 1) We don’t usually pair “love” with “differently” in this context. My suggestion adds emphasis on you change of opinion over time- you have always liked summer/the holidays but now you value them more. 2) So the process of ‘becoming independent’ is gradual and happens over time, so it sounds more natural to focus on becoming that way. |
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Also, I think nothing is more enjoyable than drinking a cold beer under a canopy and not thinking about anything that can disturb me. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
Also, I think nothing is more enjoyable than drinking a cold beer under a canopy and (not thinking about a So ‘disturb’ is a very heavy word and is more used to mean something like an intruder or something that deeply effects you- it is not really used in relation to chores, work or everyday stress. 1- the two suggested sentences are both quite idiomatic and also light. |
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