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This afternoon, I picked my granddaughter up for her painting training class.

When I was in my office, I received a WeChat massage from my wife. She let me pick up my granddaughter this afternoon. Her message attached a notification released by my granddaughter's kindergarten.

The notification said that due to the Covid situation, children didn't go to school in April, so the kindergarten would refund the room and board to every student. The procedure was that parents should go to the kindergarten between 3:50 pm and 4:40 pm; signed first and showed their WeChat collection code, then the teacher would refund the room and board to them through their WeChat. After that, parents could take their child back.

I arrived at the kindergarten at 4:35 pm. I went through all the formalities and picked her up.

Her painting training institute was on the third floor in a modern mall which was connected with my office building, so it was very near to my office.

When we entered the mall, I asked her if she wanted to drink something. She told me she only wanted to eat some cakes. We entered a bake shop on the first floor and bought a portion of egg cake and a bottle of orange juice.

The painting class would be from 5:20 pm to 6:40 pm. When we arrived at the institute, it was only 5:00 pm, so we still had 20 minutes left before her class started.

I was supposed to wait for her until her lesson ended and took her home. So I just sat in the reception room while she took her lessons.

At 5:50 pm, my son called me and told me he was going to come to pick her up and I didn't need to take her home today. At 6:20 pm, he arrived, then I drove home alone.

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I arrived at the kindergarten at 4:35 pm.

The painting class would be from 5:20 pm to 6:40 pm.

At 5:50 pm, my son called me and told me he was going to come to pick her up and I didn't need to take her home today.

At 6:20 pm, he arrived, then I drove home alone.

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This afternoon, I picked my granddaughter up forom her painting training class.

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She let meAllowing me to pick up my granddaughter this afternoon.

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The procedurelan was that parents should go to the kindergarten between 3:50 pm and 4:40 pm; signed first and in and then showed their WeChat collection code, thenso the teacher wcould refund the room and board to them through theirvia WeChat.

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From her kindergarten to her painting school.

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Through via?

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Asked me to pick up my granddaughter

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This afternoon, I picked up my granddaughter up for her painting training class.

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This afternoon, I picked my granddaughter up for her painting training class.


This afternoon, I picked up my granddaughter up for her painting training class. This afternoon, I picked up my granddaughter up for her painting training class.

This afternoon, I picked my granddaughter up forom her painting training class. This afternoon, I picked my granddaughter up from her painting class.

When I was in my office, I received a WeChat massage from my wife.


When I was in my office, I received a WeChat maessage from my wife. When I was in my office, I received a WeChat message from my wife.

When I was in my office, I received a WeChat maessage from my wife. When I was in my office, I received a WeChat message from my wife.

She let me pick up my granddaughter this afternoon.


She let meAllowing me to pick up my granddaughter this afternoon. Allowing me to pick up my granddaughter this afternoon.

Her message attached a notification released by my granddaughter's kindergarten.


Her message had an attached a notification released byce from my granddaughter's kindergarten. Her message had an attached notice from my granddaughter's kindergarten.

The notification said that due to the Covid situation, children didn't go to school in April, so the kindergarten would refund the room and board to every student.


The notification said that due to the Covid situation, children didn't go to school in April, so the kindergarten would refund the room and board tofor every student. The notification said that due to the Covid situation, children didn't go to school in April, so the kindergarten would refund the room and board for every student.

The procedure was that parents should go to the kindergarten between 3:50 pm and 4:40 pm; signed first and showed their WeChat collection code, then the teacher would refund the room and board to them through their WeChat.


The procedurelan was that parents should go to the kindergarten between 3:50 pm and 4:40 pm; signed first and in and then showed their WeChat collection code, thenso the teacher wcould refund the room and board to them through theirvia WeChat. The plan was that parents should go to the kindergarten between 3:50 pm and 4:40 pm; sign in and then show their WeChat collection code, so the teacher could refund the room and board to them through via WeChat.

After that, parents could take their child back.


After that, the parents could take their child back.home. After that, the parents could take their child home.

I arrived at the kindergarten at 4:35 pm.


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I went through all the formalities and picked her up.


I went through all the formalities andalong with the plan and then picked her up. I went along with the plan and then picked her up.

Her painting training institute was on the third floor in a modern mall which was connected with my office building, so it was very near to my office.


Her painting training instituteschool was on the third floor inof a modern mall which was connected with my office building, so it was very near to my office. Her painting school was on the third floor of a modern mall which was connected with my office building, so it was very near to my office.

When we entered the mall, I asked her if she wanted to drink something.


When we entered the mall, I asked her if she wanted to drink something.something to drink. When we entered the mall, I asked her if she wanted something to drink.

She told me she only wanted to eat some cakes.


She told me she only wanted to eathave some cakes. She told me she only wanted to have some cake.

We entered a bake shop on the first floor and bought a portion of egg cake and a bottle of orange juice.


We entered a bcake shop (bakery) on the first floor and bought a portion of egg cake and a bottle of orange juice. We entered a cake shop (bakery) on the first floor and bought a portion of egg cake and a bottle of orange juice.

The painting class would be from 5:20 pm to 6:40 pm.


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When we arrived at the institute, it was only 5:00 pm, so we still had 20 minutes left before her class started.


When we arrived at the instituteclass, it was only 5:00 pm, so we still had 20 minutes lefto wait before her class started. When we arrived at the class, it was only 5:00 pm, so we had 20 minutes to wait before her class started.

I was supposed to wait for her until her lesson ended and took her home.


I was supposed to wait for her until her lesson ended and tookhen take her home. I was supposed to wait for her until her lesson ended and then take her home.

So I just sat in the reception room while she took her lessons.


So I just sat in the reception room while she took her lessons. So I sat in the reception room while she took her lessons.

At 5:50 pm, my son called me and told me he was going to come to pick her up and I didn't need to take her home today.


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At 6:20 pm, he arrived, then I drove home alone.


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