How do hobbies improve mental health ? How do hobbies improve mental health?

If you want to ask a question, your title needs to be revised. You could also make a statement "How Hobbies Improve Mental Health" for your title.

How hobbies improve mental health ? How hobbies improve mental health?

For me hobbies are part of our personality, it makes us different, and it even lets us free our mindprevent us from overthinking. For me hobbies are part of our personality, it makes us different, and it even prevent us from overthinking.

For me hobbies are part of our personality, it. They makes us different, it and even lets usallow us to free our minds from overthinking. For me hobbies are part of our personality. They make us different and even allow us to free our minds from overthinking.

If you wanted to keep all of this in one sentence you would need a semicolon (;) after personality because a comma by itself isn't strong enough to connect two independent clauses.

For me hobbies are part of our personality, i. It makes us different, and it even lets us free our minds from overthinking. For me hobbies are part of our personality. It makes us different and it even lets us free our minds from overthinking.

Hobbies such as: reading, cooking, crocheting, doing sports, drawing or coloring are good for the stability of our mental health, and this is scientifically proven. Hobbies such as reading, cooking, crocheting, sports, drawing or coloring are good for the stability of our mental health, and this is scientifically proven.

In English we say "playing sports" not "doing sports." In a list I think it's ok to leave out "playing." (But others may disagree.)

Hobbies such as: reading, cooking, crocheting, doplaying sports, drawing or, and coloring are good for the stability of our mental health and this ismental health stability and has been scientifically proven. Hobbies such as reading, cooking, crocheting, playing sports, drawing, and coloring are good for mental health stability and has been scientifically proven.

I am not sure if "crocheting" is what you mean, but a quick search on Google seems to suggest so. You can shorten "for the stability of our mental health" to "for mental health stability".

Scientists saidiscovered that doing some hobbies like reading and learning new informations makes you generate new brain cells which is a very important thing, because losing brain cells is irreversible, so generating new one's prevent you from manydifferent diseases like Alzheimer for example. Scientists discovered that doing some hobbies like reading and learning new informations makes you generate new brain cells which is a very important thing, because losing brain cells is irreversible, so generating new one's prevent you from different diseases like Alzheimer.

I think 'discovered' is better. There's no need to add 'for example' again.

Scientists saidy that doing somecertain hobbies like reading and learning new informations make you generate new brain cells which is a very important thing, because losing brain cells is irreversible, so generating new one's prevent you from many diseases like Alzheimer's for example. Scientists say that certain hobbies like reading and learning new information make you generate new brain cells which is a very important thing, because losing brain cells is irreversible, so generating new ones prevent you from many diseases like Alzheimer's for example.

I changed "said" to "say" because it didn't happen just once in the past. Scientists may be saying something like this today as well, so it's more of a general statement. The grammar and the science are a bit vague here. From what I understand, we can lessen our risk of developing certain diseases, but that isn't the same as saying we can prevent people from getting them.

Scientists sclaidm that doing somehaving hobbies like reading and learning new informations make you helps generate new brain cells, which is a very important thing, because l. Losing brain cells is irreversible, so generating new one's prevent you from many diseases like Alzheimer for example's. Scientists claim that having hobbies like reading and learning new information helps generate new brain cells, which is very important. Losing brain cells is irreversible, so generating new ones prevent you from many diseases like Alzheimer's.

Much better to split this part into two sentences.

It also makes your brain busy so you don't have the time to think negatively, you just think about what you're doing, i. If you're coloring you'rer brain is busy choosing a color and struggling about not going out of lines.trying not to make a mistake. It also makes your brain busy so you don't have the time to think negatively, you just think about what you're doing. If you're coloring your brain is busy choosing a color and struggling about trying not to make a mistake.

ItHobbies also makes your brain busy, so you don't have the time to think negatively,; you just think about what you're doing, i. If you're coloring, you'rer brain is busy choosing a color and struggling about not goingnot to go out of the lines. Hobbies also make your brain busy, so you don't have the time to think negatively; you just think about what you're doing. If you're coloring, your brain is busy choosing a color and struggling not to go out of the lines.

You are saying three things here. I put a semicolon between the first two things to show you how it works. It connects the first two things more closely. (They are both about thinking.) You could also put the semicolon in a different place. Here they connect two things that are both about doing something: "Hobbies also make your brain busy, so you don't have the time to think negatively. You just think about what you're doing; if you're coloring, your brain is busy choosing a color and struggling not to go out of the lines." A semicolon is like a period, but not as strong, so you can put it between two sentences that are closely related. Some writers prefer to just use a period and start a new sentence. That would work too: "Hobbies also make your brain busy, so you don't have the time to think negatively. You just think about what you're doing. If you're coloring, your brain is busy choosing a color and struggling not to go out of the lines." The three sentences have equal weight and importance. Also good "struggling to stay within the lines."

It also makes your brain busy sothat you don't have the time to think negatively, you just think about what you're doing, i. If you're coloring, you'rer brain is busy choosing a color and struggling about not going out ofying not to color outside the lines. It also makes your brain busy that you don't have the time to think negatively, you just think about what you're doing. If you're coloring, your brain is busy choosing a color and trying not to color outside the lines.

Also better to split this into two sentences.

So it's good to have a hobby where toyou can escape from all your problems, and all what's tiring your mindso relieve stress. So it's good to have a hobby where you can escape from all your problems, and also relieve stress.

So it's good to have a hobby where to escape from all your problems, and all what's tiringeverything that is weighing on your mind. So it's good to have a hobby to escape from all your problems, and everything that is weighing on your mind.

"Tiring your mind" isn't idiomatic English. I really like @Tolu's correction for this sentence.

So it's good to have a hobby where to escape from all of your problems, and alls well as what's tiring your mind. So it's good to have a hobby to escape from all of your problems, as well as what's tiring your mind.