kiwy's avatar
kiwy

Aug. 26, 2021

0
Swimming

I went swimming at five p.m, because I thought there would be less people at that time. Unfortunately, I was wrong. There were so many children. What the worst was that they were playing in the pool rather than swimming, so I had to swim very carefully to avoid crashing with them. There was a young couple always stand in middle of the pool but never swim. The boy played under the water sometimes, or tried to catch the walking girl. I had to changed my way from time to time.
Thanks to swimming a lot, I could swim easily in the complicated situation and enioy myself.
I saw a little boy who was a little overweight and looked like a Sumo wrestlers, squatting under deep water, then jumped up, over and over again. It was so adorable. A little girl, who looked about 5 years old, swam very freely, just like a fish. I thought she swam better than most of the people who swimming in the pool.
I made a mistake that I shouldn't eat food contained sugar, it made me feel a little disgusted and thirsty when I was swimming. However, I have swam for 70 minutes. I am so happy today.

Corrections (1)
Correction Settings
Choose how corrections are organized

Only show inserted text
Word-level diffs are planned for a future update.

Swimming

Unfortunately, I was wrong.

There were so many children.

It was so adorable.

A little girl, who looked about 5 years old, swam very freely, just like a fish.

I am so happy today.

kiwy's avatar
kiwy

Aug. 27, 2021

0

It was so adorable.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Swimming


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I went swimming at five p.m, because I thought there would be less people at that time.


I went swimming at five p.m,. because I thought there would be lessfewer people at that timethen. I went swimming at five p.m. because I thought there would be fewer people then.

You use "fewer" for things you can count, like people, and "less" for things you can't count, like water.

Unfortunately, I was wrong.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

There were so many children.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

What the worst was that they were playing in the pool rather than swimming, so I had to swim very carefully to avoid crashing with them.


What thewas worst was that they were playing in the pool rather than swimming, so I had to swim very carefully to avoid crashing withinto them. What was worst was that they were playing in the pool rather than swimming, so I had to swim very carefully to avoid crashing into them.

There was a young couple always stand in middle of the pool but never swim.


There was a young couple always standing in middle of the pool but never swimming. There was a young couple always standing in middle of the pool but never swimming.

The boy played under the water sometimes, or tried to catch the walking girl.


The boy played under the water sometimes, or tried to catch the girl, who was walking girlaround. The boy played under the water sometimes or tried to catch the girl, who was walking around.

I had to changed my way from time to time.


I had to changed my wayroute from time to time. I had to change my route from time to time.

Thanks to swimming a lot, I could swim easily in the complicated situation and enioy myself.


Thanks to swimminghaving swum a lot, I could swim easily in the complicated situation and enijoy myself. Thanks to having swum a lot, I could swim easily in the complicated situation and enjoy myself.

I saw a little boy who was a little overweight and looked like a Sumo wrestlers, squatting under deep water, then jumped up, over and over again.


I saw a little boy who was a little overweight and looked like a Sumo wrestlers, squatting deep under deepthe water, then jumpeding up, over and over again. I saw a little boy who was a little overweight and looked like a Sumo wrestler squatting deep under the water, then jumping up, over and over again.

A little girl, who looked about 5 years old, swam very freely, just like a fish.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I thought she swam better than most of the people who swimming in the pool.


I thought she swam better than most of the people who were swimming in the pool. I thought she swam better than most of the people who were swimming in the pool.

I made a mistake that I shouldn't eat food contained sugar, it made me feel a little disgusted and thirsty when I was swimming.


I made athe mistake that I shouldn't eat of eating (food containeding sugar, i/sugary food). It made me feel a little disgusted and thirsty when I was swimming. I made the mistake of eating (food containing sugar/sugary food). It made me feel a little disgusted and thirsty when I was swimming.

However, I have swam for 70 minutes.


However, I have swam for 70 minutes. However, I swam for 70 minutes.

I am so happy today.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

You need LangCorrect Premium to access this feature.

Go Premium