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Should parents pay to their children to do home duties?

Some parents pay to their children to do some chores in home. They want to teach their kids to earn money and spend it with responsibility. They think that show to children to work for what you want it is an important lesson, they think that with this kind of example children can become a responsible adults.

On the other hand, many parents do not think that pay to children to do their duties is good idea, because every family member should help with home chores selflessly due to them are family part. They believe that children should learn to take care of home for love and respect to the family it not because of money.

In conclusion, every family have their ways to teach values to their children with their own perspective of what it is worth in life.

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Should parents pay to their children to do home duties?


Should parents pay to their children to do chome dutires? Should parents pay to their children to do chores?

What you call home duties would usually be just called "chores." :) You could also say "household chores" if you need to specify but thats a bit formal.

Should parents pay to their children to do home dutiuse chores ? Should parents pay their children to do house chores ?

Chores is better suited for this context rather than duties.

Some parents pay to their children to do some chores in home.


Some parents pay to their children to do some chores inat home. Some parents pay to their children to do chores at home.

No need for some. It sounds awkward somehow. And it's always "at home" never "in home." You can say "in the house" for some situations (e.g., "we don't wear shoes in the house") that refer to the location inside the house more than they refer to the idea of being at home.

Some parents pay to their children to do some chores inat home. Some parents pay their children to do chores at home.

"At" better expresses location than "in".

They want to teach their kids to earn money and spend it with responsibility.


They want to teach their kids to earn money and spend it with responsibilitly. They want to teach their kids to earn money and spend it responsibly.

They wantould like to teach their kids to earn money and spend it with responsibilitly. They would like to teach their kids to earn money and spend it responsibly.

"Would like" is a more formal and polite word than "want".

They think that show to children to work for what you want it is an important lesson, they think that with this kind of example children can become a responsible adults.


They think that show toing children tohat they should work for what youthey want it is an important lesson, t. They think that with this kind of example children can become a responsible adults. They think that showing children that they should work for what they want it is an important lesson. They think that with this kind of example children can become a responsible adults.

These phrases are a bit awkward but technically correct as I wrote them, I believe. Here's how I'd rephrase to make this sound more natural: They think that it's important to teach their children that they should work for want. They think that they can help their children become responsible adults by setting this kind of example.

TSimilarly, they think that, show toing children to work for what youthey want it is an important lesson, they think that. Furthermore, with this kind of example children can become a responsible adults. Similarly, they think that, showing children to work for what they want is an important lesson. Furthermore, with this example children can become responsible adults.

Children is plural hence "they" is used rather than "you". Make use of linking words to avoid repetitive words. Furthermore is a linking word used to add onto a point avoiding repetition of words.

On the other hand, many parents do not think that pay to children to do their duties is good idea, because every family member should help with home chores selflessly due to them are family part.


On the other hand, many parents do not think that pay toing children to do their dutichores is good idea, because every family member should help with home chores selflessly due to them aresince they're a family part. On the other hand, many parents do not think that paying children to do their chores is good idea because every family member should help with chores selflessly since they're a family.

Mostly correct! I'd rephrase like this to sound more natural: On the other hand, many parents don't think that paying children to do their chores is a good idea because every family member has a responsibility to help out at home.

On the other hand, many parents do not think that pay toing children to do their dutichores is a good idea, becaus. They believe every family member should help with homuse chores selflessly due to them ar, as they are apart of the family part. On the other hand, many parents do not think that paying children to do their chores is a good idea. They believe every family member should help with house chores selflessly, as they are apart of the family.

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They believe that children should learn to take care of home for love and respect to the family it not because of money.


They believe that children should learn to take care of the home forout of love and respect tofor their family it, not because of money. They believe that children should take care of the home out of love and respect for their family, not because of money.

TMoreover, they believe that children should learn to take care of home fortheir homes out of love and respect tofor their family itand not because of money. Moreover, they believe that children should learn to take care of their homes out of love and respect for their family and not because of money.

"Homes" is used as Children is plural.

In conclusion, every family have their ways to teach values to their children with their own perspective of what it is worth in life.


In conclusion, every family have theirs ways to teach values to theirits children with theirs own perspective ofon what it is worths important in life. In conclusion, every family has ways to teach its children its own perspective on what is important in life.

Sorry for the big rephrase, I just didn't know how to communicate what you were trying to say without building the sentence a bit differently.

In conclusion, every family haves their ways to of teaching values to their children, with their own perspective s ofn what it is worth it in life. In conclusion, every family has their way of teaching values to their children, with their own perspectives on what is worth it in life.

Family is single noun hence "has" is used instead of have. I did not want to change your sentence but I would have used "important" instead of " worth it" in this context. :-)

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