At this very moment, I’m feeling quite discouraged and desperate. At this very moment, I’m feeling quite discouraged and desperate.

Not incorrect, just sounds a bit more natural.

At this very moment, I’m feeling quite discouraged and desperate. At this very moment, I’m feeling quite discouraged and desperate.

Just to clarify it’s an emotion (more cohesiveness! Seems unnecessary but it does add to your writing!!)

At this very moment, I’m quitefeeling discouraged and desperate. At this very moment, I’m feeling discouraged and desperate.

Sounds more natural.

Let me tell you what’ is happening to me. Let me tell you what is happening to me.

Let meI’m going to tell you what’s happening to me. I’m going to tell you what’s happening to me.

“I’m going to…” implies desperation as you are using a more forced tone of imperative!

It has nothing to do with what is going on in the world: the war in Ukraine,; the out of control increase in the cost of living as a consequence of the war in Ukraine, the current; the unstable political situation in my country,; the record high temperatures,; the 6th generation wildfires that are devastating our country as a result of, among other factors,; and the heat wave we’re enduring. It has nothing to do with what is going on in the world: the war in Ukraine; the out of control increase in the cost of living as a consequence of the war; the unstable political situation in my country; the record high temperatures; the 6th generation wildfires that are devastating our country as a result of, among other factors; and the heat wave we’re enduring.

Removed current because it is implied and Ukraine because it was already mentioned. Made suggestions for brevity. Generally, if you make a list with long phrases, separate them with ; instead of , .

Yesterday, I finished reading my lastanother book and, as always happens, starting a new one is never an easy task. Yesterday, I finished reading another book and, as always happens, starting a new one is never an easy task.

Yesterday, I finished reading my last book and, as it always happenis, starting a new one ihas never been an easy task. Yesterday, I finished reading my last book and, as it always is, starting a new one has never been an easy task.

Alt: As always

Theis new book is easier to read than the previous one and that factis makes the reading beit more enjoyable, more appealing, and more riveting, for me. This new book is easier to read than the previous one and this makes reading it more enjoyable, more appealing, and more riveting, for me.

The new book is easier to read than the previous one and that fact makes the reading be more enjoyable, more appealing, and more riveting. The new book is easier to read than the previous one and that fact makes the reading more enjoyable, more appealing, and more riveting.

“Be” is not necessary as “more enjoyable” -> an adjective (in this case). On a side note beautiful use of anaphora !

The new book is easier to read than the previous one and that fact makes the reading be more enjoyable, more appealing, and more riveting. The new book is easier to read than the previous one and that fact makes the reading more enjoyable, appealing, and riveting.

Removed the 'more' for brevity, but either is fine.

That was the case with the last book I read. That was the case with the last book I read.

This seems a bit contradictory to the previous sentence, which seems to suggest that it is the new book that is more enjoyable etc.

“The Kind Worth Killing” is a page-turnedr; the kind of book you start reading and can’t stop until you’ve finished it. “The Kind Worth Killing” is a page-turner; the kind of book you start reading and can’t stop until you’ve finished.

“The Kind Worth Killing” is a page-turnedr; the kind of book you start reading and can’t stop until you’ve finished it. “The Kind Worth Killing” is a page-turner; the kind of book you start reading and can’t stop until you’ve finished it.

The reason it is “turner” instead of “turned” is because “turner” implies that it is a characteristic continuing into the future/present !

“The Kind Worth Killing” is a page-turned;r -- the kind of book you start reading and can’t stop until you’ve finished it. “The Kind Worth Killing” is a page-turner -- the kind of book you start reading and can’t stop until you’ve finished it.

In a nut shell, although it took me to read it more than a month, to read it, and I read every day for over onean hour, it was worthwhile reading. In a nut shell, although it took me more than a month to read it, and I read every day for over an hour, it was worthwhile reading.

In a nut shell, although it took me longe to read it (more than a month, I read every dayand for over onean hour each day), it was worthwhile reading. In a nut shell, although it took me longe to read it (more than a month, and for over an hour each day), it was worthwhile reading.

In English, this type of sentence would be too long by itself, instead, we would put the added, nuanced details in brackets to not disturb the flow of the simple sentence :)

In a nut shell, although it took me to read it more than a month to read it, I read every day for over one hour, i. It was worthwhile reading. In a nut shell, although it took me more than a month to read it, I read every day for over one hour. It was worth reading.

“"The Kind Worth Killing”" is a thriller quite similar to another one I read six years ago: “ called "The Girl on the Train”." "The Kind Worth Killing" is a thriller quite similar to another one I read six years ago called "The Girl on the Train."

A week earlier I finish a book,I only finished the book last week, and I’m already thinking about the next one I’m going to read. I only finished the book last week, and I’m already thinking about the next one I’m going to read.

A week earlier Ibefore finishing a book, I’m already thinking about the next one I’m going to read. A week before finishing a book, I’m already thinking about the next one I’m going to read.

I mean, my problem isn’t the lack of books I want to read, but which one to choose first. I mean, my problem isn’t the lack of books I want to read, but which one to choose first.

I hate to begstarting a book and not be able to read itcontinue because of my level of English is not being highadvanced enough. I hate starting a book and not be able to continue because my level of English is not advanced enough.

I hate to beginning a book and not be able to read it because of my level of English is not being high enough. I hate beginning a book and not be able to read it because my level of English is not high enough.

I also hate having to spend endless hours looking up words in the dictionary. I also hate having to spend endless hours looking up words in the dictionary.

I also hate to spending endless hours looking up words in the dictionary. I also hate spending endless hours looking up words in the dictionary.

By doing this, I lose the threatd of the plot. By doing this, I lose the thread of the plot.

By doing this, I lose the threatd of the plot. By doing this, I lose the thread of the plot.

This is why it is so important to pick out the right book. This is why it is so important to pick out the right book.

This is why it is so important to pick out the right book. This is why it is so important to pick out the right book.

That reminds me of that famous Forrest Gump’s quote: “Life is like a box of chocolates. That reminds me of that famous Forrest Gump quote: “Life is like a box of chocolates.

You never know what you gonna get”." You never know what you gonna get."

Periods go inside quotations.

Like someone suggested that I did, I pretended to write a review about “The Kind Worth Killing”, but as usually happen to meas someone suggested, but as usually happens when I write a review, one thing leads to another and atby the end, I’ find that I have written about something completely different. I pretended to write a review about “The Kind Worth Killing”, as someone suggested, but as usually happens when I write a review, one thing leads to another and by the end, I find that I have written about something completely different.

Like someone suggested that I did, I pretended to write a review about “The Kind Worth Killing”, but, as usually happen to me, one thing leads to another and at the end, I’ve written about something completely different. Like someone suggested that I did, I pretended to write a review about “The Kind Worth Killing”, but, as usually happen to me, one thing leads to another and at the end, I’ve written about something completely different.

Like someone suggested that I dido, I pretended to write a review about “The Kind Worth Killing”," but as it usually happen to mes, one thing leads to another and at the end, I’ve writoten about something completely different. Like someone suggested that I do, I pretended to write a review about “The Kind Worth Killing," but as it usually happens, one thing leads to another and at the end, I wrote about something completely different.

By the way, if you have any suggestions on the text / on topics I could write about, please let me know it. By the way, if you have any suggestions on the text / on topics I could write about, please let me know it.

I think you need to clarify here what sort of suggestions you are looking for.

By the way, if you have any suggestions, please let me know it. By the way, if you have any suggestions, please let me know it.

Suggestions is always referred to in plural in this context (referring to suggestions for books/movies/food etc.)