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The whole life of a novelist

This is a 1000 yen note. The man printed on it is Natsume Souseki. All of the Japanese have already known him. He wrote a great number of novels. One of them named “I am a cat” was written in 1905. The novel became famous after that. Before writing the novel, he taught English Literature at Tokyo University. He used to learn the speciality in England. After being famous, he quitted his teaching job and continued to focus on writing novels. In 1916, he passed away by the age of 49.


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He wrote a great number of novels.

The novel became famous after that.

Before writing the novel, he taught English Literature at Tokyo University.

The whole life of a novelist

This is a 1000 yen note.

He wrote a great number of novels.

One of them named “I am a cat” was written in 1905.

Before writing the novel, he taught English Literature at Tokyo University.

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zann

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The whole life of a novelist

This is a 1000 yen note.

He wrote a great number of novels.

One of them named “I am a cat” was written in 1905.

The novel became famous after that.

Before writing the novel, he taught English Literature at Tokyo University.

He used to learn the speciality in England.

After being famous, he quitted his teaching job and continued to focus on writing novels.

In 1916, he passed away by the age of 49.

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One of them named “I am a cat” was written in 1905.


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One of them named “I aAm a cCat” was written in 1905. One of them named “I Am a Cat” was written in 1905.

The whole life of a novelist


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The whole life of a novelist The life of a novelist

This is a 1000 yen note.


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This is a 1000 yen notebill. This is a 1000 yen bill.

"Note" is fine, but "bill" is used if you are trying to use American English rather than British English.

The man printed on it is Natsume Souseki.


The man printed on it is Natsume Souseki. The man printed on it is Natsume Soseki.

His name is officially spelled in English without the "u". An alternative is "Sōseki".

All of the Japanese have already known him.


All of the Japanese have already known him. All of the Japanese know him.

All of the Japanese have already known him. All of the Japanese already know him.

All of the Japanese have already known himpeople know who he is. All Japanese people know who he is.

He wrote a great number of novels.


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The novel became famous after that.


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The novel became famous soon after thatbeing published. The novel became famous soon after being published.

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Before writing the novel, he taught English Literature at Tokyo University.


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He used to learn the speciality in England.


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He used to learnstudied theis speciality in England. He studied this specialty in England.

He used to learn the specialstudy ity in England. He used to study it in England.

After being famous, he quitted his teaching job and continued to focus on writing novels.


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After becoming famous, he quitted his teaching job and continued to focus on writing novels. After becoming famous, he quit his teaching job and continued to focus on writing novels.

After beinghe became famous, he quitted his teaching job and continued to focus on writing novels. After he became famous, he quit his teaching job and continued to focus on writing novels.

In 1916, he passed away by the age of 49.


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In 1916, he passed away byat the age of 49. In 1916, he passed away at the age of 49.

In 1916, he passed away byat the age of 49. In 1916, he passed away at the age of 49.

Or "in 1916, he passed away right before turning 49 years old."

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