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sho

April 20, 2023

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Are there more natural ways to say the lines below?
I'd like to speak English more naturally and not the way you would find in a textbook. ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ
It's alright if you even change an entire sentence!!


a: Do you buy lottery tickets?
b: I don't. Do you?
a: I sometimes buy scratch tickets! The prize money is very expensive in the U.S, right?
b: How much is it in Japan?
a: It's not scratch, but in Japan, the highest prize ever is about 50 million dollars, I guess. But I heard before that the prize money in the US is 3 billion dollars. It's a dreamy story. It is the best proof that luck exists.


It's difficult. I don't understand it at all. Is this really a question for elementary school students?


That happened to me too.
โ€จ็งใซใ‚‚ๅŒใ˜ใ“ใจใŒใ‚ใฃใŸ

Something like that happened to me too.
โ€จ็งใซใ‚‚ๅŒใ˜ใ‚ˆใ†ใชใ“ใจใŒใ‚ใฃใŸ


่จ€ใ‚ใ‚Œใฆใฟใ‚Œใฐ็ขบใ‹ใซใใ†ใ ใญ
Come to think of it, maybe you are right.


ๅ›ใฏๆ˜ ็”ปใ‚’ไฝ•ใง่ฆณใ‚‹๏ผŸใƒใƒƒใƒˆใƒ•ใƒชใƒƒใ‚ฏใ‚น๏ผŸ
What do you watch movies on? Netflix? Amazon? Or the illegal ones?


ๆ„Ÿ่ฆš็š„ใซใƒžใ‚คใƒŠใ‚นไธ€็‚นใ—ใŸใ ใ‘ใงใ™๏ผ
Minus 1 point is somehow I just feel so.

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Are there more natural ways to say the linsentences below?

I'd like to speak English more naturally and not the way you would find insound like a textbook.

๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ

It's alright even if you even change an entire sentence!!

a: Do you buy lottery tickets?

b: I don't.

Do you?

a: I sometimes buy scratch tickets!

The prize money is very expensivea lot in the U.S, right?

ใพใŸใ€

There's a lot of prize money in the US, right?
The lottery prize is really high in the US, right?

b: How much is it in Japan?

a: It's not scratch, but in Japan, the highest prize ever iwas about 50 million dollars, I guess.

But I've heard before that the prize money in the US is 3 billion dollars.

It's a dreamy story.

It is the best proof that luck exists.

It's difficult.

I don't understand it at all.

Is this really a question for elementary school students?

That happened to me too.

Something like that happened to me too.

Come to think of it, maybe you are right.

What do you watch movies on?

ใพใŸใ€

What do you use to watch movies?

Netflix?

Amazon?

Or the illegal ones?

Minus 1 point is sSomehow I just feel solike a -1 now.

ใ“ใฎใƒ•ใƒฌใƒผใ‚บใฏใ‚ขใƒ‹ใƒกใงใ—ใ‹่žใ“ใˆใพใ›ใ‚“ใ€‚

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sho

April 24, 2023

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Minus 1 point is sSomehow I just feel solike a -1 now.

ๆทปๅ‰Šใ‚ใ‚ŠใŒใจใ†ใ”ใ–ใ„ใพใ™๏ผ
ใฉใฎ้ƒจๅˆ†ใŒใ‚ขใƒ‹ใƒกใฃใฝใ„ใ‚ปใƒชใƒ•ใงใ—ใŸใ‹๏ผŸ

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mari

April 24, 2023

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ๆทปๅ‰Šใ‚ใ‚ŠใŒใจใ†ใ”ใ–ใ„ใพใ™๏ผ ใฉใฎ้ƒจๅˆ†ใŒใ‚ขใƒ‹ใƒกใฃใฝใ„ใ‚ปใƒชใƒ•ใงใ—ใŸใ‹๏ผŸ

ใ€Œ... feel like a -1ใ€ใฎใ“ใจใงใ™ใ€‚ไพ‹ใˆใฐใ€ใ€Œใƒญใƒžใƒณใƒใƒƒใ‚ฏใ‚ญใƒฉใƒผใ€ใฎ็ฌฌ9่ฉฑใ‹ใ‚‰ใฏใ€ใ€Œๅฑฑๅฃใฎใƒ’ใƒƒใƒˆใƒใ‚คใƒณใƒˆใฏใƒžใ‚คใƒŠใ‚นใ‚ˆ๏ผใ€ใจ่จ€ใ‚ใ‚Œใฆใ„ใพใ—ใŸใ€‚

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sho

April 24, 2023

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ใ€Œ... feel like a -1ใ€ใฎใ“ใจใงใ™ใ€‚ไพ‹ใˆใฐใ€ใ€Œใƒญใƒžใƒณใƒใƒƒใ‚ฏใ‚ญใƒฉใƒผใ€ใฎ็ฌฌ9่ฉฑใ‹ใ‚‰ใฏใ€ใ€Œๅฑฑๅฃใฎใƒ’ใƒƒใƒˆใƒใ‚คใƒณใƒˆใฏใƒžใ‚คใƒŠใ‚นใ‚ˆ๏ผใ€ใจ่จ€ใ‚ใ‚Œใฆใ„ใพใ—ใŸใ€‚

ใชใ‚‹ใปใฉใ€‚
ใ“ใ†ใ„ใ†ๆ–‡ใงไฝฟใ„ใŸใ‹ใฃใŸใฎใงใ™ใŒใ€ใƒชใ‚ขใƒซใชใƒใ‚คใƒ†ใ‚ฃใƒ–ใŒ่ฉฑใ—ใฆใ‚‹ๆ„Ÿใ˜ใซใ™ใ‚‹ใซใฏใฉใฎใ‚ˆใ†ใซๅค‰ใˆใ‚Œใฐใ„ใ„ใงใ—ใ‚‡ใ†ใ‹๏ผŸ๐Ÿ˜ฃ

How would you rate that movie, out of 10?
Hmmm, 9.
High score! What is the reason for -1?
Somehow I just feel like a -1.

mari's avatar
mari

April 24, 2023

2

ใ‚ใ‹ใ‚Šใพใ—ใŸใ€‚ใฉใ†ใžใ€‚

How would you rate that movie, out of 10?
Hmmm, a 9 probably.
That's high! Why'd you take off a point?
Somehow it just doesn't feel like a 10.

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sho

April 25, 2023

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ใ‚ใ‹ใ‚Šใพใ—ใŸใ€‚ใฉใ†ใžใ€‚ How would you rate that movie, out of 10? Hmmm, a 9 probably. That's high! Why'd you take off a point? Somehow it just doesn't feel like a 10.

ใชใ‚‹ใปใฉ๏ผๅ‹‰ๅผทใซใชใ‚Šใพใ™๏ผ๏ผใ‚ใ‚ŠใŒใจใ†ใ”ใ–ใ„ใพใ—ใŸ๏ผ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™

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mari

April 25, 2023

2

ใ€ŒHmmm, probably a 9ใ€ใ‚‚่‡ช็„ถใงใ™ใ€‚ใ“ใกใ‚‰ใ“ใใ‚ใ‚ŠใŒใจใ†ใ”ใ–ใ„ใพใ™๏ผ

b: I don't.No

a: I sometimes I buy scratch tickets!

The prize money is very expensivehigh in the U.S, right?

It's a dreamy story. would be a dream

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sho

April 23, 2023

0

Thank you so much!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™

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Are there more natural ways to say the lines below?


Are there more natural ways to say the linsentences below?

I'd like to speak English more naturally and not the way you would find in a textbook.


I'd like to speak English more naturally and not the way you would find insound like a textbook.

๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ


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It's alright if you even change an entire sentence!!


It's alright even if you even change an entire sentence!!

a: Do you buy lottery tickets?


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b: I don't.


b: I don't.No

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Do you?


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a: I sometimes buy scratch tickets!


a: I sometimes I buy scratch tickets!

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The prize money is very expensive in the U.S, right?


The prize money is very expensivehigh in the U.S, right?

The prize money is very expensivea lot in the U.S, right?

ใพใŸใ€ There's a lot of prize money in the US, right? The lottery prize is really high in the US, right?

b: How much is it in Japan?


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a: It's not scratch, but in Japan, the highest prize ever is about 50 million dollars, I guess.


a: It's not scratch, but in Japan, the highest prize ever iwas about 50 million dollars, I guess.

But I heard before that the prize money in the US is 3 billion dollars.


But I've heard before that the prize money in the US is 3 billion dollars.

It's a dreamy story.


It's a dreamy story. would be a dream

It's a dreamy story.

It is the best proof that luck exists.


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It's difficult.


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I don't understand it at all.


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Is this really a question for elementary school students?


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That happened to me too.


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็งใซใ‚‚ๅŒใ˜ใ“ใจใŒใ‚ใฃใŸ


Something like that happened to me too.


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็งใซใ‚‚ๅŒใ˜ใ‚ˆใ†ใชใ“ใจใŒใ‚ใฃใŸ


่จ€ใ‚ใ‚Œใฆใฟใ‚Œใฐ็ขบใ‹ใซใใ†ใ ใญ


Come to think of it, maybe you are right.


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ๅ›ใฏๆ˜ ็”ปใ‚’ไฝ•ใง่ฆณใ‚‹๏ผŸใƒใƒƒใƒˆใƒ•ใƒชใƒƒใ‚ฏใ‚น๏ผŸ


What do you watch movies on?


What do you watch movies on?

ใพใŸใ€ What do you use to watch movies?

Netflix?


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Amazon?


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Or the illegal ones?


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ๆ„Ÿ่ฆš็š„ใซใƒžใ‚คใƒŠใ‚นไธ€็‚นใ—ใŸใ ใ‘ใงใ™๏ผ


Minus 1 point is somehow I just feel so.


Minus 1 point is sSomehow I just feel solike a -1 now.

ใ“ใฎใƒ•ใƒฌใƒผใ‚บใฏใ‚ขใƒ‹ใƒกใงใ—ใ‹่žใ“ใˆใพใ›ใ‚“ใ€‚

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