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Sept. 8, 2022

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Autumn

Autumn here usually comes around the 7th of August every year, so it's been about one month since it came.

For the first 20 days, the temperature still keeps high. It only drops down until late September.

It's early September now. The temperature ranges from 20 to 30 degrees, so the weather is so nice at present. In the morning and evening, it's cool. In the afternoon, it's a little hot, but it's nice hot, not like the heat during summer.

In autumn, the sky looks very high and blue, it seems like it is just washed, and there are always white clouds with it.

The air is cool and dry, not like wet and sticky in summer.

I think we only have two and a half months of nice weather in autumn, that is September, October and the first part of November because it becomes cold in the last part of November.

Autumn is also a nice season for people to do exercise because it is neither hot nor cold. For me, I like taking walks and riding bikes in this season.

Life is beautiful. Let's enjoy the beautiful autumn.

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In autumn, the sky looks very hlight and blue, i. It seems like it is just washed out, and there are always white clouds within it.

I'm not sure what you mean by high, but hopefully this works.

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谢谢你的修改。没想到你的中文那么好,真的好羡慕你。

Autumn

It's early September now.

In the morning and evening, it's cool.

Life is beautiful.

Let's enjoy the beautiful autumn.

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Jack

Sept. 8, 2022

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Autumn

Autumn here usually comes around the 7th of August every year, so it's been about one month since it came.

It's early September now.

In the morning and evening, it's cool.

The air is cool and dry, not like wet and sticky in summer.

Autumn is also a nice season for people to do exercise because it is neither hot nor cold.

Life is beautiful.

Let's enjoy the beautiful autumn.

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Jack

Sept. 8, 2022

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It only drops down until late September.


It only drops (down until) in late September. It only drops (down) in late September.

It only drops down untilaround late September. It only drops around late September.

“Until” here gives a feeling of it’s already cold and will rise again when it’s late September. 这句子听起来像“温度一直都是冷的,直到九月下旬它才会上升”。

It onlydoesn't drops down until late September. It doesn't drop down until late September.

Or "It only drops down in late September."

Autumn


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Autumn here usually comes around the 7th of August every year, so it's been about one month since it came.


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For the first 20 days, the temperature still keeps high.


For the first 20 days, the temperature still keepays high. For the first 20 days, the temperature stays high.

For the first 20 days, the temperature still keepays high. For the first 20 days, the temperature stays high.

For the first 20 days, the temperature still keepstays high. For the first 20 days, the temperature still stays high.

It's early September now.


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It's early September now. It's early September now.

I would merge this with the sentence below. 这句子读起来有点儿尴尬。

The temperature ranges from 20 to 30 degrees, so the weather is so nice at present.


The temperature ranges from 20 to 30 degrees, so the weather is so nice (at present/currently). The temperature ranges from 20 to 30 degrees, so the weather is so nice (at present/currently).

TIt’s early September now and the temperature ranges from around 20 to 30 degrees, so the weather is sovery nice at presentcurrently/at the moment/now. It’s early September now and the temperature ranges from around 20 to 30 degrees, so the weather is very nice currently/at the moment/now.

这里的“So”也听起来有点尴尬。

The temperature ranges from 20 to 30 degrees, so the weather is so nice at presentnow. The temperature ranges from 20 to 30 degrees, so the weather is so nice now.

"At present" works, but it sounds very formal.

In the morning and evening, it's cool.


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In the afternoon, it's a little hot, but it's nice hot, not like the heat during summer.


In the afternoon, it's a little hot, but it's a nice hoeat, not like the heat during summer. In the afternoon, it's a little hot, but it's a nice heat, not like the heat during summer.

In the afternoon (however), it's a little hot, but it's a nice hot, not (type of) heat, unlike the heat during the summer. In the afternoon (however), it's a little hot, but it's a nice (type of) heat, unlike the heat during the summer.

In autumn, the sky looks very high and blue, it seems like it is just washed, and there are always white clouds with it.


In autumn, the sky looks very high and blue, it seems like it is just washed, and there are always white clouds within it. In autumn, the sky looks very high and blue, it seems like it is just washed, and there are always white clouds in it.

In autumns/During the autumn season, the sky looks very high and blue, it seems like it is’s (it has) just been washed, and there are always white clouds within it. In autumns/During the autumn season, the sky looks very high and blue, it seems like it’s (it has) just been washed and there are always white clouds in it.

In autumn, the sky looks very hlight and blue, i. It seems like it is just washed out, and there are always white clouds within it. In autumn, the sky looks very light and blue. It seems like it is just washed out, and there are always white clouds in it.

I'm not sure what you mean by high, but hopefully this works.

The air is cool and dry, not like wet and sticky in summer.


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The air is cool and dry, not like wet and sticky inlike in the summer. The air is cool and dry, not wet and sticky like in the summer.

The air is cool and dry, not like wet and sticky inlike in the summer. The air is cool and dry, not wet and sticky like in the summer.

I think we only have two and a half months of nice weather in autumn, that is September, October and the first part of November because it becomes cold in the last part of November.


I think we only have two and a half months of nice weather in autumn, that isin September, October and the first part of November because it becomes cold in the last part of November. I think we only have two and a half months of nice weather in autumn, in September, October and the first part of November because it becomes cold in the last part of November.

I think we only have two and a half months of nice weather in autumn, thatwhich is September, October and the first parthalf of November because it becomegets cold in the last partter half of November. I think we only have two and a half months of nice weather in autumn, which is September, October and the first half of November because it gets cold in the later half of November.

I think we only have two and a half months of nice weather in autumn, t. That is from September, October and until the first part of November, because it becomes cold in the last part of November. I think we only have two and a half months of nice weather in autumn. That is from September until the first part of November, because it becomes cold in the last part of November.

Autumn is also a nice season for people to do exercise because it is neither hot nor cold.


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Autumn is also a nice season for people to do exercise because it is neither hot nor cold. Autumn is also a nice season for people to exercise because it is neither hot nor cold.

For me, I like taking walks and riding bikes in this season.


FAs for me, I like taking walks and riding bikes in this season. As for me, I like taking walks and riding bikes in this season.

For me, I like taking walks and riding bikes in this seasoautumn. For me, I like taking walks and riding bikes in autumn.

Life is beautiful.


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Let's enjoy the beautiful autumn.


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