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Fernanhaiku

Aug. 23, 2022

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I would like to be a writer

Almost three years ago I watched a movie called "Your Name" from Makoto Shinkai. "Your Name" made me cry like any other movie in my life. I've started watching films of Makoto Shinkai when I discovered another movie that made me cry, "Five Centimeters Per Second", is about a boy who is still in love with a girl who met in his childhood, but now the girl is in love with someone else because life separated them. The end is very realistic because they don't end together, and the lesson is: Nothing last forever but we must keep moving forward . Stories about separation, growing up, adolescense and love have captivated my attention and my heart. I would like to write stories that will be able to make people feel identified and understood like Makoto Shinkai's movies made me feel. But first of all to show my love for nature. I really like to finish my posts with haikus, so here they are:

Spring clouds keep moving.
Now we should separate and....
Start moving too.

The jacaranda tree
Where we used to lunch together
Is in bloom but lonely.

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I would like to be a writer

Almost three years ago I watched a movie called "Your Name" from Makoto Shinkai.

"Your Name" made me cry like any other movie in my life.

Stories about separation, growing up, adolescense and love have captivated my attention and my heart.

I would like to write stories that will be able to make people feel identified and understood like Makoto Shinkai's movies made me feel.

But first of all to show my love for nature.

Spring clouds keep moving.

Now we should separate and....

Start moving too.

The jacaranda tree

Where we used to lunch together

Is in bloom but lonely.

Spring clouds keep moving.

Now we should separate and....

Start moving too.

The jacaranda tree

Where we used to lunch together

Is in bloom but lonely.

Stories about separation, growing up, adolescense and love have captivated my attention and my heart.

I would like to write stories that will be able to make people feel identified and understood like Makoto Shinkai's movies made me feel.

But first of all to show my love for nature.

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Fernanhaiku

Aug. 25, 2022

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Spring clouds keep moving.

Now we should separate and....

Start moving too.

The jacaranda tree

Where we used to lunch together

Is in bloom but lonely.

I would like to be a writer


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Almost three years ago I watched a movie called "Your Name" from Makoto Shinkai.


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"Your Name" made me cry like any other movie in my life.


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I've started watching films of Makoto Shinkai when I discovered a another movie that made me cry, "Five Centimeters Per Second", is about a boy who is still in love with a girl who met in his childhood, but now the girl is in love with someone else because life separated them.


The end is very realistic because they don't end together, and the lesson is: Nothing last forever but we must keep moving forward .


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The end is very realistic because they don't end up together, and the lesson is: Nothing last forever but we must keep moving forward . The end is very realistic because they don't end up together, and the lesson is: Nothing last forever but we must keep moving forward .

The end is very realistic because they don't end up together, and the lesson is this: Nothing lasts forever but we must keep moving forward . The end is very realistic because they don't end up together and the lesson is this: Nothing lasts forever but we must keep moving forward.

The end is very realistic because they don't end up together, and the lesson is: Nothing last forever but we must keep moving forward . The end is very realistic because they don't end up together, and the lesson is: Nothing last forever but we must keep moving forward .

Stories about separation, growing up, adolescense and love have captivated my attention and my heart.


Stories about separation, growing up, adolescensce and love have always moved me and captivated my attention and my heart. Stories about separation, growing up, adolescence and love have always moved me and captivated my attention.

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Stories about separation, growing up, adolescensce and love have captivated my attention and my heart. Stories about separation, growing up, adolescence and love have captivated my attention and my heart.

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I would like to write stories that will be able to make people feel identified and understood like Makoto Shinkai's movies made me feel.


I would like to write stories that will be able to make people feel identified and understood likepeople can relate to and understand in a way similar to how Makoto Shinkai's movies madke me feel. I would like to write stories that people can relate to and understand in a way similar to how Makoto Shinkai's movies make me feel.

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But first of all to show my love for nature.


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But first of all, to show my love for nature., I will leave you all with a haiku. But first of all, to show my love for nature, I will leave you all with a haiku.

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I really like to finish my posts with haikus, so here they are:


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Spring clouds keep moving.


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Now we should separate and....


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Start moving too.


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The jacaranda tree


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Where we used to lunch together


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Is in bloom but lonely.


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I've started watching films of Makoto Shinkai when I discovered another movie that made me cry, "Five Centimeters Per Second", is about a boy who is still in love with a girl who met in his childhood, but now the girl is in love with someone else because life separated them.


I've started watching (more) films ofby Makoto Shinkai when, and I discovered another movie that made me cry,. "Five Centimeters Per Second", is about a boy who is still in love with a girl who he met in his childhood, but. However, because life separated the two of them, now the girl is in love with someone else because life separated them. I've started watching (more) films by Makoto Shinkai, and I discovered another movie that made me cry. "Five Centimeters Per Second" is about a boy who is still in love with a girl who he met in his childhood. However, because life separated the two of them, now the girl is in love with someone else.

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I've started watching films of Makoto Shinkai's films when I discovered another movie that made me cry,. "Five Centimeters Per Second", is about a boy who is still in love with a girl who he met in his childhood, but now the girl is in love with someone else because life separated (them/the two). I've started watching Makoto Shinkai's films when I discovered another movie that made me cry. "Five Centimeters Per Second" is about a boy who is still in love with a girl who he met in his childhood, but now the girl is in love with someone else because life separated (them/the two).

I've started watching films of Makoto Shinkai when I discovered another movie that made me cry, "Five Centimeters Per Second", which is about a boy who is still in love with a girl who he met in his childhood, but now the girl is in love with someone else because life separated them. I started watching films of Makoto Shinkai when I discovered another movie that made me cry, "Five Centimeters Per Second", which is about a boy who is still in love with a girl who he met in his childhood, but now the girl is in love with someone else because life separated them.

I've had started watching the films of Makoto Shinkai when I discovered another movie that made me cry, "Five Centimeters Per Second", it is about a boy who is still in love with a girl who he met in his childhood, but now the girl is in love with someone else because life separated them. I had started watching the films of Makoto Shinkai when I discovered another movie that made me cry, "Five Centimeters Per Second", it is about a boy who is still in love with a girl who he met in his childhood, but now the girl is in love with someone else because life separated them.

"have" means to possess something. Using "had" means you were already watching Makoto Shinkai's films before you found the movie.

I've started watching films ofby Makoto Shinkai when I discovered another movie that made me cry, "_Five Centimeters Per Second"_, which is about a boy who is still in love with a girl whom he met during his childhood, but now the girl is in love with someone else because life had separated them. I've started watching films by Makoto Shinkai when I discovered another movie that made me cry, _Five Centimeters Per Second_, which is about a boy who is still in love with a girl whom he met during his childhood, but now the girl is in love with someone else because life had separated them.

I've started watching films of Makoto Shinkai when I discovered another movie that made me cry, "Five Centimeters Per Second", is about a boy who is still in love with a girl whom he met in his childhood, but now the girl is in love with someone else because life separated them. I've started watching films of Makoto Shinkai when I discovered another movie that made me cry, "Five Centimeters Per Second", is about a boy who is still in love with a girl whom he met in his childhood, but now the girl is in love with someone else because life separated them.

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