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If I could speak to anybody, first I would think in famous and interesting persons as Nikola Tesla, Jesús, Marie Curie, Antoni Gaudí, Mozart, Selma Lagerlöf, or Neil Armstrong. But later I considered that also could be interessant to talk with an anonymous person in some moment of the ancient times, like a roman citizen, in the time of Marcus Aurelius Emperor, and for example in 165 AD year. I can imagine a lively conversation talking with a roman family below a big tree, in a sunny afternoon. We are sharing some food and wine, and I asked them a lot of questions about it life, it house, its jobs and anything that I could think. I ask them for instance, about the formulation of roman cement, that resist in bridges very well 2000 years later. I assume they would ask me questions too. For exemple, why I ask them so much.

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I assume they would ask me questions too.

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I assume they would ask me questions too.

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I assume they would ask me questions too.

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If I could speak to anybody, first I would think in famous and interesting persons as Nikola Tesla, Jesús, Marie Curie, Antoni Gaudí, Mozart, Selma Lagerlöf, or Neil Armstrong.


If I could speak to anybody, first I would think inof famous and interesting personsople, such as Nikola Tesla, Jesús, Marie Curie, Antoni Gaudí, Mozart, Selma Lagerlöf, or Neil Armstrong. If I could speak to anybody, first I would think of famous and interesting people, such as Nikola Tesla, Jesús, Marie Curie, Antoni Gaudí, Mozart, Selma Lagerlöf, or Neil Armstrong.

It sounds a lot more natural to use "people" in this context. "Persons" isn't used very often in English and sounds very formal.

If I could speak to anybody, first I would think inof famous and interesting personsople such as Nikola Tesla, Jesús, Marie Curie, Antoni Gaudí, Mozart, Selma Lagerlöf, or Neil Armstrong. If I could speak to anybody, first I would think of famous and interesting people such as Nikola Tesla, Jesús, Marie Curie, Antoni Gaudí, Mozart, Selma Lagerlöf or Neil Armstrong.

If I could speak to anybody, first I would think inof famous and interesting persons such as Nikola Tesla, Jesúus, Marie Curie, Antoni Gaudí, Mozart, Selma Lagerlöf, or Neil Armstrong. If I could speak to anybody, first I would think of famous and interesting persons such as Nikola Tesla, Jesus, Marie Curie, Antoni Gaudí, Mozart, Selma Lagerlöf, or Neil Armstrong.

But later I considered that also could be interessant to talk with an anonymous person in some moment of the ancient times, like a roman citizen, in the time of Marcus Aurelius Emperor, and for example in 130 AD year.


But later I considered that it also could be interessantting to talk with an anonymous person infrom some moment of thein ancient times, like a roman citizen, in the time of Emperor Marcus Aurelius Emperor, and for example in the year 130 AD year. But later I considered that it also could be interesting to talk with an anonymous person from some moment in ancient times, like a roman citizen, in the time of Emperor Marcus Aurelius, and for example in the year 130 AD.

But lLater, I considered that alsoit could also be interessantting to talk with an anonymous person in some moment of theunknown person who lived in ancient times, like a roman citizen, in the time of Marcus Aurelius Emperor, and for example in 130 AD year. Later, I considered that it could also be interesting to talk with an unknown person who lived in ancient times, like a roman citizen, in the time of Marcus Aurelius Emperor, for example in 130 AD.

But later I would considered that talso could be interessant to talkking with an anonymous person in some moment of the ancient times, like a rRoman citizen, in the time of Marcus Aurelius Emperor, and for example in 130 AD year would also be interesting. But later I would consider that talking with an anonymous person in some moment of the ancient times, like a Roman citizen in the time of Marcus Aurelius Emperor, and for example in 130 AD year would also be interesting.

I can imagine a lively conversation talking with a roman family below a big tree, in a sunny afternoon.


I can imagine a lively conversation talking with a rRoman family below a big tree, ion a sunny afternoon. I can imagine a lively conversation with a Roman family below a big tree, on a sunny afternoon.

You can just write: "conversation with [person]".

I can imagine a lively conversation, talking with a roman family below a big tree, ion a sunny afternoon. I can imagine a lively conversation, talking with a roman family below a big tree, on a sunny afternoon.

I can imagine a lively conversation talking with a rRoman family below a big tree, ion a sunny afternoon. I can imagine a lively conversation with a Roman family below a big tree, on a sunny afternoon.

We are sharing some food and wine, and I asked them a lot of questions about it life, it house, its jobs and anything that I could think.


We are sharing some food and wine, and I asked them a lot of questions about it life, itheir house, itstheir jobs and anything else that I could think of. We are sharing some food and wine, and I ask them a lot of questions about it life, their house, their jobs and anything else that I could think of.

Since you are talking about "them", the possessive pronoun would be "their".

We arwould be sharing some food and wine, and I could asked them a lot of questions about itheir life, itheir house, itstheir jobs and anything else that I could think. of. We would be sharing some food and wine, and I could ask them a lot of questions about their life, their house, their jobs and anything else that I could think of.

We arewould sharinge some food and wine, and I would asked them a lot of questions about it life, it house, its jobstheir lives, and anything that I could think. We would share some food and wine, and I would ask them a lot of questions about their lives, and anything that I could think.

"about their lives, and anything that I could think." the comma after "lives" is called the oxford comma. Leaving out the comma is also technically correct, but adding the comma is considered superior to those who have a deep understanding of English grammar or were taught right.

I ask them for instance, about the formulation of roman cement, that resist in bridges very well 2000 years later.


I ask them, for instance, about the formulation of rRoman cement, that resistworks very well in bridges very well 2000 years later. I ask them, for instance, about the formulation of Roman cement, that works very well in bridges 2000 years later.

I could ask them for instance, about the formulation of roman cement, that resistis found in bridges very wellin good condition 2000 years later. I could ask them for instance, about the formulation of roman cement, that is found in bridges in good condition 2000 years later.

I would ask them for instance, about the formulation of rthe Roman cement, that resist inholds together bridges very well 2000 years later. I would ask them for instance, about the formulation of the Roman cement that holds together bridges very well 2000 years later.

I assume they would ask me questions too.


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For exemple, why I ask them so much.


For exeample, why I ask them so much. For example, why I ask them so much.

For exemple, why I do ask them so muchany questions. For exemple, why I do ask them so many questions.

For exemple, wWhy I ask them so muchany questions, for example. Why I ask them so many questions, for example.

But later I considered that also could be interessant to talk with an anonymous person in some moment of the ancient times, like a roman citizen, in the time of Marcus Aurelius Emperor, and for example in 165 AD year.


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