There was a time when I was reallyso into ramen so, that I would often go in ramen shops by myself on the way back home from work. There was a time when I was so into ramen, that I would often go in ramen shops by myself on the way back home from work.

There was a time when I was really into ramen so I would often go into ramen shops by myself on the way back home from work. There was a time when I was really into ramen so I would often go to ramen shops by myself on the way back home from work.

There was a time when I was really into ramen, so I would often go into ramen shops by myself on the way back home from work. There was a time when I was really into ramen, so I would often go to ramen shops by myself on the way back home from work.

Meanwhile, I foundDuring the time, some tourists from overseas would staringe at me eating at that time.😓 The way Japanese people eat noodles areis probably weird to them because we suck up noodles, making slurping noises.😅 During the time, some tourists from overseas would stare at me eating.😓 The way Japanese people eat noodles is probably weird to them because we suck up noodles, making slurping noises.😅

MeanwhilOne time, I found some tourists from overseas staring at me eating at that time.😓 The way Japanese people eat noodles areis probably weird to them because we suck up noodlesthem up, making lots of noises.😅 One time, I found some tourists from overseas staring at me eating.😓 The way Japanese people eat noodles is probably weird to them because we suck them up, making lots of noise.😅

Meanwhile, I founOne time, I noticed some tourists from overseas staring at me eating at that timewhile I was eating.😓 The way Japanese people eat noodles arewas probably weird to them because we suck up noodles, making slurping noises.😅 One time, I noticed some tourists from overseas staring at me while I was eating.😓 The way Japanese people eat noodles was probably weird to them because we suck up noodles, making slurping noises.😅

You are talking about an event in the past, so I think "was probably weird to them" is best. You could also say "they probably thought how I was eating was weird because Japanese people suck up noodles, making slurping noises."

I know making noises while eating is rude. I know making noise while eating is rude.

I know making slurping or smacking noises while eating is rudeconsidered rude in many (some) countries. I know making slurping or smacking noises while eating is considered rude in many (some) countries.

Even so, the best part of enjoying ramens is thereBut that's part of what makes ramen so good. But that's part of what makes ramen so good.

Even so, the best part of enjoying ramens is therebeing able to savor it. Even so, the best part of enjoying ramen is being able to savor it.

Even so, I think this is the best part of enjoying ramens is there. Even so, I think this is the best part of enjoying ramen.

To be honest, I don't like being watched by people, hate especially by strangers, when I eat somethingwhen I eat something. I especially hate it, when it's strangers. To be honest, I don't like being watched by people, when I eat something. I especially hate it, when it's strangers.

Hard to use "hate" in the same sentence. You could just use "To be honest, I don't like being watched by people, especially by strangers, when I eat something." But I saw you put emphasis in the native text so I changed it this way.

To be honest, I don't like being watched by people, hate especially by strangers, when I eat something. To be honest, I don't like being watched by people, especially by strangers, when I eat something.

So, I had shied away from going in ramen shops infor the past two years. So, I had shied away from going in ramen shops for the past two years.

So, I had shied away from going into ramen shops infor the past two years. So I had shied away from going to ramen shops for the past two years.

So, I had shied away from going into ramen shops infor the past two years. So, I had shied away from going to ramen shops for the past two years.

Currently, while a moodBut now, when an atmosphere of voluntary restraint is spreading nationwide, I found a ramen shop on my way home yesterday. But now, when an atmosphere of voluntary restraint is spreading nationwide, I found a ramen shop on my way home yesterday.

Currently, while a mood of voluntary restrasocial distancintg is spreading nationwide, I found a ramen shop on my way home yesterday. Currently, while social distancing is spreading nationwide, I found a ramen shop on my way home yesterday.

I'm not sure exactly what 自粛モード is but I'm guessing it's something like social distancing

Peeping through the door into the shop, I found no guestcustomers there! Peeping through the door into the shop, I found no customers there!

Peeping through the door into the shop, I found no guestcustomers there! Peeping through the door into the shop, I found no customers there!

I would use the term 'guests' for hotels, not restaurants

It' was now or never! It was now or never!

I rushed into the shop single-mindedlywithout thinking of anything else. I rushed into the shop without thinking of anything else.

I rushed into the shop single-mindedly.without thinking about anything else I rushed into the shop without thinking about anything else

I would use the term 'single-mindedly' for the pursuit of long-term goals

I put a lot of grated garlic and a little bit of vinegar in my ramen to enjoy it to the full. I put a lot of grated garlic and a little bit of vinegar in my ramen to enjoy it to the full.

I put a lot of grated garlic and a little bit of vinegar in my ramen to enjoy to the full.it to my heart's content I put a lot of grated garlic and a little bit of vinegar in my ramen to enjoy it to my heart's content

"To my heart's content" is a phrase used to describe enjoying something completely or wholeheartedly

Even if I'm became deadthly stinky, the next day iwas Saturday (that's today) so it’lld be no problem as I'd stay home all day.😁 Even if I became deathly stinky, the next day was Saturday (that's today) so it’d be no problem as I'd stay home all day.😁

I'm keeping all the tenses in past. It's common in Japanese to switch between present and past tense during narration, but in English it's very rare.

Even if I'm deadly stinky smell like death, the next day is Saturday(that's today) so it’ll be no problem as Isince I'll be staying home all day.😁 Even if I smell like death, the next day is Saturday(that's today) so it’ll be no problem since I'll be staying home all day.😁

"smell like death" just sounds more smooth than "deadly stinky"

Ahhh,🤦 I'm sorry I couldn't refrain myself from going into an eatery restaurant. Ahhh,🤦 I'm sorry I couldn't refrain from going into a restaurant.

I won't do ithis anymore. I won't do it anymore.

I won't do this anymoregain. I won't do this again.

In the meantime, I've watchedseen on TV that many small shops have been going bankrupt. In the meantime, I've seen on TV that many small shops have been going bankrupt.

I hope this ramen shop will hold out until the normal life is back to normal. I hope this ramen shop will hold out until life is back to normal.

I hope this ramen shop will hold out until theour normal life isves are back. I hope this ramen shop will hold out until our normal lives are back.