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kaelimaru

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I hate to maltreat animals! I'm a softy. During my life, I probably crushed some insects while walking, without realizing it. When there is a spider inside my house, I try to not kill it even if some of them are kinda big and scary. Where I live, the species of spiders don’t bite at all. They are harmless. Generally, they go away by themselves.

However, I don't like to see a spider on my bedroom wall when I'm going to sleep. I’m always afraid it runs on me during the night. So, I try to catch it with a jar and throw it away through the window. Let’s say I only have made a few unintentional animal crimes.

I eat meat though. I’m not a vegetarian nor a vegan. I have never killed an animal that I have eaten. My grandmother's generation killed animals to eat, such as pigs, chickens and ducks. I guess I wouldn’t be capable of killing a chicken to eat unless perhaps I’m starving and then my animal instinct awakens.

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I eat meat though.

I'm a softy.

When there is a spider inside my house, I try to not kill it even if some of them are kinda big and scary.

Where I live, the species of spiders don’t bite at all.

They are harmless.

Generally, they go away by themselves.

However, I don't like to see a spider on my bedroom wall when I'm going to sleep.

I’m not a vegetarian nor a vegan.

I have never killed an animal that I have eaten.

My grandmother's generation killed animals to eat, such as pigs, chickens and ducks.

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I guessdon't think I wouldn’t be capable of killing a chicken to eat unless perhaps I’m were starving and then my animal instinct awakensmy natural instincts took over.

"Unless perhaps I were starving" and putting the verb "awaken/take" in the past tense are the only grammatical corrections here, the rest is not wrong necessarily but I reworded it to sound more natural.

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I have never killed an animal that I have eaten.


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I’m not a vegetarian nor a vegan.


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I hate to maltreat animals!


I hate to malmistreating animals! I hate mistreating animals!

I hate to malmistreating animals! I hate mistreating animals!

I hate to malistreat/abuse animals! I hate to mistreat/abuse animals!

I hate to malistreat animals! I hate to mistreat animals!

I'm a softy.


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During my life, I probably crushed some insects while walking, without realizing it.


During my life, I've probably crushed some insects while walking, without realizing it. During my life, I've probably crushed some insects while walking, without realizing it.

During my life, I've probably crushed some insects while walking, without realizing it. During my life, I've probably crushed some insects while walking without realizing it.

When there is a spider inside my house, I try to not kill it even if some of them are kinda big and scary.


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Whenever there is a spider inside my house, I try to not kill it even if some of them are kinda big and scary. Whenever there is a spider inside my house, I try to not kill it even if some of them are kinda big and scary.

Where I live, the species of spiders don’t bite at all.


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They are harmless.


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Generally, they go away by themselves.


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However, I don't like to see a spider on my bedroom wall when I'm going to sleep.


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I’m always afraid it runs on me during the night.


I’m always afraid it runswill crawl on me during the night. I’m always afraid it will crawl on me during the night.

Crawling is used instead of walking for most insects.

I’m always afraid it runswill walk on me during the night. I’m always afraid it will walk on me during the night.

I’m always afraid it runs oncrawls all over me during the night. I’m always afraid it crawls all over me during the night.

I’m always afraid it runsthat it could get on me during the night. I’m always afraid that it could get on me during the night.

So, I try to catch it with a jar and throw it away through the window.


So, I try to catch it with a jar and throw it awayout through the window. So, I try to catch it with a jar and throw it out through the window.

So, I try to catch it with a jar and throw it away throughout the window. So, I try to catch it with a jar and throw it out the window.

So, I try to catch it with a jar and throw it away through the window. So I try to catch it with a jar and throw it away through the window.

Let’s say I only have made a few unintentional animal crimes.


Let’s say I only have madeI think I can reasonably say I have only committed a few unintentional animal crimes. I think I can reasonably say I have only committed a few unintentional animal crimes.

Let’s say I only have madejust say that I have only committed a few unintentional animal crimes. Let’s just say that I have only committed a few unintentional animal crimes.

Let’s just say I only have made a few unintentional animal crimes. Let’s just say I only have made a few unintentional animal crimes.

I eat meat though.


I do eat meat though. I do eat meat though.

Using the "do [verb]" form here shows a contrast between your previous sentence and this one. "There are a few unintentional crimes I committed, *but* I do eat meat, which might be an 'intentional crime'."

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My grandmother's generation killed animals to eat, such as pigs, chickens and ducks.


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I guess I wouldn’t be capable of killing a chicken to eat unless perhaps I’m starving and then my animal instinct awakens.


I guessdon't think I wouldn’t be capable of killing a chicken to eat unless perhaps I’m were starving and then my animal instinct awakensmy natural instincts took over. I don't think I would be capable of killing a chicken to eat unless perhaps I were starving and my natural instincts took over.

"Unless perhaps I were starving" and putting the verb "awaken/take" in the past tense are the only grammatical corrections here, the rest is not wrong necessarily but I reworded it to sound more natural.

I guess I wouldn’t be capable of killing a chicken to eat unless perhaps I’m starving and. Only then will my animalistic instinct awakenss take over. I guess I wouldn’t be capable of killing a chicken to eat unless I’m starving. Only then will my animalistic instincts take over.

I guess I wouldn’t be capable of killing a chicken to eat unless perhaps I’m starving and t. Then, my animal instinct awakens. I guess I wouldn’t be capable of killing a chicken to eat unless I’m starving. Then, my animal instinct awakens.

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