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Feb. 5, 2023

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Writing Challenge, Day 127

Today is day 127 of my daily English challenge. Today I baked salted dough with different ingredients. It was very delicious.

Tomorrow, I will be baking sweet dough with different ingredients and especially with also different decoration.๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š I can't wait to do it!

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Feb. 6, 2023

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Writing Challenge, Day 127

Today is day 127 of my daily English challenge.

Today I baked salted dough with different ingredients.

It was very delicious.

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courageuse19

Feb. 6, 2023

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Writing Challenge, Day 127

Today is day 127 of my daily English challenge.

Today I baked salted dough with different ingredients.

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Feb. 6, 2023

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It was very delicious.

Someone else said to change very to really. I think in this case either word works so you don't really have to make that correction. This sentence would be good as it is.

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Feb. 6, 2023

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Today is day 127 of my daily English challenge.

Today I baked salted dough with different ingredients.

It was very delicious.

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courageuse19

Feb. 6, 2023

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Writing Challenge, Day 127


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Today is day 127 of my daily English challenge.


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Today I baked salted dough with different ingredients.


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It was very delicious.


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Also: It was verreally delicious. Also: It was really delicious.

It was very delicious. It was very delicious.

Someone else said to change very to really. I think in this case either word works so you don't really have to make that correction. This sentence would be good as it is.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Tomorrow, I will be baking sweet dough with different ingredients and especially with also different decoration.๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š I can't wait to do it!


Tomorrow, I will be baking sweet dough with different ingredients and especially with also different decoration.s. ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š I can't wait to do it! Tomorrow, I will be baking sweet dough with different ingredients and especially with different decorations. ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š I can't wait to do it!

Since there are multiple decorations u need to make it plural. I deleted the word โ€œalsoโ€ because it felt redundant with the sentence.

Tomorrow, I will be baking sweet dough with different ingredients and, especially with also different decorations.๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š I can't wait to do it! Tomorrow, I will be baking sweet dough with different ingredients, especially with different decorations.๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š I can't wait to do it!

Tomorrow, I will be baking sweet dough with different ingredients and especially with also different decoration.๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š I can't wait to do it! Tomorrow, I will be baking sweet dough with different ingredients and especially with also different decoration.๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š I can't wait to do it!

....with various ingredients and various decorations. I can't wait.

Tomorrow, I will be baking sweet dough with different ingredients and especially with also different decoration.๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š I can't wait to do it! Tomorrow, I will be baking sweet dough with different ingredients and decoration.๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š I can't wait to do it!

You just added too many words. You can omit most of what was written and just say " with different ingredients ad decorations". You don't have to say " with different" twice because its already implied if you put decorations after"and" that the decorations will be different too.

Tomorrow, I will be baking sweet dough with different ingredients and especialalso, more importantly, with also different decoration.๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š I can't wait to do it! Tomorrow, I will be baking sweet dough with different ingredients and also, more importantly, with different decoration.๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š I can't wait to do it!

Yum!

Tomorrow, I will be baking a sweet dough with different ingredients and especially with alsowith different decorations.๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š I can't wait to do it! Tomorrow, I will be baking a sweet dough with different ingredients and with different decorations.๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š I can't wait to do it!

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