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Running Make Me Relieved

About two years ago, I developed a long habit of running once a week on the standard 400-meter track at a nearby stadium. For some reason, however, I stopped till now.

During my running, I could feel the gentle breeze touch my face. My eyes looked straight ahead and always into my past and future life. Based on my personal running experience, it seems some special chemicals were released from my body which was immersed in sweat. maybe these chemicals are one type of endorphins that can make people have a sensation of pain then followed rebelieve.

Running is really a good helpful sports activity which can help us clear and focus spirit, relieved.

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Running Make Me Relieved


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あるいは、 Running Relieves My Stress

About two years ago, I developed a long habit of running once a week on the standard 400-meter track at a nearby stadium.


About two years ago, I developed a longregular habit of running once a week on the standard 400-meter track at a nearby stadium. About two years ago, I developed a regular habit of running once a week on the standard 400-meter track at a nearby stadium.

About two years ago, I developed a long habit of running once a week on the standard 400-meter track at a nearby stadium. About two years ago, I developed a habit of running once a week on the standard 400-meter track at a nearby stadium.

すごいですね!

For some reason, however, I stopped till now.


For some reason, however, I stopped untill now. For some reason, however, I stopped until now.

until - 'til could possibly by used as a very colloquial abbreviation. till is not the same thing.

For some reason, however, I stopped untill now. For some reason, however, I stopped until now.

「however」の使い方はとても上手です!

During my running, I could feel the gentle breeze touch my face.


During my runnings, I could feel thea gentle breeze touch my face. During my runs, I could feel a gentle breeze touch my face.

During my running, I could feel the gentle breeze touch my face. During my run, I could feel the gentle breeze touch my face.

このの方が自然だと思います。リフレッシュできそうですね。

My eyes looked straight ahead and always into my past and future life.


My eyes always looked straight ahead and always into my past and future life. My eyes always looked straight ahead and into my past and future life.

My eyes looked straight ahead and always into my past and future life. My eyes looked straight ahead and always into my past and future life.

すごい文ですよ!This sounds very poetic to me.

Based on my personal running experience, it seems some special chemicals were released from my body which was immersed in sweat.


Based on my personal running experience, it seems some special chemicals were released fromby my body which was immerscoated in sweat. Based on my personal running experience, it seems some special chemicals were released by my body which was coated in sweat.

"Immersed" suggest you were say in a body of liquid like a bath. "Released from" suggests the chemicals left your body.

Based on my personal running experience, it seems somethat special chemicals were released from my body which was immersed inen I sweat. Based on my personal running experience, it seems that special chemicals were released from my body when I sweat.

このの方が自然です。

maybe these chemicals are one type of endorphins that can make people have a sensation of pain then followed rebelieve.


mMaybe these chemicals are one type of endorphins that can make people have a sensation of pain then followed rebby relievef. Maybe these chemicals are one type of endorphin that can make people have a sensation of pain followed by relief.

Start of a sentence needs a capital letter.

mMaybe these chemicals are onea type of endorphins that can make people have a sensation of painfeel pain which is then followed rebby relievef. Maybe these chemicals are a type of endorphin that can make people feel pain which is then followed by relief.

面白そうです。

Running is really a good helpful sports activity which can help us clear and focus spirit, relieved.


Running is really a good helpful sports activity which can help us develop a clear and focused spirit, relieved. Running is really a good helpful sports activity which can help us develop a clear and focused spirit.

Running is really a good and helpful sports activity which can help us clear and focus spirit, relievedas well as relieve our spirits. Running is really a good and helpful activity which can help us clear and focus as well as relieve our spirits.

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