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Aug. 4, 2020

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Intelligent could be a gift or poison.

"Intelligent could be a gift or poison depending on the person" this is a new idea of me after I was inspired by my friends. Some have a clever brain when they're born, some is shaping by the situation. I'm the second one. That doesn't mean which is best. But in my opinion, the first is fatal when people don't have enough self-knowledge. For an example of my result, look no further than my friends, which rest of them are millennials. Honestly, I accept that they are smarter than me. Most of the time, I get along with them and I attempt to be a moderate audient because I can't catch up and I don't like to intervene in their personal views. My life experience took a lesson to me that keeping silent is a good weapon to avoid contradiction and keep a good relationship.


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I'm the second one.

But in my opinion, the first is fatal when people don't have enough self-knowledge.

Honestly, I accept that they are smarter than me.

Intelligent could be a gift or poison.


Intelligent cce Could be a gGift or pa Poison. Intelligence Could be a Gift or a Poison.

Intelligence is a noun, intelligent is an adjective Capitalize the important words in a title

"Intelligent could be a gift or poison depending on the person" this is a new idea of me after I was inspired by my friends.


"Intelligentce could be a gift or poisonblessing or a curse depending on the person." this is a new idea of meI had this idea after I was inspired by my friends. "Intelligence could be a blessing or a curse depending on the person." I had this idea after I was inspired by my friends.

same as before A blessing or a curse is a common phrase in English that means the same thing as gift or poison.

Some have a clever brain when they're born, some is shaping by the situation.


Some have a clever brain when they're born, some is shaping by the situationare smart from the day they're born, some become smart. Some are smart from the day they're born, some become smart.

another common english phrase that describes this idea is "nature versus nurture."

I'm the second one.


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That doesn't mean which is best.


That doesn't mean whichone is bestter. That doesn't mean one is better.

I can't explain why, but this doesn't feel right

But in my opinion, the first is fatal when people don't have enough self-knowledge.


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For an example of my result, look no further than my friends, which rest of them are millennials.


For an example of my result, look no further than my friends, which rest of them areo are all millennials. For an example, look no further than my friends, who are all millennials.

use who when talking about people Use all since they all fall into the same category

Honestly, I accept that they are smarter than me.


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Most of the time, I get along with them and I attempt to be a moderate audient because I can't catch up and I don't like to intervene in their personal views.


Most of the time, I get along with them and I attempt to be a moderate audientce because I can't catch up and I don't like to intervene in their personal views. Most of the time, I get along with them and I attempt to be a moderate audience because I can't catch up and I don't like to intervene in their personal views.

My life experience took a lesson to me that keeping silent is a good weapon to avoid contradiction and keep a good relationship.


My life experience took aaught me the lesson to me that keeping silent is a good weapon to avoid contradiction and keep a good relationship. My life experience taught me the lesson that keeping silent is a good weapon to avoid contradiction and keep a good relationship.

taught me the lesson that put indirect object before direct object, use the verb taught.

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