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A Proverb

I like a proverb: Those who come are welcome, those who leave are not regretted. Refusing others makes us narrow-minded, and attachments sometimes make us unhappy. I think the proverb similars to Serenity Prayer because they mention a change of ourselves. Moreover, this proverb comes from a Chinese old book. Even though Chinese old books were written a long time ago, their contents are surprisingly suggestive. When I was in high school, I thought learning classics is a waste of time, but now I think it affects my way of thinking.

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A Proverb

Refusing others makes us narrow-minded, and attachments sometimes make us unhappy.

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Feb. 8, 2021

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A Proverb


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I like a proverb: Those who come are welcome, those who leave are not regretted.


I like athe proverb: "Those who come are welcome, those who leave are not regretted." I like the proverb "Those who come are welcome, those who leave are not regretted."

I like athis proverb: Those who come are welcome,; those who leave are not regretted." I like this proverb: Those who come are welcome; those who leave are not regretted."

Refusing others makes us narrow-minded, and attachments sometimes make us unhappy.


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I think the proverb similars to Serenity Prayer because they mention a change of ourselves.


I think the proverb is similars to the Serenity Prayer because they mention a change ofin ourselves. I think the proverb is similar to the Serenity Prayer because they mention a change in ourselves.

Moreover, this proverb comes from a Chinese old book.


Moreover, this proverb comes from an old Chinese old book. Moreover, this proverb comes from an old Chinese book.

Even though Chinese old books were written a long time ago, their contents are surprisingly suggestive.


Even though old Chinese old books were written a long time ago, their contents are surprisingly suggestive. Even though old Chinese books were written a long time ago, their contents are surprisingly suggestive.

I don't think I would use the word "suggestive" here. Instead, I would use something like "effective", or "relevant". I might write something like: "Even though old Chinese books were written a long time ago, their contents are surprisingly relevant today." Which means that even though the books are very old, the wisdom they contain is still relevant today.

When I was in high school, I thought learning classics is a waste of time, but now I think it affects my way of thinking.


When I was in high school, I thought learning the classics iwas a waste of time, but now I think it affects my way of thinking. When I was in high school, I thought learning the classics was a waste of time, but now I think it affects my way of thinking.

Here are some more ways you could say this sentence: "When I was in high school, I thought learning the classics was a waste of time, but now I think it enhances my way of thinking." or "When I was in high school, I thought learning the classics was a waste of time, but now I think it improves my way of thinking." or "When I was in high school, I thought learning the classics was a waste of time, but now I think it helps me to think better."

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