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The Golden Ring of Russia

The present report is dedicated to one of the most popular touristic destination of Russia – The Golden Ring. This is the name of the touristic route, which includes several Russian medieval cities, and principal of them are: Rostov, Yaroslavl, Kostroma, Ivanovo, Suzdal, Vladimir. The name “Golden Ring” comes from their geographical location in the form of the ring relatively to each other, and was first proposed by historian Yuri Bychkov.
This route is very popular among both domestic and foreign tourists since it includes a lot of open air places of interests, like picturesque churches and monasteries with golden domes and other old buildings, which are subjects of Russia’s ancient history, and many of them are UNESCO World Heritage Sites. Also, every city of Golden Ring has numerous indoor museums.
Experts say that tourism has positive impact on economies of the cities included to the Golden Ring, because it facilitates development of city infrastructure, and also makes additional profit to the city budget. This happens because of so-called multiplier effect, which means that expenses of tourists become the income of companies and city’s budget, which in turn become the expense to salaries and objects maintaining, which eventually multiplies expenses of tourists.
As an example of tourism impact it was shown by statistics of Vladimir city region that touristic industry is a significant part of the region economy, which provides tax payment, creates new jobs and has growth potential equal or higher than other industries.
All that reasons induce the government to develop touristic industry in the cities of the Golden Ring and also to introduce other cities to this touristic route.

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The Golden Ring of Russia

Also, every city of Golden Ring has numerous indoor museums.

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The Golden Ring of Russia


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The present report is dedicated to one of the most popular touristic destination of Russia – The Golden Ring.


The presentis report is dedicated to one of the most popular touristic destinations of Russia – The Golden Ring. This report is dedicated to one of the most popular tourist destinations of Russia – The Golden Ring.

This is the name of the touristic route, which includes several Russian medieval cities, and principal of them are: Rostov, Yaroslavl, Kostroma, Ivanovo, Suzdal, Vladimir.


This is the name of thea touristic route, which includes several Russian medieval Russian cities, and principal of them arewith the foremost being: Rostov, Yaroslavl, Kostroma, Ivanovo, Suzdal, and Vladimir. This is the name of a tourist route, which includes several medieval Russian cities, and with the foremost being: Rostov, Yaroslavl, Kostroma, Ivanovo, Suzdal, and Vladimir.

The name “Golden Ring” comes from their geographical location in the form of the ring relatively to each other, and was first proposed by historian Yuri Bychkov.


The name “Golden Ring” comes from their geographical location in, the form of the ring relatively to each otherir relative locations forming a circle, and was first proposed by historian Yuri Bychkov. The name “Golden Ring” comes from their geographical location, their relative locations forming a circle, and was first proposed by historian Yuri Bychkov.

You can also say "ring" instead of "circle", I just changed it because you had already mentioned "ring" in the part above and I didn't want it to be repetitive.

This route is very popular among both domestic and foreign tourists since it includes a lot of open air places of interests, like picturesque churches and monasteries with golden domes and other old buildings, which are subjects of Russia’s ancient history, and many of them are UNESCO World Heritage Sites.


This route is very popular among both domestic and foreign tourists, since it includes a lot of open air places of interests, like picturesque churches and, monasteries with golden domes, and other old buildings, which are subjectremains of Russia’s ancient history, and many of them are UNESCO World Heritage Sites. This route is very popular among both domestic and foreign tourists, since it includes a lot of open air places of interest, like picturesque churches, monasteries with golden domes, and other old buildings, which are remains of Russia’s ancient history, and many of them are UNESCO World Heritage Sites.

"Subjects" didn't seem right here.

Also, every city of Golden Ring has numerous indoor museums.


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Experts say that tourism has positive impact on economies of the cities included to the Golden Ring, because it facilitates development of city infrastructure, and also makes additional profit to the city budget.


Experts say that tourism has a positive impact on economies of the cities, included toing those in the Golden Ring, because it facilitates the development of city infrastructure, and also makes additional profit tohat goes toward the city budget. Experts say that tourism has a positive impact on economies of the cities, including those in the Golden Ring, because it facilitates the development of city infrastructure and also makes additional profit that goes toward the city budget.

This happens because of so-called multiplier effect, which means that expenses of tourists become the income of companies and city’s budget, which in turn become the expense to salaries and objects maintaining, which eventually multiplies expenses of tourists.


This happens because of the so-called m"Multiplier eEffect", which means that the expenses of tourists become the income of companies and city’s budgeties, which in turn become thegoes towards expense tos like salaries and objects maintainingthe mantente of attractions, which eventually multiplies the expenses of tourists. This happens because of the so-called "Multiplier Effect", which means that the expenses of tourists become the income of companies and cities, which in turn goes towards expenses like salaries and the mantente of attractions, which eventually multiplies the expenses of tourists.

"Budget" is a limited amount of money that one has to spend. I understood what you wanted to say but it sounded kind of off to me that the expenses of the tourists would go toward the cities' budget, so I rephrased it.

As an example of tourism impact it was shown by statistics of Vladimir city region that touristic industry is a significant part of the region economy, which provides tax payment, creates new jobs and has growth potential equal or higher than other industries.


As an example of tourism impact it was shown by statistics of Vladimir cCity region, which demonstrates that the touristicm industry iplays a significant part ofrole in the regional economy, which providesing tax payments, createsing new jobs, and has growth potential equal to or higher than other industries in the area. An example of tourism impact is shown by statistics of Vladimir City region, which demonstrates that the tourism industry plays a significant role in the regional economy, providing tax payments, creating new jobs, and has growth potential equal to or higher than other industries in the area.

All that reasons induce the government to develop touristic industry in the cities of the Golden Ring and also to introduce other cities to this touristic route.


All that reasons inducThese are all reasons that should encourage the government to develop touristicm industryies in the cities of the Golden Ring, and also to introduce other cities into this touristic route. These are all reasons that should encourage the government to develop tourism industries in the cities of the Golden Ring, and also to introduce other cities into this tourist route.

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