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My teacups. Part 2

Soon after, I bought this kind of teacup on a commercial platform.
After using it a few times, I lost fresh feelings about it and stopped using it. The main reason, I think, maybe that its lid was too clumsy and I was not used to it.

A few months later, I thought I should form the habit of drinking tea, because I felt I was not a young man anymore and I should learn to take good care of myself, so I decided to buy another teacup.

Because it was winter back then, I felt I should buy an insulation cup so that the tea water wouldn't be cold very quickly.

I checked insulated cups on the internet to find out which brand had better quality and finally, I made a decision to buy a Japanese brand "zojirush".

It was a 360 ml volume cup and really had a good quality of keeping warm. But it didn't have a filter screen, so often times, the tea leaves would enter my mouth when I drank tea.

I felt I should buy another teacup with a filter screen, thus it not only can prevent tea leaves from entering my mouth, but also be very useful for me to wash tea leaves before I make tea.

I still wanted to buy the "zojirush" brand because its keeping- warm function was very effective.

To be continued. I sincerely thank you for your trust and support.

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My teacups.


Part 2


Soon after, I bought this kind of teacup on a commercial platform.


After using it a few times, I lost fresh feelings about it and stopped using it.


After using it a few times, I lost fresh feelings about iit became old news fast and I stopped using it. After using it a few times, it became old news fast and I stopped using it.

"I lost fresh feelings about it", sounds quite poetic and not the correct register for this piece of writing. I gave an example of what you could write instead.

The main reason, I think, maybe that its lid was too clumsy and I was not used to it.


The main reason, I think, maybe that is that maybe its lid was too clumsyawkward and I was not used to it. The main reason, I think is that maybe its lid was too awkward and I was not used to it.

Wouldn't use clumsy, here maybe - fiddly, awkward

A few months later, I thought I should form the habit of drinking tea, because I felt I was not a young man anymore and I should learn to take good care of myself, so I decided to buy another teacup.


Because it was winter back then, I felt I should buy an insulation cup so that the tea water wouldn't be cold very quickly.


Because it was winter back then, I felt I should buy an insulation cup so that the tea water wouldn't be cold verycool down as quickly. Because it was winter back then, I felt I should buy an insulation cup so that the tea water wouldn't cool down as quickly.

You could say - wouldn't cool down as quickly or heat wouldn't escape as fast

I checked insulated cups on the internet to find out which brand had better quality and finally, I made a decision to buy a Japanese brand "zojirush".


I checked insulated cups on the internet to find out which brand had betterthe best quality and finally, I made athe decision to buy a Japanese brand "zZojirush". I checked insulated cups on the internet to find out which brand had the best quality and finally, I made the decision to buy a Japanese brand "Zojirush".

It was a 360 ml volume cup and really had a good quality of keeping warm.


It was a 360 ml volume cup and had really had a good quality of keeping warmgreat heat insulation. It was a 360 ml cup and had really great heat insulation.

I would remove 'volume' here, it's unneeded

But it didn't have a filter screen, so often times, the tea leaves would enter my mouth when I drank tea.


But it didn't have a filter screen, so often times, the tea leaves would enter my mouth when I drank tea. But it didn't have a filter, so oftentimes, the tea leaves would enter my mouth when I drank tea.

I felt I should buy another teacup with a filter screen, thus it not only can prevent tea leaves from entering my mouth, but also be very useful for me to wash tea leaves before I make tea.


I felt I should buy another teacup with a filter screen, thus it can not only can prevent tea leaves from entering my mouth, but also be very useful for me to wash tea leaves before I make tea. I felt I should buy another teacup with a filter, thus it can not only prevent tea leaves from entering my mouth but also be very useful for me to wash tea leaves before I make tea.

I still wanted to buy the "zojirush" brand because its keeping- warm function was very effective.


I still wanted to buy the "zZojirush" brand because its keeping- warm functionheat insulation feature was very effective. I still wanted to buy the "Zojirush" brand because its heat insulation feature was very effective.

When talking about a company or brand, capitalise the first letter - amazon / Amazon - subway / Subway etc When talking about keeping something like tea warm in a cup, you would use a word such as insulation or heat insulation

To be continued.


I sincerely thank you for your trust and support.


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