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I was going to the my friend's party! I was going to my friend's party!

I was going to the my friend's party! I was going to my friend's party!

I was going to theent to my friend's party! I went to my friend's party!

Hello, everybody! Hello, everybody!

I had a lot of tasks fromat my job. I had a lot of tasks at my job.

I had a lot of tasks fromto do for my job. I had a lot of tasks to do for my job.

What you wrote isn't wrong - this is just better!

I had a lot of tasks fromor/at my job. I had a lot of tasks for/at my job.

Honestly, I know nothing about the law and the court system, but I needed to do igo to court today, so at firstly, I had a long way to go from my office to the necessary courts. Honestly, I know nothing about the law and the court system, but I needed to go to court today, so firstly, I had a long way to go from my office to the necessary courts.

Explain in more detail what it is you had to do exactly (go to court). Since your next sentence starts with "secondly" you should use "firstly" here.

Honestly, I know nothing about law and court, but I needed to do it ? today, so a. At first I had a long way to go/to walk/to drive etc from my office to the necessary courts. Honestly, I know nothing about law and court, but I needed to do it ? today. At first I had a long way to go/to walk/to drive etc from my office to the necessary courts.

Make sure you specify what 'it' refers to!

Honestly, I know nothing about law and court, but I needed to do it today, so a. At first I had a long way (to travel) from my office to the necessary courts. Honestly, I know nothing about law and court, but I needed to do it today. At first I had a long way (to travel) from my office to the necessary courts.

Secondly, I was in a hurry witcarrying all the documents / Secondly, I was in a hurry to finish all the documents. Secondly, I was in a hurry carrying all the documents / Secondly, I was in a hurry to finish all the documents.

Secondly, I was in a hurry with all the documents. Secondly, I was in a hurry with all the documents.

Secondly, I was in a hurry with all the documents. Secondly, I was in a hurry with all the documents.

Plus it has been raineding all day (and even now). Plus it has been raining all day.

"It has been raining" means it was previously raining and it still is.

Plus it has been raineding all day (and even now). Plus it has been raining all day (and even now).

Plus it has been raineding all day (and even now). Plus it has been raining all day (and even now).

SoAt court, I had a lot of communichelpful conversations and it was really great and very touching, when people agreed to help me or to explain something steps in, you knowthe steps in a process, for example, stages of the statement of claim. At court, I had a lot of helpful conversations and it was really great and very touching when people agreed to help me or to explain the steps in a process, for example, stages of the statement of claim.

So I had a lot of communicnversations, and it wasthey were really great and very touching, when people agreed to help me or explain something in steps in, you know, stages of the statement of claim. So I had a lot of conversations, and they were really great and very touching, when people agreed to help me or explain something in steps, you know, stages of the statement of claim.

I think conversations is the correct word to use here. Let me know if not!

So, I had a lot of communication and i. It was really great and very touching, when people agreed to help me or explained something of the steps in, you know, the stages of the statement of claim. So, I had a lot of communication. It was really great and very touching when people agreed to help me or explained some of the steps in the stages of the statement of claim.

I think this is better as two sentences. The "you know" is pretty conversational. I wasn't sure if "statement of claim" was a technical term so left it alone, but there might be a better way of phrasing this.

And we ate souch tasty food, it was awesome. And we ate such tasty food, it was awesome.

And we ate souch tasty food, it was awesome. And we ate such tasty food, it was awesome.

And we ate so much/such tasty food, it was awesome. And we ate so much/such tasty food, it was awesome.

I really like to be in a lifhave conversations with people. I really like to have conversations with people.

I really like to be in a lifve conversation with people. I really like to be in a live conversation with people.

I really like to be in a have real-life conversation with people. I really like to have real-life conversation with people.

I wasn't sure what you meant by this, face-to-face?

And it is fFunnily, but at the another side I had a lot of troublesI had more trouble once I left the court! Funnily, I had more trouble once I left the court!

And it is funny, but aton the another side ? I had a lot of troubles! And it is funny, but on the other side ? I had a lot of troubles!

Make sure you specify what you are on the other side of!

And it is funny, but aton the another sidehand I had a lot of troubles! And it is funny, but on the other hand I had a lot of troubles!

I wasn't sure what you meant here, did you mean after the conversation you had difficulties?

Then onea woman on the cafe, who works there, said me that supwho works at the cafe told me that the soup I ordered is vegetarian (I am vegetarian, it’so this is important value to me). Then a woman who works at the cafe told me that the soup I ordered is vegetarian (I am vegetarian, so this is important to me).

Then one woman oin the cafe, who works there, said to me that sthe soup is vegetarian (I am vegetarian, it’s an important value to me). Then one woman in the cafe, who works there, said to me that the soup is vegetarian (I am vegetarian, it’s an important value to me).

I think you mean to say 'soup' but let me know if not!

Then one woman on the cafe, who works there, saicafe worker told me that the soup iwas vegetarian (I am vegetarian, it’s an important value to/for me). Then one cafe worker told me that the soup was vegetarian (I am vegetarian, it’s an important value to/for me).

This flows a little better

But when I taken this, I saw… I saw skin ofook the soup, I looked and saw chicken skin. But when I took the soup, I looked and saw chicken skin.

But when I taken thisbegan to eat it/drink it, I saw… I saw skin of chicken skin. But when I began to eat it/drink it, I saw… I saw chicken skin.

For any food item, use the verbs 'to eat' or 'to drink'. For soup, you can use both!

But when I taken thisook the soup, I saw… I saw skin of(some) chicken skin. But when I took the soup, I saw… I saw (some) chicken skin.

ButSo I just ate mashed potatoes (I ordered thisat too) and left this place without thoughts about repeat visitvowing not to eat there again. So I just ate mashed potatoes (I ordered that too) and left vowing not to eat there again.

But I justI also ate mashed potatoes (I ordered this too) and left thise place without thoughts about repeat visitinking I would come back. I also ate mashed potatoes (I ordered this too) and left the place without thinking I would come back.

You can help your story by adding in why you didn't like the mashed potatoes!

But I just ate mashed potatoes (I ordered this too) and left this place without thoughts about repeat visit. But I just ate mashed potatoes (I ordered this too) and left this place without thoughts about repeat visit.

or "I just ate the mashed potatoes I had ordered" or "left this place, deciding not to visit again".

Then onedirt from a car got dirtyon my jeans. Then dirt from a car got on my jeans.

Then onea car got dirty my jeans dirty. Then a car got my jeans dirty.

What you wrote isn't wrong, 'a' is just better than 'one' here!

Then one car got dirty my jeans dirty. Then one car got my jeans dirty.

Afterwards, when I set atat in the taxi on my way to my office and relaxed (I thought I had finished), my coworker rememberinded me about one somethings… I forgot to take a document that confirmsing the fact they taken my request for the courtat the court received my documents! Afterwards, when I sat in the taxi on my way to my office and relaxed (I thought I had finished), my coworker reminded me about something… I forgot to take a document confirming the fact that the court received my documents!

After, when I set agot the taxi to my office and relaxed (I thought I was finished), my coworker rememberinded me about one things… I forgot to take a document that confirms the fact they takenat they took my request for the court! After, when I got the taxi to my office and relaxed (I thought I was finished), my coworker reminded me about one thing… I forgot to take a document that confirms the fact that they took my request for the court!

After, when I set atwas in the taxi to my office and relaxed (I thought I was/had finished), my coworker rememberinded me about one things… I forgot to take a document that confirms the fact theyat they had taken my request for the court! After, when I was in the taxi to my office and relaxed (I thought I was/had finished), my coworker reminded me about one thing… I forgot to take a document that confirms the fact that they had taken my request for the court!

or "I forgot to take a receipt for my court request".

I needehad to return back. I had to turn back.

I needed to return back. I needed to return.

You can either say 'return' or 'go back'!

So I got to the office ato the end of the work day. So I got to the office at the end of the work day.

So I got to the office ato the end of the work day. So I got to the office at the end of the work day.

So I got to the office ato the end of the work day. So I got to the office at the end of the work day.

The story didn’t endwasn't over. The story wasn't over.

The story didn’oesn't end. The story doesn't end.

Since you are telling the story NOW, it's best to use the present tense!

We talked a lot, we spent a nice timenight together. We talked a lot, we spent a nice night together.

We talked a lot, we spenthad a nice time. We talked a lot, we had a nice time.

We talked a lot, we spenthad a nice time. We talked a lot, we had a nice time.

Now I’m going to home by am on my way home via the subway. Now I am on my way home via the subway.

Now, I’m going to home by subway. Now, I’m going home by subway.

Now, I’m going to home by subway. Now, I’m going home by subway.

I am tired a little bit, but I am'm a bit tired, but very happy. I'm a bit tired, but very happy.

I am tired a little bit tired, but I am very happy. I am a little bit tired, but I am very happy.

I am tired a little bit tired, but I am very happy. I am a little bit tired, but I am very happy.

I’m sure that all situations, all tasknd life's wchat life gives to us isllenges are useful, is and good for us. I’m sure that all situations and life's challenges are useful and good for us.

I’'m sure that all situations, all tasks what life gives to us is useful, isare good for us. I'm sure that all situations life gives to us are good for us.

A great idiom/phrase is 'What doesn't kill you makes you stronger'!

I’m sure that all situations, all the tasks wthat life gives to us isare useful, is and good for us. I’m sure that all situations, all the tasks that life gives to us are useful and good for us.

The whole world has a plan tofor us, and it is very personal plan. The whole world has a plan for us, and it is very personal plan.

The whole world has a plan tofor us, and it is a very personal plan. The whole world has a plan for us, and it is a very personal plan.

The whole world has a plan tofor us, and it is a very personal plan. The whole world has a plan for us, and it is a very personal plan.

I feel like I’m on the right path and I’m on the safe. I feel like I’m on the right path and I’m safe.

I feel like I’m on the right path and I’m on the safe one/I'm safe. I feel like I’m on the right path and I’m on the safe one/I'm safe.

I feel like I’m on the right path and I’m on the safe route / I'm safe. I feel like I’m on the right path and I’m on the safe route / I'm safe.

I think, the key of my life isis the people surrounding me. I think the key is the people surrounding me.

I think, the key of my life is the people that surrounding me. I think the key of my life is the people that surround me.

You can’t imagine, but I haveI struggles with communication, and I need to make an efforts, but it's worths it. I struggle with communication, and I need to make an effort, but it's worth it.

You can’t imagine, but I have struggles with communication, I need to make an efforts, but it's worths it. You can’t imagine, but I have struggles with communication, I need to make an effort, but it's worth it.

You can’might not imagine it, but I have struggles with communication, - I need to make an efforts, but it is worths it. You might not imagine it, but I have struggles with communication - I need to make an effort, but it is worth it.

Sometimes I feel like no one need tos me. Sometimes I feel like no one needs me.

Sometimes, I feel like no one need tos me. Sometimes, I feel like no one needs me.

Sometimes, I feel like no one need tos me. Sometimes, I feel like no one needs me.

But I still go in thethrough life connectiong with people, and thereat is my treatmentward. But I still go through life connecting with people, and that is my reward.

But I still go ion thein life c. Connection with people, and there is my treatment. But I still go on in life. Connection with people is my treatment.

But I still go in the lifeforward in life building connections with people, and there is my treatment - this is my solution/approach/attitude. But I still go forward in life building connections with people - this is my solution/approach/attitude.

I didn't understand this sentence - this is what I thought you might mean.

Move forward, take the first step, and open your heart to this world and its opportunities. Move forward, take the first step, and open your heart to this world and its opportunities.

Move forward, take the first step and open your heart to this world and opportunities. Move forward, take the first step and open your heart to this world and opportunities.

Move forward, take the first step, and open your heart to this world and opportunities. Move forward, take the first step, and open your heart to this world and opportunities.

or "have an open heart"