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Has Anything Made Your Heart Skip a Beat Recently?

When I slept in the train the other day because I was very tired, I felt something in my face. I woke up with wondering and realized that a baby sitting next me touched my cheek. My exhaustion was blown away!

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Has Anything Made Your Heart Skip a Beat Recently?

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I woke up with wondering and realized that a baby sitting next me touched my cheek.


I woke up with wondering and realized that a baby was sitting next me. The baby touched my cheek. I woke up wondering and realized that a baby was sitting next me. The baby touched my cheek.

I woke up with wonderingconfused and realized that athe baby sitting next me, touched my cheek.! I woke up confused and realized that the baby sitting next me, touched my cheek!

Is "wondering" a person? A noun? Or are you trying to say an emotion?

I woke up with wondering and realized that a baby sitting next me touched my cheek. I woke up wondering and realized that a baby sitting next me touched my cheek.

{I woke up with wondering what had touched me | I startled awake} and realized that a baby sitting next meto me had touched my cheek. {I woke up wondering what had touched me | I startled awake} and realized that a baby sitting next to me had touched my cheek.

My exhaustion was blown away!


My exhaustion was blown away! My exhaustion was blown away!

Not sure what you mean by 'exhaustion' in this case. Maybe you are trying to say 'My expectation was blown away!'

My exhaustionI was blown away! I was blown away!

or "I was shocked", "I was so surprised", "I was dumbfounded"

My exhaustion was blown awayevaporated! My exhaustion evaporated!

Has Anything Made Your Heart Skip a Beat Recently?


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When I slept in the train the other day because I was very tired, I felt something in my face.


WThe other day, when I slept ion the train the other day because I was very tired,. I felt something ion my face. The other day, when I slept on the train because I was very tired. I felt something on my face.

W The other day, when I slept in the train the other day because I was very tired, I felt something in my face. The other day, when I slept in the train, I felt something in my face.

Sleeping because your are tired sounds repetitive. It could be assumed that your are sleeping because you are tired so delete

When I slept iile I was sleeping on the train the other day because I was very tired, I felt something ion my face. While I was sleeping on the train the other day because I was very tired, I felt something on my face.

When I I fell asleept i on the train the other day because I was very tired, and I felt something touching my face. I fell asleep on the train the other day because I was very tired and I felt something touching my face.

I fell asleep

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