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I like to watch series in the night yesterday I watched Malcolm in the Middle and in general I liked the new chapters but I think the old chapters are better than the new ones because some topics are different but I appreciate the general idea . This night I will see a chapter of One piece and I hope the chapter will be good as the manga but I know there are some effects that are difficult to copy in the real life . However it will be my first episode.


A mí me gusta mirar series en la noche ayer mire Malcolm in the Middle y en general me gustaron los nuevos capítulos pero pienso que los capítulos viejos eran mejores que los nuevos porque algunos temas eran diferentes pero aprecié la idea general.Esta noche miraré un capítulo de One Piece y espero que el capítulo sea bueno como el manga pero se que hay algunos efectos difíciles de copiar en la vida real .De cualquier forma va a hacer mi primer episodio.

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Thanks for your correction.!!

However it will be my first episode.

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I like to watch series in the night yesterday I watched Malcolm in the Middle and in general I liked the new chapters but I think the old chapters are better than the new ones because some topics are different but I appreciate the general idea .


I like to watch series in the night y. Yesterday I watched Malcolm in the Middle and in general I liked the new chapterepisodes but I think the old chapterepisodes are better than the new ones because some topics are different but I appreciate the general idea . I like to watch series in the night. Yesterday I watched Malcolm in the Middle and in general I liked the new episodes but I think the old episodes are better than the new ones because some topics are different but I appreciate the general idea.

I like to watch series in theTV shows at night y. Yesterday I watched 'Malcolm in the Middle', and in general I liked the new chaptersepisodes, but I think the old chapterepisodes are better than the new ones because some topicsbecause some (plot points/themes) are different, but I appreciate the general idea . I like to watch TV shows at night. Yesterday I watched 'Malcolm in the Middle', and in general I liked the new episodes, but I think the old episodes are better because some (plot points/themes) are different, but I appreciate the general idea.

"TV show" is the more natural way to refer to them. "Series" could be anything from books to film series', but I wouldn't really use it on its own. Maybe you could say "TV series" but "TV show" is better. This is a run-on sentence, so you need to break it up with punctuation and split it into smaller sentences. Titles of media should be in italics or quotes to help distinguish them. TV shows are made of episodes-- "chapters" are in books. Plot point: an event in a story. Theme: ideas the story explores, eg. the importance of family, the power of love etc.

This night I will see a chapter of One piece and I hope the chapter will be good as the manga but I know there are some effects that are difficult to copy in the real life .


This night I will see a chaptern episode of One piece and I hope the chapterepisode will be good as the manga but I know there are some effects that are difficult to copy in the real life . This night I will see an episode of One piece and I hope the episode will be good as the manga but I know there are some effects that are difficult to copy in real life.

This onight, I will see a chapter'll watch an episode of 'One pPiece and'. I hope the chapter wiit'll be good as the manga, but I know there are some effects that are difficult to copy in thereproduce in real life . Tonight, I'll watch an episode of 'One Piece'. I hope it'll be good as the manga, but I know there are some effects that are difficult to reproduce in real life.

"This night" sounds like Shakespeare's writing lol. "Watch" is used for films/TV. You can use "see" if you're seeing a movie in the cinemas, but otherwise you should use "watch". I added contractions (eg. "I'll") because it sounds more natural. The full stop (.) should come right after a word with no space.

However it will be my first episode.


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However it wiIt'll be my first episodetime watching the show. It'll be my first time watching the show.

I removed "however" because this statement didn't contradict anything in the last sentence.

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