Sept. 28, 2022
An email: A homework project (details in notes)
Dear Jan,
I am Zeya, recently I was drawing a poster for a homework project. It takes me a long time and I meet some problems about design. So I write this email to you to request your help.
My poster is about being happiness without money, now I am confusing which words format and what kind of picture should I post in the poster.
You are a creative and experienced person, I believe you can help me with your wisdom.
I am free all this week for making this poster. Would you mind to have a meet with me in this week if you are free too. I hope I can do it under your guidance.
Best regards,
Yours
Zeya
You need some help with a poster you have to design for a homework project.
Write an email to your English friend, Jan. In your email:
say what your poster is about
explain how Jan can help you
suggest when you can meet.
Write your email in about 100 words
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An email: A homework project (details in notes)
Dear Jan,
I am Zeya, and recently I was drawing a poster for a homework project.
I am Zeya and recently I was drawing a poster for a homework project.
It takesook me a long time and I meethad some problems aboutwith the design.
It took me a long time and I had some problems with the design.
So I am writeing this email to you to request your help.
So I am writing this email to you to request your help.
My poster is about being happinessy without money, now. I am confusinged on which words, format and what kind of picture I should I post idraw/ include on the poster.
My poster is about being happy without money. I am confused on which words, format and what kind of picture I should I draw/ include on the poster.
You are a creative and experienced person, I believe you can help me with your wisdomsage advice.
You are a creative and experienced person, I believe you can help me with your sage advice.
I am free all this week for makingto draw this poster.
I am free all this week to draw this poster.
Would you mind to have a meet with me in this week if you are free tooIf you are free, would you be able to meet me this week.
If you are free, would you be able to meet me this week.
I hope I can do it under your guidance( with your help). I hope I can do it under your guidance( with your help).
Best regards,
Yours
Zeya
Sept. 29, 2022
Thank you！
It takeshas been taking me a long time and I meet some problems about designwith the design because of some problems I've been having.
It has been taking me a long time with the design because of some problems I've been having.
Or you can say, I have been met with some problems.
My poster is about being happinessy without money, now. I am confusing whiched about the words format and what kind of pictures I should I postuse in the poster.
My poster is about being happy without money. I am confused about the word format and what kind of pictures I should use in the poster.
I am free all this week for making this poster.
I am free all this week.
You can cut out the usage of the world [poster], since it is already clear what the subject is about. Or you can use [it] instead.
WIf you are fee, would you mind to have a meeting with me in this week if you are free too.?
If you are fee, would you mind meeting with me this week?
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Overall I understood everything you were trying to say, and that's really important. The little errors didn't stop you from getting your point across.
Sept. 29, 2022
Thank you for encouraging!
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I am Zeya, recently I was drawing a poster for a homework project.
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My poster is about being happiness without money, now I am confusing which words format and what kind of picture should I post in the poster.
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You are a creative and experienced person, I believe you can help me with your wisdom.
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I am free all this week for making this poster.
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Would you mind to have a meet with me in this week if you are free too.
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I hope I can do it under your guidance. I hope I can do it under your guidance( with your help). I hope I can do it under your guidance( with your help). |
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