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Ron´s first wand
¡Hi, good day¡. Today, I put a recommendation into practice, called: Shadowing.
it´s truly was better, I understood the greater part.
Ron and his family were excited. They arrive at Diagon Alley, went to Ollivender´s Wand Shop. The shop was small and quit. Mr. Ollivender was an old man witch silver hair and bright eyes. Ron tried a wand, but a candle exploded. "Oh dear" said Mr. Ollivender, "Not that one, we need something better". Ron tried many wand, but any seemed to be adequate. Ron sighed;" Maybe, no wand likes me". Mr. Ollivender said "Nonsense, the wand chooses the wizard". Finally, we found the right one. It was tiny and loyal. On Monday, he would start his life as a wizard at Hogwarts. So, he picked out the wand and held it tight. He wanted to try a few simple spell, Nothing bag. At dinner the family was talked about Hogwarts, and he imagined learning more spells. Hia heart felt full and this time, it´s truly was only the beginning.
Ron´s fFirst wWand
Ron and his family were excited.
They arrived at Diagon Alley, and went to Olliveander´s Wand Shop.
The shop was small and quiet.
Mr. Olliveander was an old man witch silver hair and bright eyes.
"Oh dear" said Mr. Ollivender, "Not that one, we need something better".
Ron tried many wands, but anynone seemed to be adequate.
Mr. Ollivender said "Nonsense, the wand chooses the wizard".
Finally, we found the right one.
It was tiny and loyal.
On Monday, he would start his life as a wizard at Hogwarts.
So, he picked outup the wand and held it tight.
At dinner the family was talked about Hogwarts, and he imagined learning more spells.
¡Hi, good day¡.!
Today, I put a recommendation into practice, called: S shadowing.
it´It was truly was better, and I understood the greater parmost of it.
They arrived at Diagon Alley, and went to Ollivender´s Wand Shop.
The shop was small and quiet.
Mr. Ollivender was an old man witch silver hair and bright eyes.
Ron tried many wands, but anynone seemed to be adequate.
Ron sighed;,"
Maybe, no wand likes me".
Mr. Ollivender said "Nonsense, the wand chooses the wizard".
Finally, whe found the right one.
It was tiny and loyal.
So, he picked outup the wand and held it tight.
He wanted to try a few simple spells,
Nnothing bag.ig
At dinner, the family was talked about Hogwarts, and he imagined learning more spells.
Hias heart felt full and this time, it´s truly was only the beginning.
yesterday
Good attempt, only be cautious of the spellings
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Ron´s first wand Ron´s |
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¡Hi, good day¡.
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Today, I put a recommendation into practice, called: Shadowing. Today, I put a recommendation into practice |
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it´s truly was better, I understood the greater part.
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Ron and his family were excited. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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They arrive at Diagon Alley, went to Ollivender´s Wand Shop. They arrived at Diagon Alley They arrived at Diagon Alley |
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The shop was small and quit. The shop was small and quiet. The shop was small and quiet. |
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Mr. Ollivender was an old man witch silver hair and bright eyes. Mr. Ollivender was an old man wit Mr. Olliv |
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Ron tried a wand, but a candle exploded. |
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"Oh dear" said Mr. Ollivender, "Not that one, we need something better". This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Ron tried many wand, but any seemed to be adequate. Ron tried many wands, but Ron tried many wands, but |
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Ron sighed;" Ron sighed |
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Maybe, no wand likes me". Maybe |
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Mr. Ollivender said "Nonsense, the wand chooses the wizard". Mr. Ollivender said "Nonsense, the wand chooses the wizard". This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Finally, we found the right one. Finally, This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It was tiny and loyal. It was tiny and loyal. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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On Monday, he would start his life as a wizard at Hogwarts. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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So, he picked out the wand and held it tight. So, he picked So, he picked |
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He wanted to try a few simple spell, He wanted to try a few simple spells, |
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Nothing bag.
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At dinner the family was talked about Hogwarts, and he imagined learning more spells. At dinner, the family At dinner the family |
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Hia heart felt full and this time, it´s truly was only the beginning. Hi |
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