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greeeeeen_tea

July 4, 2021

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What is something that you believed as a kid that you learned was wrong later in life?
What I believed as a kid

When I was a young boy, I thought that every adult is complete. For example, I thought that all of what my parents said is right, all of what my teachers taught me is the answer, and all of what adults do is absolute. But as I grow up, I came to realize that it is fault gradually.
I don't intend to look down adults. I just feel how difficult it is to become a perfect person. There are many problems which don't have the definite answer, and we often have to try to solve those kinds of problems. Through my teenager life, I found the truth and now I have a bit fear to go out into society. But time goes on, and I have to move forward.

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What I believed as a kid

When I was a young boy, I thought that every adult is complete.

When I was a young boy, I thought that every adult iwas complete. When I was a young boy, I thought that every adult was complete.

For example, I thought that all of what my parents said is right, all of what my teachers taught me is the answer, and all of what adults do is absolute.

But as I grow up, I came to realize that it is fault gradually.

I don't intend to look down adults.

I just feel how difficult it is to become a perfect person.

There are many problems which don't have the definite answer, and we often have to try to solve those kinds of problems.

Through my teenager life, I found the truth and now I have a bit fear to go out into society.

Throughout my teenager life, I found the truth and am now I have a bit fearful to go out into society. Throughout my teenage life, I found the truth and am now a bit fearful to go out into society.

But time goes on, and I have to move forward.

But as time goes on, and I have to move forward. But as time goes on, I have to move forward.

This is just my recommendation. The way you wrote the sentence makes sense and is correct but it just doesn't sound right to me. (This is just my opinion)

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