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Have people lost their reading habits within the past ten years? As far as I remember, over one third of passengers used to read books while their commutes fifteen years ago. At that time, I was also obsessed with science books and put a lot of time into reading books. However, we find ourselves wasting our time fiddling with smartphones lately.
A large number of bookstores has been disappeared due to the lack of demands and the emergence of online shopping. Our physical bookstore experiences are at stake now. I found myself being likely to choose practical books not based on my preference, but on someone's review. Online bookstores visualize how the book is interesting or useful for our daily life. We learnt to avoid killing time by boring books and might lose authentic book experiences instead.

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I fouind myself beingmore likely to choose practical books not based on my own preference, but rather on someone's review.

I'm not sure what you mean by "practical" here

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Online bookstores visualize how the book is interesting or useful for our daily life.

I'm not sure what you mean by "visualize" here

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Have people lost their reading habits within the past ten years?


Have people lost their reading habits within habit of reading over the past ten years? Have people lost the habit of reading over the past ten years?

Have people lost their reading habits withinover the past ten years? Have people lost their reading habits over the past ten years?

Have people lost their reading habits within the past ten years? Have people lost their reading habits within the past ten years?

Alt: Have people lost interest in reading over the past ten years?

As far as I remember, over one third of passengers used to read books while their commutes fifteen years ago.


As far as I remember, over one third of passengers used to read books whileduring their commutes fifteen years ago. As far as I remember, over one third of passengers used to read books during their commute fifteen years ago.

As far as I remember, over one third of passengers used to read books whileduring their commutes fifteen years ago. As far as I remember, over one third of passengers used to read books during their commutes fifteen years ago.

As far as I can remember, over one third of the passengers used to read books whileduring their commutes fifteen years ago. As far as I can remember, over one third of the passengers used to read books during their commute.

Alt: For as long as I remember, "As far as I remember" feels redundant when used with "fifteen years ago." Personally, I would only keep one or the other.

At that time, I was also obsessed with science books and put a lot of time into reading books.


At that time, I was also obsessed with science books and put a lot of time into reading booksthem. At that time, I was obsessed with science books and put a lot of time into reading them.

At that time, I was also obsessed with science books and had put a lot of time into reading books. At that time, I was also obsessed with science books and had put a lot of time into reading books.

At that time, I was also obsessed with science books and put a lot of time into reading books. At that time, I was obsessed with science books and put a lot of time into reading.

"Also" makes sense only if you were also talking about science books in the previous sentence. Deleted the second "books" because of repetitiveness.

However, we find ourselves wasting our time fiddling with smartphones lately.


However, in recent years, we find ourselves wasting our time fiddling with our smartphones lately. However, in recent years, we find ourselves wasting our time fiddling with our smartphones.

HoweverLately, we find ourselves wasting our time by fiddling with smartphones lately. Lately, we find ourselves wasting time by fiddling with smartphones.

A large number of bookstores has been disappeared due to the lack of demands and the emergence of online shopping.


A large number of bookstores has beenve disappeared due to the lack of demands and the emergence of online shopping. A large number of bookstores have disappeared due to lack of demand and the emergence of online shopping.

A large number of bookstores has been disappeared due to the lack of demands and the emergence of online shopping. A large number of bookstores has been disappeared due to the lack of demand and the emergence of online shopping.

A large number of bookstores has been disappeared dDue to the lack of demands and the emergence of online shopping, a large number of bookstores has disappeared. Due to the lack of demand and the emergence of online shopping, a large number of bookstores has disappeared.

Alt: Due to the lack of demand as well as the emergence of online shopping

Our physical bookstore experiences are at stake now.


Our physical bookstore experiences are now at stake now. Our physical bookstore experiences are now at stake.

Our physical bookstore experiences are now at stake now. Our physical bookstores are now at stake.

I found myself being likely to choose practical books not based on my preference, but on someone's review.


I fouind myself beingmore likely to choose practical books not based on my own preference, but rather on someone's review. I find myself more likely to choose practical books not based on my own preference, but rather on someone's review.

I'm not sure what you mean by "practical" here

I foundbase my self being likely to choose practicalection of books not based on my preference, but on someone's review.someone else's review rather than my actual preferences I base my selection of books based on someone else's review rather than my actual preferences

I found myself beingmore and more likely to choose practical books not based not on my preference, but on someone's review instead. I found myself more and more likely to choose books based not on my preference, but on someone's review instead.

Online bookstores visualize how the book is interesting or useful for our daily life.


Online bookstores visualize how the book is interesting or useful for our daily life. Online bookstores visualize how the book is interesting or useful for our daily life.

I'm not sure what you mean by "visualize" here

Online bookstores try to visualize how the book ismight be interesting or useful for our daily life. Online bookstores try to visualize how the book might be interesting or useful for our daily life.

We learnt to avoid killing time by boring books and might lose authentic book experiences instead.


We have learnt to avoid killing time bywith boring books and might, but we risk looseing authentic bookreading experiences insteadas a result. We have learnt to avoid killing time with boring books, but we risk loosing authentic reading experiences as a result.

We learnt to avoid killing time bywith boring books and might loose authentic book experiences instead. We learn to avoid killing time with boring books and might loose authentic book experiences instead.

While we learnt to avoid killing time by boring books and, we might loseend up losing authentic bookreading experiences instead. While we learn to avoid boring books, we might end up losing authentic reading experiences.

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