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Ron and Ginny Get Revenge
Ginny and Ron were angry, she was not trying to hide it, although, he was only tired. Now his both are purple when in the morning they were brown. Ronan Ginny sat together at the small common room staring into the fire. Then, they both smiled and said "Revenge". First, they covered the cockies with pepper, but George snapped his fingers. The cookies jumped of the plate, grew tiny legs, and ran around the room. "We always know", said George and Fred. Lather, they covered the stairs whit a magical soapy rung. Although George and Fred, noticed it. George waved his wand and the rung turned into colorful flowers. As only last try, Ron and Ginny used magic to hold heavy bucket of water. The door opened, Fred moved his wand, the water fell all over Ginny and Ron. Finally, they both were wet, cold, and exhausted, so they accepted their lost. But it was funny trying.
Sorry for my mistakes but I don't know; why It´s difficult for me write or formulate ideas.
Ron and Ginny Get Revenge
Ginny and Ron were angry, she was not trying to hide it, although, he was only tir Ron tried.
*Do you mean that Ron tried to hide his anger?
Now his both his __?___ are purple when in the morning they were brown.
You'll need to say what is purple. Both his ______ are purple...
Ron and
Ginny sat together at the small common room staring into the fire.
Then, they both smiled and said "Revenge".
First, they covered the cocokies with pepper, but George snapped his fingers.
The cookies jumped of the plate, grew tiny legs, and ran around the room.
"We always know"," said George and Fred.
*put the comma inside the quotations
Lather, they covered the stairs whith a magical soapy ruing(?).
Although George and Fred, noticed it.
no comma
George waved his wand and the rung(?) turned into colorful flowers.
ring (?)
As onlya last try, Ron and Ginny used magic to hold a heavy bucket of water.
The door opened, Fred moved his wand, and the water fell all over Ginny and Ron.
Finally, they both were wet, cold, and exhausted, so they accepted theirat they had lost.
But it was funny trying.
Sorry for my mistakes but I don't know; why
Iit´s difficult for me write or formulate ideas.
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Ginny and Ron were angry, she was not trying to hide it, although, he was only tired. Ginny and Ron were angry, she was not trying to hide it, although *Do you mean that Ron tried to hide his anger? |
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Now his both are purple when in the morning they were brown. Now You'll need to say what is purple. Both his ______ are purple... |
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Ronan Ron and |
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Ginny sat together at the small common room staring into the fire. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Then, they both smiled and said "Revenge". This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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First, they covered the cockies with pepper, but George snapped his fingers. First, they covered the co |
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The cookies jumped of the plate, grew tiny legs, and ran around the room. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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"We always know", said George and Fred. "We always know *put the comma inside the quotations |
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Lather, they covered the stairs whit a magical soapy rung. Lat |
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Although George and Fred, noticed it. Although George and Fred no comma |
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George waved his wand and the rung turned into colorful flowers. George waved his wand and the rung(?) turned into colorful flowers. ring (?) |
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As only last try, Ron and Ginny used magic to hold heavy bucket of water. As |
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The door opened, Fred moved his wand, the water fell all over Ginny and Ron. The door opened, Fred moved his wand, and the water fell all over Ginny and Ron. |
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Finally, they both were wet, cold, and exhausted, so they accepted their lost. Finally, they both were wet, cold, and exhausted, so they accepted th |
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But it was funny trying. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Sorry for my mistakes but I don't know; why Sorry for my mistakes but I don't know |
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It´s difficult for me write or formulate ideas.
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