Nov. 17, 2019
Shopping
Today I went shopping with my husband and son. We were looking for something for my husband’s birthday!
My son found a shop that my husband likes so much.
There was a cool backpack and my husband fell in love with it at first sight!
My son took it to a shop staff while saying “this is my dad’s birthday present!”
We all had fun the time :)
今日、私は夫と息子と一緒に買い物に行きました。夫の誕生日プレゼントを探していたのです。
息子が、夫の大好きなお店を見つけました。
私の夫は、かっこいいリュックに一目ぼれ！
息子が「お父さんの誕生日プレゼントです！」と言いながら、それをお店の人に持っていきました。
私たちみんなでいい時間を過ごしました。
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Shopping
Today I went shopping with my husband and son.
We were looking for something for my husband’s birthday!
There was a cool backpack and my husband fell in love with it at first sight!
Shopping
Today I went shopping with my husband and son.
We were looking for something for my husband’s birthday!
My son found a shop that my husband likes so muchreally liked.
My son found a shop that my husband really liked.
There was a cool backpack and my husband fell in love with it at first sight!
My son took it to a shop stafftaff member while saying “tThis is my dad’s birthday present!
My son took it to a staff member while saying “This is my dad’s birthday present!
'staff'は日本語と違って、必ず複数形です。単数形はstaff memberです。
We all had a fun the time :)
We all had a fun time :)
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I hope your husband enjoys (or enjoyed) his birthday!
Nov. 17, 2019
My son took it to a shop stafftaff member while saying “tThis is my dad’s birthday present!
'staff'は日本語と違って、必ず複数形です。単数形はstaff memberです。
Aaaaah I made this mistake again!!!
日本語での「スタッフ」で勘違いしてしまうんですよね😵気をつけます！
Nov. 17, 2019
Thank you so much for correction!
Yes, my husband really enjoyed his birthday with the new backpack ;)
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My son took it to a shop staff while saying “this is my dad’s birthday present!
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We all had fun the time :)
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