Oct. 2, 2025
I feel many sad for Rio. I Love my City, it's so pretty. But, on the last time her is very dungerous. He is the look terrible for us residents. Today I'm not go to my University, I have my class canceled for shootout between Police and Gang members. The Red comand are terrorizing the region for my University. The Federal University from Rio de Janeiro is the federal intitution most Renowded in Brasil. Howver we're hostages to fail justice and politic the my country. In the last days an reasercher discovered the soluction for the quadriplegia. This researcher and anothers were blockeds to went in the labaratory in UFRJ for theses criminals and for the fail Justice from Brazil.
Rio de Janeiro, the City Dua dangerous. city
Rio de Janeiro, a dangerous city
I feel many sad forabout Rio.
I feel many sad about Rio.
I Lovlobe my Ccity, it's so pretty.
I lobe my city, it's so pretty.
But, on the last time here it was very dungerous.
But the last time here it was very dungerous.
HeIt is the look terrible for us residents.
It is terrible for us residents.
Today I'm not going to my University, I have as my class has been cancelled for because of a shootout between Pthe police and Ggang members.
Today I'm not going to my University as my class has been cancelled because of a shootout between the police and gang members.
The Red comand are terrorizing the region foraround my Uuniversity.
The Red comand are terrorizing the region around my university.
The Ffederal University ofrom Rio de Janeiro is the federal institution the most Rrenowdned in Braszil.
The federal University of Rio de Janeiro is the institution the most renowned in Brazil.
However we're hostages to failed justice and the politic thes of my country.
However we're hostages to failed justice and the politics of my country.
In the last days, an reasearcher discovered the soluction for the quadriplegiac.
In the last days, a researcher discovered the solution for quadriplegic.
This researcher and anothers were blockeds to went in from going to the labaratory in UFRJ for theses criminals and for the fail Justice from Brazil.
This researcher and others were blocked from going to the labaratory in UFRJ for theses criminals and for the fail Justice from Brazil.
Rio de Janeiro, the City DuDangerous. City
Rio de Janeiro, the Dangerous City
Wrong spelling of dangerous, order should be changed
I feel many sad for Rio.
I feel sad for Rio.
Sadness is uncountable, so there should be no many.
I Llove my City, it's so pretty.
I love my City, it's so pretty.
Only the first teller of a sentence or a proper noun should be capitalised.
But, on the last time her ie was very duangerous.
But, the last time here was very dangerous.
On is useless, Not her, here. We are talking about the past so it should be was very dangerous.
He is theIt looks terrible for us residents.
It looks terrible for us residents.
I don't know what you are trying to say here.
Today, I'm not going to my University, I have my class canceled for a shootout between Police and Gang members. Today, I'm not going to my University, I have my class canceled for a shootout between Police and Gang members.
It is the present continuous tense, so not going is correct.
The Red command areis terrorizing the region ofor my Uuniversity.
The Red command is terrorizing the region of my university.
Wrong spelling of command, Since the command is only one, it should be is, not are
The Federal University ofrom Rio de Janeiro is the most renowned federal institution most Renowded in Braszil.
The Federal University of Rio de Janeiro is the most renowned federal institution in Brazil.
Not from, of because the university is a part of Rio. The word order should be changed. Spelling of Brazil is wrong
However, we're hostages tof failing justice and politic theizing of my country.
However, we're hostages of failing justice and politicizing of my country.
Not howver, however. Lots of changes between words.
In the last days, an reasearcher discovered the soluction for the quadriplegia.
In the last days, a researcher discovered the solution for the quadriplegia.
"Researcher" does not start with a vowel so an will not come, a will come. Not reasercher, it is researcher. Not soluction, solution.
This researcher and many others were blockeds to went from going into the labaoratory in UFRJ for theses criminals and for the failure of Justice fromin Brazil.
This researcher and many others were blocked from going into the laboratory in UFRJ for these criminals and for the failure of Justice in Brazil.
Many others fits better in this context. Blocked is nonfinite, so it does not change based on whether the subject is singular or plural, so it should be blocked. To went is wrong. Went is not an actual verb, it is the past form of go. And for many other reasons, from going is correct. Wrong spelling of laboratory. These is already plural so the s is useless. Not fail, failure if talking about in abstract form.
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You have many mistakes, like useless modifications, spelling errors, use of wrong prepositions, and many other grammar rules, and wrong order of many groups of words. I recommend Grammarly for improvement.
Rio de Janeiro, the City DuDangerous. City
Rio de Janeiro, the Dangerous City
Adjectives (dangerous) almost always come before the noun. No need for a period in the title
I feel manyso sad for Rio.
I feel so sad for Rio.
"Many" is for things that are countable
I Llove my Ccity, it's so pretty.
I love my city, it's so pretty.
The words love and city shouldn't be capitalized. For emphasis, you would add more words if needed (I really love my incredible city...)
But, on the last time her lately it is very duangerous.
But lately it is very dangerous.
He is theIt looks terrible for us residents.
It looks terrible for us residents.
He and she are almost always reserved for living things that can be gendered. Objects / non-living things use "it"
Today I'm not going to my Uuniversity, I hav because my classes were canceled fordue to a shootout between Pthe police and Ggang members.
Today I'm not going to my university because my classes were canceled due to a shootout between the police and gang members.
No need to capitalize university / police / gang
The Red coCommand are terrorizing the region for, including my Uuniversity.
The Red Command are terrorizing the region, including my university.
The Federal University ofrom Rio de Janeiro is the most renowned federal institution most Renowded in Braszil.
The Federal University of Rio de Janeiro is the most renowned federal institution in Brazil.
However, we're hostages to the failed justice and politic theal systems of my country.
However, we're hostages to the failed justice and political systems of my country.
In the last few days, an reasearcher has discovered the soluction for thea cure for quadriplegia.
In the last few days, a researcher has discovered a cure for quadriplegia.
You might add a very short description of this disease since it is relatively obscure
This researcher and anothers were blockeds to went in from going to the labaoratory in UFRJ forby theses criminals, and forom the fail Jed justice fromsystem in Brazil.
This researcher and others were blocked from going to the laboratory in UFRJ by theses criminals, and from the failed justice system in Brazil.
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Great job.
I'm really sorry about the violence and instability in Rio. I hope one day soon things are better.
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Today I'm not go to my University, I have my class canceled for shootout between Police and Gang members.
Today I'm not going to my No need to capitalize university / police / gang Today, I'm not going to my University, I have my class canceled for a shootout between Police and Gang members. Today, I'm not going to my University, I have my class canceled for a shootout between Police and Gang members. It is the present continuous tense, so not going is correct.
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The Federal University from Rio de Janeiro is the federal intitution most Renowded in Brasil.
The Federal University of
The Federal University of Not from, of because the university is a part of Rio. The word order should be changed. Spelling of Brazil is wrong
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Howver we're hostages to fail justice and politic the my country.
However, we're hostages to the failed justice and politic
However, we're hostages Not howver, however. Lots of changes between words.
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I feel many sad for Rio.
I feel "Many" is for things that are countable
I feel Sadness is uncountable, so there should be no many.
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I Love my City, it's so pretty.
I The words love and city shouldn't be capitalized. For emphasis, you would add more words if needed (I really love my incredible city...)
I Only the first teller of a sentence or a proper noun should be capitalised.
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Rio de Janeiro, the City Dungerous.
Rio de Janeiro, the Adjectives (dangerous) almost always come before the noun. No need for a period in the title
Rio de Janeiro, the Wrong spelling of dangerous, order should be changed
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But, on the last time her is very dungerous.
But
But, On is useless, Not her, here. We are talking about the past so it should be was very dangerous.
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He is the look terrible for us residents.
He and she are almost always reserved for living things that can be gendered. Objects / non-living things use "it"
I don't know what you are trying to say here.
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The Red comand are terrorizing the region for my University.
The Red
The Red command Wrong spelling of command, Since the command is only one, it should be is, not are
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This researcher and anothers were blockeds to went in the labaratory in UFRJ for theses criminals and for the fail Justice from Brazil.
This researcher and
This researcher and many others were blocked Many others fits better in this context. Blocked is nonfinite, so it does not change based on whether the subject is singular or plural, so it should be blocked. To went is wrong. Went is not an actual verb, it is the past form of go. And for many other reasons, from going is correct. Wrong spelling of laboratory. These is already plural so the s is useless. Not fail, failure if talking about in abstract form.
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In the last days an reasercher discovered the soluction for the quadriplegia.
In the last few days, a You might add a very short description of this disease since it is relatively obscure
In the last days, a "Researcher" does not start with a vowel so an will not come, a will come. Not reasercher, it is researcher. Not soluction, solution.
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