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I don't like sport, but I think that regular activity is necessary for physical and mental health. Especially, if you have a sedentary work, like me. For myself, I chose roller skating, it is a good hobby. Skating gives a necessary activity, also you can do various trick. It improve coordination and switch your brain from routine.

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I don't like sport, but I think that regular activity is necessary for physical and mental health.

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Titles are usually capitalized.

I don't like sport, but I think that regular activity is necessary for physical and mental health.


I don't like sport, but I think that regular activity is necessary for good physical and mental health. I don't like sport, but I think that regular activity is necessary for good physical and mental health.

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Especially, if you have a sedentary work, like me.


Especially, if you have a sedentary workjob, like me. Especially, if you have a sedentary job, like me.

Using the word 'job' in this context sounds more natural. In English, we don't say 'a work' unless 'work' is being used as an adjective, as in, 'a work party'. Instead we would say 'a job' or 'an occupation' among other terms. If you want to use 'work' in this context you could say, 'Especially, if you do sedentary work, like me.'

Especially, if you have a sedentary workjob, like me. Especially, if you have a sedentary job, like me.

Job makes more sense than work in this context "work" is more the place or verb rather than a thing you have work is the place you go to do your job

Especially, if you have a sedentary workjob, like me. Especially, if you have a sedentary job, like me.

Especially, if you have a sedentary workjob, like me. Especially, if you have a sedentary job, like me.

For myself, I chose roller skating, it is a good hobby.


For myself, I chosPersonally, I like roller skating, it is a good hobby. Personally, I like roller skating, it is a good hobby.

It is rare to see 'for myself' at the start of a sentence unless you have just referred to someone else's preferences for something in the previous sentence. Personally works better here. You could also say 'I choose to do roller skating' or 'I decided to take up skating'.

For myselfPersonally, I chose roller skating, i. It is a good hobby. Personally, I chose roller skating. It is a good hobby.

For myselfPersonally, I chose roller skating, it is a good hobby. Personally, I chose roller skating, it is a good hobby.

Skating gives a necessary activity, also you can do various trick.


Skating gives a necessary activity, alsoyou the physical activity you need and you can also do various tricks. Skating gives you the physical activity you need and you can also do various tricks.

Skating gives a necessary activity,provides the necessary exercise and also you can do various tricks. Skating provides the necessary exercise and also you can do various tricks.

"gives a necessary activity" just isn't a phrase that would be used in English because you are talking about "various" tricks you need to use the plural

Skating gives a necessary activityis a good way to get regular exercise, also you can do various tricks. Skating is a good way to get regular exercise, also you can do various tricks.

Skating givesis (?) a necessary activity, also you can do. You can perform various tricks as well. Skating is (?) a necessary activity. You can perform various tricks as well.

It improve coordination and switch your brain from routine.


It improves coordination and switches your brain from its routine. It improves coordination and switches your brain from its routine.

You could also say, 'and gives your brain a change from its routine'.

It improves coordination and switch your brain from routine. It improves coordination and switch your brain from routine.

To be honest, I don't know why it is "improves" rather than "improve" it just is Also i'm not quite sure what you mean by "switch your brain from routine." sorry

It improves coordination and switches your brain from its usual routine. It improves coordination and switches your brain from its usual routine.

It improves coordination and switches up your brain fromdaily routine. It improves coordination and switches up your daily routine.

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