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Titles follow special capitalization rules

When I coame back into France, Iit was like i forgoI left my soul in the Kiwi's country of the Kiwis. When I came back to France, it was like I left my soul in the country of the Kiwis.

When I coame back into France, It was like i forgoleft my soul in the Kiwi's country. When I came back to France, It was like i left my soul in the Kiwi's country.

At this moment, my first goal is to go againback, and ultimately to try to live there for the rest of my life. At this moment, my first goal is to go back, and ultimately to try to live there for the rest of my life.

This is to say that your current goal is to do another travel, but your overall goal is to move permanently (and maybe this won't be possible by the end of your travel stay)

At this moment, my first goal is to go again, andthen I will try to live there for the rest of my life. At this moment, my first goal is to go again, then I will try to live there for the rest of my life.

So, I will come(go back again/ return) next year for one year. So, I will (go back / return) next year for one year.

"Again" is redundant with "go back"

So, I will comego back again next year and stay for one year. So, I will go back again next year and stay for one year.

Maybe I'll refouind my soul. Maybe I'll refind my soul.

Maybe I'll refoufind my soul again. Maybe I'll find my soul again.

And I found a solutionway to stay more timelonger. And I found a way to stay longer.

Solutions are for problems, I would say "way" in this context

And I found a solution to stay more timefind a way to stay longer. And find a way to stay longer.

But if I don't try, iI will regret it. But if I don't try, I will regret it.

But if I don't try, i will regret it. But if I don't try, i will regret it.

Perhaps life will help me ! Perhaps life will help me!

There are no spaces before question or exclamation marks

However, I think iI'll passhave an amazing year in this country. However, I think I'll have an amazing year in this country.

However, I think i'll passhave an amazing year in this country. However, I think i'll have an amazing year in this country.

Hello,. My name is Zoé, and I have onea dream. Hello. My name is Zoé, and I have a dream.

Saying "one dream" is insisting on the fact that it is a singular dream.

Hello, My name is Zoé, and I have onea dream. Hello, My name is Zoé, and I have a dream.

It's my biggest dream, and maybe he'it will never become reality. It's my biggest dream, and maybe it will never become reality.

He/She is nearly always reserved for animals that can be defined as male/female

It's my biggest dream, and maybe he'it will never become a reality. It's my biggest dream, and maybe it will never become a reality.

But, I don't care. But I don't care.

I'm just going to try to realize it. I'm just going to try to realize it.

You could also say "make it a reality"

6Six years ago, I've been was in New-z Zealand for almost onea month. Six years ago, I was in New Zealand for almost a month.

Stylistic subject, but usually numbers 1 - 10 are preferred to be spelled out in writing. "I've been" is when you want to say that you were doing this in the past and are still doing so today - not for when it has already ended. Example: I've been studying art for six years = six years ago I began studying art, and I am still doing so today.

6 years ago, I've beenwas in New-zealand for almost one month. 6 years ago, I've was in New-zealand for almost one month.

And it was the best period inof my life. And it was the best period of my life.

And it was the best period inof my life. And it was the best period of my life.

I've met a lot of kind people, saw amazing landscapes and discovered a fantastic culture with the Maori. I met a lot of kind people, saw amazing landscapes and discovered a fantastic culture with the Maori.

I've met a lot of kind people, saw amazing landscapes and discovered a fantastic culture with the Maori. I've met a lot of kind people, saw amazing landscapes and discovered a fantastic culture with the Maori.

You could also say "the fantastic culture of the Maori"