At dusk, I am sitting on the top floor, and listening to a podcast. At dusk, I am sitting on the top floor, and listening to a podcast.

At dusk, I am sitting on the top floor, and listening to a podcast. At dusk, I am sitting on the top floor and listening to a podcast.

As the time goses by, it is gettings colder and colder. As the time goes by, it gets colder and colder.

As the time goses by, it is getting colder and colder. As time goes by, it is getting colder and colder.

Hence, I startI decide to check on my palants. I decide to check on my plants.

"Hence" is a bit formal here

Hence, I start to check my palants. Hence, I start to check my plants.

Then I go downstairs, standing i on the balcony, while stilland continue to listening to the paodcast. Then I go downstairs, stand on the balcony, and continue to listen to the podcast.

Some of the tenses here are a little off

Then I go downstairs, and standing i on the balcony, while still listening to the paodcast. Then I go downstairs and stand on the balcony, still listening to the podcast.

It is dark, but I choose not to turn on the lights. It is dark, but I choose not to turn on the lights.

It is dark, but I choose not to turn on the lights. It is dark, but I choose not to turn on the lights.

It is so silent outside, what Iall I can hear is the sounds from my headphones. It is so silent outside, all I can hear is the sound from my headphones.

It is so silent outside, what I; all I can hear is the sounds from my headphones. It is so silent outside; all I can hear is the sound from my headphones.

I feel tahat I'm overwhelming ined by the dark, andbut I feel fairly peaceful. I feel that I'm overwhelmed by the dark, but I feel fairly peaceful.

I feel tahat I'm overwhelming in the dark, and I feel fairly peaceful. I feel that I'm overwhelming in the dark, and I feel fairly peaceful.

I'm not sure what you are trying to say here.