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Feb. 20, 2026

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I see a plant, is perfect for me, like the sun in the morning or at the end of the day, is beutiful, and different for each other,I aks every day if i doing the things in correct way or maybe another that consume every drop of my energy like does the plant can feel something?,does the plant can see me?, I do not talk to the plant, maybe because it not hearing me, or because I'm feeling nervous and strange, but every day I'm trying to improve and be a different person, given that the natural acttitudes of the human is to talk and be comunicative, perhaps is the only way to support ourselfs.

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I see a plant, is perfect for me, like the sun in the morning or at the end of the day, is beautiful, and different for each other,

I'm not quite sure what you're trying to say here.

I aksk every day if i am doing the things inthe correct way or maybe another that consumes every drop of my energy like doescan the plant can feel something?,does can the plant can see me?, I do not talk to the plant, maybe because it does not hearing me, or because I'm feeling nervous and strange, but every day I'm trying to improve and be a different person, given that the natural acttitudes of the humans is to talk and be communicative,. perhaps is the only way to support ourselfves.

Typically the verbs "to do" (does" and "to be able to" (can) don't go in the same sentence. For example, you could say "It does not hear me" OR "It cannot hear me."

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It's not a real correction, but you put an accent instead of an apostrophe.

I see a plant, that is perfect for me, like the sun in the morning or at the end of the day,. It is beautiful, and different forom each other,

the first comma is not necessarily wrong, but I feel it more natural without it.

I also added the "that" because it serves as a conjunction: "I see a plant" is the subject, "is" is the verb and "perfect for me", the complement, "that" swoons it all together.

The sentence altogether is too long, so I parted it. Really no logical explanation, I like to keep it as an instinct, instead of really diving into the rules. I think it gets automatized with reading though, if you want to try.

I think you meant that different from each other, but I'm not sure enough to explain it.

I aksk myself every day if i am doing the things in a correct way or maybe in another one that consumes every drop of my energy like does: "Can the plant can feel something?,does", "Can the plant can see me?,". I do not talk to the plant, maybe because it is not hearing me, or because I'm feeling nervous and strange, but every day I'm trying to improve and to be a different person, and given that the natural acttitudes of thee of humans is to talk and be comunicative, perhaps this is the only way to supportstain ourselfves.

Ok, there's some things here:

1. I assumed that the questions were to yourself, this way, it is clearer if you add a "myself" there. If they were to plant, for example, you would need to add it there, so it made sense.

2. Putting "the" before "things" specifies it too much. It is more natural if you keep it without an article.

3. Another what? This part was a bit confusing. Another way? I put "or maybe in another one" because it felt more clear, but yet cohesive, without repeating "way".

4. I put a little punctuation around the questions so it would be less confusing. And I ended a sentence after the questions.

5. Although it is a a countinuous action, "every day I try" is more natural than "everyday I'm trying". Can't really explain it. It's just what people use, I guess.

6. You need to repeat the "to" in "I try to improve and to be a different person". Notice this correction, it's important.

7. Look, attitude feels weird there. I tried to replace it for something better fitting, but "nature" was the best I could find.

8. I felt like "sustain" explains better this last part. I feel like "support" is better used when the object is another person.

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I really liked correcting your text, it challenged my teaching abilities and it took quite a while. I hope it was useful. Keep your motivation up.

Correct me if you´d like it


Correct me if you´'d like it

It's not a real correction, but you put an accent instead of an apostrophe.

I see a plant, is perfect for me, like the sun in the morning or at the end of the day, is beutiful, and different for each other,


I see a plant, that is perfect for me, like the sun in the morning or at the end of the day,. It is beautiful, and different forom each other,

the first comma is not necessarily wrong, but I feel it more natural without it. I also added the "that" because it serves as a conjunction: "I see a plant" is the subject, "is" is the verb and "perfect for me", the complement, "that" swoons it all together. The sentence altogether is too long, so I parted it. Really no logical explanation, I like to keep it as an instinct, instead of really diving into the rules. I think it gets automatized with reading though, if you want to try. I think you meant that different from each other, but I'm not sure enough to explain it.

I see a plant, is perfect for me, like the sun in the morning or at the end of the day, is beautiful, and different for each other,

I'm not quite sure what you're trying to say here.

I aks every day if i doing the things in correct way or maybe another that consume every drop of my energy like does the plant can feel something?,does the plant can see me?, I do not talk to the plant, maybe because it not hearing me, or because I'm feeling nervous and strange, but every day I'm trying to improve and be a different person, given that the natural acttitudes of the human is to talk and be comunicative, perhaps is the only way to support ourselfs.


I aksk myself every day if i am doing the things in a correct way or maybe in another one that consumes every drop of my energy like does: "Can the plant can feel something?,does", "Can the plant can see me?,". I do not talk to the plant, maybe because it is not hearing me, or because I'm feeling nervous and strange, but every day I'm trying to improve and to be a different person, and given that the natural acttitudes of thee of humans is to talk and be comunicative, perhaps this is the only way to supportstain ourselfves.

Ok, there's some things here: 1. I assumed that the questions were to yourself, this way, it is clearer if you add a "myself" there. If they were to plant, for example, you would need to add it there, so it made sense. 2. Putting "the" before "things" specifies it too much. It is more natural if you keep it without an article. 3. Another what? This part was a bit confusing. Another way? I put "or maybe in another one" because it felt more clear, but yet cohesive, without repeating "way". 4. I put a little punctuation around the questions so it would be less confusing. And I ended a sentence after the questions. 5. Although it is a a countinuous action, "every day I try" is more natural than "everyday I'm trying". Can't really explain it. It's just what people use, I guess. 6. You need to repeat the "to" in "I try to improve and to be a different person". Notice this correction, it's important. 7. Look, attitude feels weird there. I tried to replace it for something better fitting, but "nature" was the best I could find. 8. I felt like "sustain" explains better this last part. I feel like "support" is better used when the object is another person.

I aksk every day if i am doing the things inthe correct way or maybe another that consumes every drop of my energy like doescan the plant can feel something?,does can the plant can see me?, I do not talk to the plant, maybe because it does not hearing me, or because I'm feeling nervous and strange, but every day I'm trying to improve and be a different person, given that the natural acttitudes of the humans is to talk and be communicative,. perhaps is the only way to support ourselfves.

Typically the verbs "to do" (does" and "to be able to" (can) don't go in the same sentence. For example, you could say "It does not hear me" OR "It cannot hear me."

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