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A challenge 04

First of all, I am not good at English. I also want to thank everyone for helping and correction me.

yesterday is the fourth day of my English and Spanish challenge. I studied tow English lessons and tow Spanish lessons. Then, I listened a part of book" Diary Of A Wimpy Kid" by Jeff Kinney, and I read it speak up.

In the afternoon yesterday, I felts a pain in my neck and a back, therefore, I hurry up to go to bed; I have a cervical hernia.

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A challenge 04


A cChallenge 04 Challenge 04

First of all, I am not good at English.


I also want to thank everyone for helping and correction me.


I also want to thank everyone for helping and correctiong me. I also want to thank everyone for helping and correcting me.

Correction is the change made, the act of making a correction (in the present tense) is called correcting.

I also want to thank everyone for helping and correctiong me. I want to thank everyone for helping and correcting me.

yesterday is the fourth day of my English and Spanish challenge.


yYesterday is the fourth day of my English and Spanish challenge. Yesterday is the fourth day of my English and Spanish challenge.

I think this was just a typo.

yYesterday iwas the fourth day of my English and Spanish challenge. Yesterday was the fourth day of my English and Spanish challenge.

You're talking about an event that happened in the past, so you must use the past tense. is -> was.

yesterday iwas the fourth day of my English and Spanish challenge. yesterday was the fourth day of my English and Spanish challenge.

I studied tow English lessons and tow Spanish lessons.


I studied twow English lessons and towo Spanish lessons. I studied two English lessons and two Spanish lessons.

same here (two=2)

I studied twow English lessons and tow Spanish lessons. I studied two English lessons and tow Spanish lessons.

typo

I studied twow English lessons and towo Spanish lessons. I studied two English lessons and two Spanish lessons.

Then, I listened a part of book" Diary Of A Wimpy Kid" by Jeff Kinney, and I read it speak up.


Then, I listened to a part of book" Diary Of A Wimpy Kid" by Jeff Kinney, and I read it speak up.out loud. Then I listened to a part of book" Diary Of A Wimpy Kid" by Jeff Kinney, and I read it out loud.

Then, I listened to a part of the book" Diary Of A Wimpy Kid" by Jeff Kinney, and I read it speak upout loud. Then, I listened to a part of the book" Diary Of A Wimpy Kid" by Jeff Kinney, and I read it out loud.

I think you meant read it out loud instead of "speak up".

Then, I listened to a part of book" Diary Of A Wimpy Kid" by Jeff Kinney, and I read it speak upout loud. Then, I listened to a part of book" Diary Of A Wimpy Kid" by Jeff Kinney, and I read it out loud.

In the afternoon yesterday, I felts a pain in my neck and a back, therefore, I hurry up to go to bed; I have a cervical hernia.


In theYesterday afternoon yesterday, I felts a pain in my neck and a back, therefore, I hurryied up to go to bed; I have a cervical hernia. Yesterday afternoon, I felt a pain in my neck and back, therefore, I hurried up to go to bed; I have a cervical hernia.

should be "hurried" because you are speaking in the past tense.

In the afternoon yesterday, I felts a pain in my neck and a back, therefore, I hurryied up to go to bed; I have a cervical hernia. In the afternoon yesterday, I felt a pain in my neck and a back, therefore, I hurried up to go to bed; I have a cervical hernia.

You're speaking in past tense so "felts" should be felt. Hurry should be in past tense.

In the afternoon yesterday, I felts a pain in my neck and a back, therefore,. I hurry upied to go to bed;. I have a cervical hernia. In the afternoon yesterday, I felt pain in my neck and back. I hurried to go to bed. I have a cervical hernia.

Therefore is too formal

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