Nov. 4, 2020
Looking forward to this Saturday
Another 3 days I should start work again.
I think my injured right lag is recover up to 70%.
So, on Friday I will insist the doctor to allow me start working!
This accident was happened at 21th Oct.
The lucky part is I didn’t hurt my bone only muscle area.
That also prove I am an old man now.
In my younger date may only take 4,5 days I will be completely heal.
Also, thanks to “generation” is change.
In the old date I may just stay at home do nothing.
Now, through the internet in last 2 weeks I already make few new friends.
Looking forward to actually meet them.
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LI'm looking forward to this Saturday
I'm looking forward to this Saturday
Another 3 days I should startand I will be working again.
Another 3 days and I will be working again.
I think my injured right lag ihas recovered up to 70%.
I think my injured right lag has recovered up to 70%.
So, on Friday I will insist theat my doctor to allows me to start working again!
So, on Friday I will insist that my doctor allows me to start working again!
ThisMy accident was happened at 21th Octon the 21th of October.
My accident happened on the 21th of October.
TheI'm lucky part is I didn’t hurt my bone only muscle area.that only my muscles got hurt and not my bones.
I'm lucky that only my muscles got hurt and not my bones.
ThatMy injury also proves that I am an old man now.
My injury also proves that I am an old man now.
In my younger date may only take 4,5 days I will beys, it used to take me only 4 to 5 days to completely heal.
In my younger days, it used to take me only 4 to 5 days to completely heal.
Also, thanks to the “generation” is change.
Also, thanks to the “generation” change.
I'm not sure what you mean by this, but grammatically it is fine.
In the old date I may justpast, I would stay at home and do nothing.
In the past, I would stay home and do nothing.
Now, throughanks to the internet in last 2 weeks I, I've already makede a few new friends. in the past two weeks.
Now, thanks to the internet, I've already made a few new friends in the past two weeks.
LI'm looking forward to actually meeting them in person.
I'm looking forward to meeting them in person.
Nov. 4, 2020
thanks to “generation” is change.
i try to say "old generation to new generation"
old generation no smart phone no internet, now (new generation it got all)
Nov. 4, 2020
I would say thanks to technological advances. To me, a generational change is caused by culture and ideas.
In another 3 days I should start work again. Or: Another 3 days until I should be able to start work again. In another 3 days I should start work again. Or: Another 3 days until I should be able to start work again.
I think my injured right laeg is recover up to 70%. recovered
I think my injured right leg is up to 70% recovered
"around 70% recovered" sounds a little more natural to me, but up to 70% also works
So, on Friday I will insist that the doctor to allow me start working!
So, on Friday I will insist that the doctor allow me start working!
This accident was happened aton 21th Oct.
This accident happened on 21th Oct.
The lucky part is I didn’t hurt my bones, only muscle area. The lucky part is I didn’t hurt my bones, only muscle area.
In my younger days ite may only take 4, or 5 days I willand I would be completely healed.
In my younger days it may only take 4 or 5 days and I would be completely healed.
In the old dateys, I may just stay at home doing nothing while injured.
In the old days, I may just stay at home doing nothing while injured.
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I couldn't quite understand what was meant by "Also, thanks to “generation” is change.". But otherwise everything was very easy to understand, and I just left some suggestions to make things sound a bit more natural.
Nov. 4, 2020
thanks to “generation” is change.
i try to say "old generation to new generation"
old generation no smart phone no internet, now (new generation it got all)
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Another 3 days I should start work again. In another 3 days I should start work again. Or: Another 3 days until I should be able to start work again. In another 3 days I should start work again. Or: Another 3 days until I should be able to start work again.
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I think my injured right lag is recover up to 70%.
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So, on Friday I will insist the doctor to allow me start working!
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The lucky part is I didn’t hurt my bone only muscle area. The lucky part is I didn’t hurt my bones, only muscle area. The lucky part is I didn’t hurt my bones, only muscle area.
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That also prove I am an old man now.
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In my younger date may only take 4,5 days I will be completely heal.
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