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SummerTeaWater

July 14, 2021

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Back Pain

I have had mild back pain since last week

When I took a certain pose, it was very painful.

So I went to a doctor and took a X-ray picture.

He said my back bone is not good because of bad posture.

He recommended to get physical therapies regularly.

As the doctor's advice, I have tried to do actions of physical therapies.

Moreover I try to learn how to get right postures on YouTube and follow to do them.

It is less painful than last week.

I hope my pain will be cured soon

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Back Pain

I have had mild back pain since last week

It is less painful than last week.

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SummerTeaWater

July 15, 2021

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Back Pain

I have had mild back pain since last week

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SummerTeaWater

July 15, 2021

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Back Pain

I have had mild back pain since last week

When I took a certain pose, it was very painful.

It is less painful than last week.

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SummerTeaWater

July 15, 2021

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Back Pain


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I have had mild back pain since last week


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When I took a certain pose, it was very painful.


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When I took amove in certain poseways, it wais very painful. When I move in certain ways, it is very painful.

When I tookdid a certain pose, it was very painful. When I did a certain pose, it was very painful.

So I went to a doctor and took a X-ray picture.


So I went to a doctor and tookhad an X-ray picture. So I went to a doctor and had an X-ray.

"I took an X-ray picture" - this sounds like you were the one operating the camera, standing behind the machine, taking an X-ray of someone else. The English term for this is "I had an X-ray taken/done" or just "I had an X-ray".

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So I went to a doctor and took asome X-ray pictures. So I went to a doctor and took some X-rays.

He said my back bone is not good because of bad posture.


He said my back bone is not good because of bad posture. He said my backbone is not good because of bad posture.

But a doctor would probably say "spine".

He said my back bone is not good because of badis sore as a result of poor posture. He said my back is sore as a result of poor posture.

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He recommended to get physical therapies regularly.


He recommended toI get physical therapiesy regularly. He recommended I get physical therapy regularly.

"therapy" is sort of uncountable in this sense. "physical therapies" sounds like a range of different types of therapy - "I have to undergo many different physical therapies each week - massage, stretching, exercise and yoga."

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He recommended to gethat I undergo physical therapiesy regularly. He recommended that I undergo physical therapy regularly.

As the doctor's advice, I have tried to do actions of physical therapies.


As the doctor's advicesed, I have tried to do actions of physical therapithe therapy exercises. As the doctor advised, I have tried to do the therapy exercises.

You could say "As it was the doctor's advice" or "As per the doctor's advice", but they're a bit awkward. "As the doctor's advice" sounds quite wrong to me. And "do the therapy exercises" is just a more natural rephrasing.

As per the doctor's adviceorder’s, I have tried to do actions ofstarted physical therapies.y. As per the doctor's order’s, I have started physical therapy.

AsPer the doctor's advice, I have tried to do actionvarious types of physical therapiesy. Per the doctor's advice, I have tried to do various types of physical therapy.

Moreover I try to learn how to get right postures on YouTube and follow to do them.


Moreover, I try to learn how to get the right postures on YouTube and follow the instructions to do them. Moreover, I try to learn how to get the right postures on YouTube and follow the instructions to do them.

Not clear what you're following. "I'm trying" or "I've been trying" would be a little more natural.

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Moreover, I try to learn how to get right postures on YouTube and follow to do themcorrect my posture by following videos on YouTube. Moreover, I try to learn how to correct my posture by following videos on YouTube.

It is less painful than last week.


It is less painful than lastmuch better this week. It is much better this week.

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I hope my pain will be cured soon


I hope my pain will be cured soon. I hope my pain will be cured soon.

I hope my painback will be curhealed soon. I hope my back will be healed soon.

I hope my pain will be curedgo away soon I hope my pain will go away soon

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