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galoarellano1987

Oct. 26, 2024

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My first day training with Sebas

As I have a child with Autism, today was the first day for traning with other persons with dissabilities.
In reality, I felt very nice, because I did the paper of assistent for my child.

We did a serie of exercises, at the beggining was some hard to do every action but as the minutes passed We improved each instruction the teacher gave us.

It was a funny time however in some ocations Sebastian became angry. Despite the Sebastian's behavior, he completed the order.

It was a great experience for us, and I hope this shared time every Saturday will becomesin a great habit for our lives.

Thanks for reading. (I feel happy)

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It was a funny time however in some ocations Sebastian became angry.


It was a funny time; however i, on some ocatcasions Sebastian became angry. It was a fun time; however, on some occasions Sebastian became angry.

Funny = humorous while fun = enjoyable

It was a funny time however iwhen on some ocatcasions Sebastian became angry. It was a funny time however when on some occasions Sebastian became angry.

Despite the Sebastian's behavior, he completed the order.


Despite the Sebastian's behavior, he completed the order.assignment. Despite Sebastian's behavior, he completed the assignment.

“Completed the order” is a bit unnatural. Saying “assignment” or “task” is more natural.

Despite the Sebastian's behavior, he completed the orderinstructions. Despite the Sebastian's behavior, he completed the instructions.

It was a great experience for us, and I hope this shared time every Saturday will becomesin a great habit for our lives.


It was a great experience for us, and. I hope this shared time every Saturday will becomesin a grea a habit thabit will be great for our lives. It was a great experience for us. I hope this shared time every Saturday will become a habit that will be great for our lives.

It was a great experience for us, and I hope this shared time every Saturday will becomesin a great habit for the rest of our lives. It was a great experience for us, and I hope this shared time every Saturday will become a great habit for the rest of our lives.

Thanks for reading.


(I feel happy)


My first day training with Sebas


As I have a child with Autism, today was the first day for traning with other persons with dissabilities.


As I have a child with Autism, t. Today was the first day ofor training with other personsople with dissabilities. I have a child with Autism. Today was the first day of training with other people with disabilities.

The original phrasing implies a direct causal relationship: you’re required to train with other people due to your child having autism.

As I have a child with Autism, today was the first day for training with other persons with dissabilities. As I have a child with Autism, today was the first day for training with other persons with disabilities.

In reality, I felt very nice, because I did the paper of assistent for my child.


In reality, I felt very nice, because I did the paper of assistent for my child. In reality, I felt very nice, because I did the paper of assistent for my child.

I’m not clear what this means. Potentially, “I felt very happy because I had the role of assistant for my child.” Starting with “in reality” requires an initial statement of what you expected. Example: “Initially I thought the day would be stressful, but in reality it was fun.”

In reality, I felt very nice, because I did the paper ofgood and proud, because I assistent ford my child. In reality, I felt very good and proud, because I assisted my child.

We did a serie of exercises, at the beggining was some hard to do every action but as the minutes passed We improved each instruction the teacher gave us.


We did a series of exercises, a. At the begginning was some hard to do every action b, every action was hard to do. But as the minutes passed W, we improved with each instruction the teacher gave us. We did a series of exercises. At the beginning, every action was hard to do. But as the minutes passed, we improved with each instruction the teacher gave us.

We did a serie of exercises, at the begginning was som, some were hard to do every action but as the minutesime passed W, we improved with each instruction the teacher gave us. We did a serie of exercises, at the beginning, some were hard to do every action but as time passed, we improved with each instruction the teacher gave us.

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