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"What do you care what other people think" by Feynman.
Earlier while I was on the train I have just finished this book.
Feynman was a prominent scientist known for his participation in the Manhattan Project, for solve the case with the launch of a rocket for the NASA and to be awarded with the Nobel Prize in Physics.
In this book Feynman tell us about his life, his first wife and how his father teach him to think in a tangible way. Although some chapters of the book, mainly the parts talking about how he solve the problem in NASA are boring, the majority of the chapters are interesting.
I found interesting the part when he says a story of how his father talked with him. When he was a toddler he learned to understand the "important" parts of a thing and that was relevant to truly understand what you were told.
Like for him his father care to explain about dinosaurs but not just the name of the animal, but how tall was it, and how much tall was that? I was a house tall or a three times him tall?
He was a great scientist who try to explain us the way he saw the world.
I admire him because of his simplicity as a person but also because he cared a lot about his students.
Even if this is not the best book I think it was worth the reading.
"What do you care what other people think" by Feynman.
Earlier while I was on the train I have just finished this book.
Earlier today, I just finished this book whilst taking the train.
Feynman was a prominent scientist known for his participation in the Manhattan Project, for solveing the case withof the launch of a rocketChallenger explosion for the NASA and to bebeing awarded with the Nobel Prize in Physics.
In this book Feynman tell us about his life, his first wife and how his father teachaught him to think in a tangible way.
Although some chapters of the book, mainly the parts talking about how he solved the problem infor NASA are boring, the majority of the chapters are interesting.
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I admire him because of his simplicity as a person but also because he cared a lot about his students.
Even if this is not the best book I still think it was worth the reading.
Can have 'worth the read' or 'worth reading' but not 'worth the reading'.
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Overall, good. Some issues with tenses and conjugations but the meaning is clear.
"What do you care what other people think" by Feynman.
Earlier, while I was on the train, I have just finished this book.
Feynman was a prominent scientist known for his participation in the Manhattan Project, for. He solved the case with the launch of a rocket for the NASA, and to behe was awarded with the Nobel Prize in Physics.
In this book, Feynman tells us about his life, his first wife, and how his father teachaught him to think in a tangible way.
Although some chapters of the book, mainly the parts talking about how he solve the problem in NASA, are boring, the majority of the chapters are interesting.
You need to put commas on either side of 'mainly ... NASA' because it is extra information.
I found interesting the part when he saytells a story of how his father talked with him interesting.
When he was a toddler, he learned to understand the "important" parts of a things and twhat was relevant to truly understand what you were being told.
Like for him, his father took care to explain about dinosaurs, but not just the name of the animal, but how tall was it, and how much tall was that?tall that was (by comparison to other things).
I wWas it as tall as a house tall or a three times himas tall as him?
*as ___ as - this is a great phrase to practice for comparisons: as tall as a house, as big as an elephant, as hungry as a bear, as lovely as a flower, etc. (they can be real comparisons, or metaphors)
He was a great scientist who tryied to explain to us the way he saw the world.
I admire him because of his simplicity as a person, but also because he cared a lot about his students.
Even if this is not the best book, I think it wais worth the reading.
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Nice! Make sure you read your sentences out loud. This can help you find where to put the commas - where you naturally pause.
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Although some chapters of the book, mainly the parts talking about how he solve the problem in NASA are boring, the majority of the chapters are interesting. Although some chapters of the book, mainly the parts talking about how he solve the problem in NASA, are boring, the majority of the chapters are interesting. You need to put commas on either side of 'mainly ... NASA' because it is extra information. Although some chapters of the book, mainly the parts talking about how he solved the problem |
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I found interesting the part when he says a story of how his father talked with him. I found
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I was a house tall or a three times him tall?
*as ___ as - this is a great phrase to practice for comparisons: as tall as a house, as big as an elephant, as hungry as a bear, as lovely as a flower, etc. (they can be real comparisons, or metaphors)
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