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I didn’t speak English for a very long time and this is here my first try to activate my English brain. What a nice language and it’s a pity that it gets lost in my head. I am too lazy to read English books or watch English television and when there is no one I could talk to I just don’t use it.

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I just don’t use it.

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I just don’t use it.

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Susann

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I didn’t speak English for a very long time and this is here my first try to activate my English brain.


I didhaven’t speakoken English for a very long time and this is here my first try here to activate my English brain. I haven’t spoken English for a very long time and this is my first try here to activate my English brain.

I didn’t speakhaven't spoken English for a very long time, and this is here my first try to activate my English brain. I haven't spoken English for a very long time, and this is my first try to activate my English brain.

I think the meaning of the sentence is clear without "here." Where you placed "here" doesn't work grammatically. (Adding "here" could have two different meanings, depending on where you place it in your sentence.)

I didhaven’t speakoken English for a very long time and this is here my first try to re-activate mythe English in my brain. I haven’t spoken English for a very long time and this is my first try to re-activate the English in my brain.

What a nice language and it’s a pity that it gets lost in my head.


What a nice language it is and it’s a pity that it gets lost in my head. What a nice language it is and it’s a pity that it gets lost in my head.

What a nice language and i! It’s a pity that it gets lost in my head. What a nice language! It’s a pity that it gets lost in my head.

The first phrase/clause in your sentence doesn't have a verb. You could punctuate it as an exclamation to solve that problem.

What a nice language and it’s a pity that it gets lost/has gotten lost in my head. What a nice language and it’s a pity that it gets lost/has gotten lost in my head.

I am too lazy to read English books or watch English television and when there is no one I could talk to


I am too lazy to read English books or watch English television and when there is no one I couldan talk to I am too lazy to read English books or watch English television and when there is no one I can talk to

I am too lazy to read English books or watch English television in English; and when there isI have no one I couldto talk to, I just don't use it. I am too lazy to read English books or watch television in English; and when I have no one to talk to, I just don't use it.

I reworded and punctuated the sentence to make it sound more natural. "When there is no one I could talk to," it seems impersonal.

I am too lazy to read English books, or watch English television and when there is no one I could talk to I am too lazy to read English books, or watch English television and when there is no one I could talk to

I just don’t use it.


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I just don’t use it.

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