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You should place an article in front of farewell, otherwise, it sounds like you are saying farewell to someone. Another option is to change the title to A Farewell to my Old Classmate.

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The same face, the same person, lying quietly in front of us, but the only difference is that he didoesn't speak, and didn't or breathe anymore. The same face, the same person, lying quietly in front of us, but the only difference is that he doesn't speak or breathe anymore.

The same face, the same person, lying quietly in front of us, but the only difference is that he didoesn't speak, and didoesn't breathe anymore. The same face, the same person, lying quietly in front of us, but the only difference is that he doesn't speak, and doesn't breathe anymore.

The same face, the same person, lying quietly in front of us, but the only difference is that he didoesn't speak, and didn't nor breathe anymore. The same face, the same person, lying quietly in front of us, but the only difference is that he doesn't speak nor breathe anymore.

The world is a stage,: the same land, the same sky, and the same air, but the difference is that there are different people on the stage at different times. The world is a stage: the same land, the same sky, and the same air, but the difference is that there are different people on the stage at different times.

The world is a stage, with the same land, the same sky, and the same air, but the difference is the differenat people appear on theis stage at different times. The world is a stage with the same land, the same sky, and the same air, but the difference is that people appear on this stage at different times.

The world is a stage, the same land, the same sky, and the same air, but the difference is that there are different people on the stage at different times. The world is a stage, the same land, the same sky, and the same air, but the difference is that there are different people on the stage at different times.

Everybody wiWe will all appear on theis stage and definitely they will also step off the stage, and they willand never come back again. We will all appear on this stage and will also step off and never come back again.

Based on your first sentence, I'm keeping the story in the same tense (ie: you used "us", so you should not switch over to "they"). Also, what you wrote was technically correct, but sounded heavy. A good rule of thumb when writing, according to Hemingway, is that one should never use a word that serves no purpose.

Everybody will appear on the stage and they will definitely they will also step off the stage, and they will never come back again. Everybody will appear on the stage and they will definitely step off the stage, and they will never come back again.

What' is life? What is life?

Sounds more natural without the contraction.

What' is life? What is life?

I would not use a contraction when you are posing a serious question in your story. You want to emphasize that you are about to explain it to the readers.

I really don't know! I really don't know!

You can also say ," I don't really know!".

BeingSince we are alive now, let's alwaystry to be happy, because we don't know which day we willen our time will come to go with the wind. Since we are alive now, let's try to be happy, because we don't know when our time will come to go with the wind.

I just tried to make it sound more natural.

Being alive, let'sWhen we are alive, we should always be happy because we don't know which dayen we will go with the wind. When we are alive, we should always be happy because we don't know when we will go with the wind.

The way you wrote this sentence, "being alive" is a dangling participle. What about being alive? you did not finish your thought before you started a different idea of being happy.

Being alive, let's always be happy because we don't know which day we will go with the wind. Be alive, let's always be happy because we don't know which day we will go with the wind.

OldFormer classmate, Rest In Peace. Former classmate, Rest In Peace.

Old classmate, Rmay you rest Iin Ppeace. Old classmate, may you rest in peace.