Aug. 12, 2025
80 years since Hiroshima and Nagasaki.
As everyone knows, the incident involving Hiroshima and Nagasaki had a lot of consequences for all those living there, lost families, parents, friends, home, sounds pretty sad don't ya? with this tragedy, it still clears to us how easy is put an end to a country, even that time, and because of that, people are scared with a possibility to have a third world war, because this time, will be use more stronger and deadly weapons. It's not a surprise to hear: “The fourth world war will happen with sticks and rocks” because everyone will die. Not having winners, just a destruction. Of course, the UN face much struggle to find a way of peace for all countries. peace for all countries. The bottomline is simple and objective, hey know the drill, providing a destiny which could save all..
Como todos sabem, o incidente envolvendo Hiroshima e Nagasaki teve muitas consequências para todos os que viviam lá, famílias perdidas, pais, amigos, lar. Parece muito triste, não é? Com essa tragédia, ainda nos fica claro o quão fácil é acabar com um país, mesmo naquela época, e por causa disso, as pessoas estão assustadas com a possibilidade de uma terceira guerra mundial, porque desta vez, serão usadas armas mais fortes e mortais. Não é surpresa ouvir: "A quarta guerra mundial acontecerá com paus e pedras", porque todos morrerão. Não haverá vencedores, apenas destruição. É claro que a ONU enfrenta muita luta para encontrar um caminho de paz para todos os países. A conclusão é simples e objetiva: eles sabem o que fazer fornecer um destino que possa salvar a todos.
As everyone knows, the incident involving Hiroshima and Nagasaki had a lot of consequences for all those living there, including lost families, parents, friends, home, sand homes. Sounds pretty sad don't ya think?
Added "including" to properly link the two parts of the sentence. "Home" should be plural because every other listed item is plural. I ended the sentence after "home" because it was a run on sentence. Added the verb "think" to complete the idea of your question.
with this tragedy, it is still clears to us how easy it is put an end to a country, even that timeback then, and because of that, people are scared with aabout the possibility to have a third world war, because this time, there will be use more stronger and deadly weapons used.
Various minor edits to improve readability.
It's not a surprise to hear: that “The fourth world war will happen with sticks and rocks,” because everyone will die.
Added a comma after "rocks" to follow grammar convention. I personally don't think a colon is needed here, so I replaced it with "that."
Not having winners, just a destruction.
This feedback gives the same information more concisely and impactfully
Of course, the UN faces muchany struggles to find a way ofbring peace forto all countries.
The end of the suggested sentence is slightly different in what it says, but saying "bring peace" is more common in English this context.
The bottom line is simple and objective, . They know the drill, providing a destiny which could save all..
"Bottom line" is always two words. I changed the punctuation for clarity. I believe you forgot the "T" in "they."
Aug. 21, 2025
Thank you man, certainly this explanations will help me to learning more
|
The bottomline is simple and objective, providing a destiny which could save all.. |
|
80 years since Hiroshima and Nagasaki. |
|
As everyone knows, the incident involving Hiroshima and Nagasaki had a lot of consequences for all those living there, lost families, parents, friends, home, sounds pretty sad don't ya? As everyone knows, the incident involving Hiroshima and Nagasaki had a lot of consequences for all those living there, including lost families, parents, friends, Added "including" to properly link the two parts of the sentence. "Home" should be plural because every other listed item is plural. I ended the sentence after "home" because it was a run on sentence. Added the verb "think" to complete the idea of your question. |
|
with this tragedy, it still clears to us how easy is put an end to a country, even that time, and because of that, people are scared with a possibility to have a third world war, because this time, will be use more stronger and deadly weapons. with this tragedy, it is still clear Various minor edits to improve readability. |
|
It's not a surprise to hear: “The fourth world war will happen with sticks and rocks” because everyone will die. It's not a surprise to hear Added a comma after "rocks" to follow grammar convention. I personally don't think a colon is needed here, so I replaced it with "that." |
|
Not having winners, just a destruction. No This feedback gives the same information more concisely and impactfully |
|
Of course, the UN face much struggle to find a way of peace for all countries. Of course, the UN faces m The end of the suggested sentence is slightly different in what it says, but saying "bring peace" is more common in English this context. |
|
peace for all countries. |
|
The bottomline is simple and objective, hey know the drill, providing a destiny which could save all.. The bottom line is simple and objective "Bottom line" is always two words. I changed the punctuation for clarity. I believe you forgot the "T" in "they." |
You need LangCorrect Premium to access this feature.
Go Premium