Aug. 18, 2025
I recently watched a TV documentary about the Total War Research Institute, which was established in the summer of 1941 to predict the war between Japan and the United States. The Institute, composed of young, elite group at an average age of 33, concluded that Japan was certain to lose due to the overwhelming difference in power between the countries. However, Prime Minister Hideki Tojo, the former head of the army, denied the research result and presented the fabricated data about the amount of stocked oil at a conference with the Emperor, convincing the Emperor to commit war, even though the Emperor had never wanted the war. Unfortunately, four years later Japan suffered a crushing defeat, as predicted by the majority of people, including the research members.
What made the Japanese leaders decide to go to war? They couldn't comprehend reality and simply crazy. Or perhaps, they understood Japan's fate but they could not overcome their passion for fighting. In any case, the leaders were too powerless to save millions of Japanese citizens. Even now, 80 years after the war, we should still rethink the war and what we should do in the future, especially about the responsibilities of leaders who we can elect.
戦後八十年
最近、1941年夏に日米開戦を予測するために設立された『総力戦研究所』に関するテレビドキュメンタリーを見ました。平均年齢33歳の若きエリート集団で構成されたこの研究所は、圧倒的な戦力差から日本の敗北は確実だと結論付けました。しかし、元陸軍大将であった東条英機首相はこの研究結果を否定し、天皇の御前会議で石油備蓄量に関する捏造データを提示し、天皇が戦争を望まなかったにもかかわらず、開戦を決意させました。そして4年後、研究者を含む大多数の人々の予測通り、日本は壊滅的な敗北を喫します。
日本の指導者たちはなぜ開戦を決意したのでしょうか。彼らは現実を理解できず、狂っていたのかも知れません。あるいは、日本の運命は理解していたものの、戦争への情熱に打ち勝てなかったのかもしれません。いずれにせよ、指導者たちは数百万人もの日本国民を救うにはあまりにも無力だったのです。戦後80年が経った今でも、私たちは戦争について、そして今後何をなすべきか、特に私たちが選ぶことのできるリーダーの責任について、改めて考えるべきだと思います。
80 Years After The War
I recently watched a TV documentary about the Total War Research Institute, which was established in the summer of 1941 to predict the outcome of the war between Japan and the United States.
The Institute, composed was made up of a young, elite group atof people with an average age of 33,. They concluded that Japan was certain to lose due to the overwhelming difference in power between the countries.
However, Prime Minister Hideki Tojo, the former head of the army, denied the research results and presented the fabricated data about the amount of oil stocked oilpiles at a conference with the Emperor. Thereby, convincing the Emperor to commit to war, even though the Emperor had never wanted the war.
Did the Emperor not want any war, or just not want war with the US? By the time the US was pulled into the war, Japan was already fighting on many fronts.
Unfortunately, fFour years later Japan suffered a crushing defeat, as predicted by the majority of people, including the research members.
This is correct but not sure if you want to convey "unfortunately," there is an implication that had Japan won the war it would have been fortunate.
What made the Japanese leaders decide to go to war?
They couldn't comprehend reality and simply crazy.were overconfident (or determined to fight).
"crazy" doesn't have quite the right feel to me. It feels more like there were people that were overconfident.
Or perhaps, they understood Japan's fate but they could not overcome their passion for fighting.
In any case, the leaders were too powerless to save millions of Japanese citizens.
Don't think you need the "too" here. But this statement could be argued differently as well depending on perspectives and the story you want to tell.
Even now, 80 years after the war, we should still rethink the warlearn from history and what we should do in the future, especially about the responsibilities of leaders who we can elect.to avoid future wars. We should also consider the leaders we elect as they have a responsibility to the millions of Japanese citizens. (or .... to the billions people in the world.)
Rephrased this a bit not sure what points are more important to you.
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The world is such a mess and it seems like few people honestly learn from history. I think most people don't want war at all. I think most people just want to get on with their day, get work done, enjoy their weekends, have enough to eat, get a good night sleep, enjoy life. There's a famous movie, but it isn't well known by most people in the US "Twenty Four Eyes". Really good movie if you haven't seen it. Famous director and some really beautiful views of Japan from years ago. If people would see other people as human instead of "the enemy" on all sides, would help so much to stop some of the chaos. Sadly, this doesn't ever seem to change.
80 Years After The War
I recently watched a TV documentary about the Total War Research Institute, which was established in the summer of 1941 to predict the (outcome of the) war between Japan and the United States.
The Institute, a group composed of young, elite groupmembers at an average age of 33, concluded that Japan was certain to lose due to the overwhelming difference in power between the countries.
However, Prime Minister Hideki Tojo, the former head of the army, denied the research's result(s)/findings and presented the fabricated data about the amount of stocked oil at a conference with the Emperor, convincing the Emperor to commitenact (or provoke; or start a) war, even though the Emperor had never wanted theo go to war.
Unfortunately, four years later Japan suffered a crushing defeat, as predicted by the majority of people, including the research members.
What made the Japanese leaders decide to go to war?
They couldn't comprehend reality and were simply crazy.
Or perhaps, they understood Japan's fate but they could not overcome their passion for fighting.
A more natural way to word this would be:
"[...] but they could not accept defeat without a fight."
In any case, the leaders were too powerless to save millions of Japanese citizens.
Even now, 80 years after the war, we should still rethink the war and what we should do in the future, especially about the responsibilities of leaders who we can elect.
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Well done!! This was very insightful.
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I recently watched a TV documentary about the Total War Research Institute, which was established in the summer of 1941 to predict the war between Japan and the United States. I recently watched a TV documentary about the Total War Research Institute, which was established in the summer of 1941 to predict the (outcome of the) war between Japan and the United States. I recently watched a TV documentary about the Total War Research Institute, which was established in the summer of 1941 to predict the outcome of the war between Japan and the United States. |
The Institute, composed of young, elite group at an average age of 33, concluded that Japan was certain to lose due to the overwhelming difference in power between the countries. The Institute, a group composed of young, elite The Institute |
However, Prime Minister Hideki Tojo, the former head of the army, denied the research result and presented the fabricated data about the amount of stocked oil at a conference with the Emperor, convincing the Emperor to commit war, even though the Emperor had never wanted the war. However, Prime Minister Hideki Tojo, the former head of the army, denied the research's result(s)/findings and presented However, Prime Minister Hideki Tojo, the former head of the army, denied the research results and presented Did the Emperor not want any war, or just not want war with the US? By the time the US was pulled into the war, Japan was already fighting on many fronts. |
Unfortunately, four years later Japan suffered a crushing defeat, as predicted by the majority of people, including the research members. Unfortunately, four years later Japan suffered a crushing defeat, as predicted by the majority of people, including the research
This is correct but not sure if you want to convey "unfortunately," there is an implication that had Japan won the war it would have been fortunate. |
What made the Japanese leaders decide to go to war? This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
They couldn't comprehend reality and simply crazy. They couldn't comprehend reality and were simply crazy. They couldn't comprehend reality and "crazy" doesn't have quite the right feel to me. It feels more like there were people that were overconfident. |
Or perhaps, they understood Japan's fate but they could not overcome their passion for fighting. Or perhaps, they understood Japan's fate but they could not overcome their passion for fighting. A more natural way to word this would be: "[...] but they could not accept defeat without a fight." This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
In any case, the leaders were too powerless to save millions of Japanese citizens. This sentence has been marked as perfect! In any case, the leaders were Don't think you need the "too" here. But this statement could be argued differently as well depending on perspectives and the story you want to tell. |
Even now, 80 years after the war, we should still rethink the war and what we should do in the future, especially about the responsibilities of leaders who we can elect. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Even now, 80 years after the war, we should still Rephrased this a bit not sure what points are more important to you. |
However, Prime Minister Hideki Tojo, the former head of the army, denied the research result and presented the fabricated data about the stocked amount of oil at a conference with the Emperor, convincing the Emperor to commit war, even though the Emperor had never wanted the war. |
Even now, 80 years after the war, we should still rethink the war and what we should do in the future, especially about responsibilities of leaders who we can elect. |
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