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April 20, 2023

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Are there more natural ways to say the lines below?
I'd like to speak English more naturally and not the way you would find in a textbook. 🙇‍♂️
It's alright if you even change an entire sentence!!


I think the famous donut shop in Japan is Mister Donut or Krispy Kreme.
Which do you prefer?
It depends on the day. But I don't buy either by myself. I usually get them from someone. But if I were to buy one myself, I would choose Krispy Kreme when I want something rich and filling, and I would choose Miss Donut when I want a regular donut. I more get Misdo because they have more stores in Japan than Krispy Kreme.
In Japan, Mister Donut is called Misdo for short.

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Are there more natural ways to say the linsentences below?

I'd like to speak English more naturally and not the way you would find insound like a textbook.

i like this correction the best so far.

It's alright even if you even change an entire sentence!!

I think the most famous donut shop in Japan is Mister Donut or Krispy Kreme.

わー!本当ですか。日本に行った時は、Krispy Kremeを見たことがありません。

Which do you prefer?

It depends on the day.

But I don't buy either by myself.

I usually get them from someone.

But if I were to buy one myself, I would choose Krispy Kreme when I want something rich and filling, and (I would choose) Misster Donut when I want a regular donut.

I more get Misdo more because they have more stores in Japan than Krispy Kreme does.

In Japan, Mister Donut is called Misdo for short.

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初めて知りました。教えてくれてありがとうございました。そして、今回も上手に書けています!

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sho

April 24, 2023

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いえいえ、こちらこそ添削ありがとうございました!勉強になります!🙇‍♂️🙏

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I think the famous donut shop in Japan is Mister Donut or Krispy Kreme.

Which one do you prefer?

It depends on the day.

I usually get them from someone.

But if I were to buy one myself, I would choose Krispy Kreme when I want something rich and filling, and I would choose Miss Donut when I want a regular donut.

I moreusually get Misdo because they have more stores in Japan than Krispy Kreme.

In Japan, Mister Donut is called Misdo for short.

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Good job

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sho

April 23, 2023

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Thank you so much!!🙇‍♂️

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Are there more natural ways to say the lines below?


Are there more natural ways to say the linsentences below?

I'd like to speak English more naturally and not the way you would find in a textbook.


I'd like to speak English more naturally and not the way you would find insound like a textbook.

i like this correction the best so far.

🙇‍♂️


It's alright if you even change an entire sentence!!


It's alright even if you even change an entire sentence!!

I think the famous donut shop in Japan is Mister Donut or Krispy Kreme.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I think the most famous donut shop in Japan is Mister Donut or Krispy Kreme.

わー!本当ですか。日本に行った時は、Krispy Kremeを見たことがありません。

Which do you prefer?


Which one do you prefer?

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It depends on the day.


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But I don't buy either by myself.


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I usually get them from someone.


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But if I were to buy one myself, I would choose Krispy Kreme when I want something rich and filling, and I would choose Miss Donut when I want a regular donut.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

But if I were to buy one myself, I would choose Krispy Kreme when I want something rich and filling, and (I would choose) Misster Donut when I want a regular donut.

I more get Misdo because they have more stores in Japan than Krispy Kreme.


I moreusually get Misdo because they have more stores in Japan than Krispy Kreme.

I more get Misdo more because they have more stores in Japan than Krispy Kreme does.

In Japan, Mister Donut is called Misdo for short.


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