Nov. 17, 2021
About Medical Doctors
Most healthcare professionals want to work in places where they would get a rewarding job and make a lot of money. However, there is a scarcity of doctors in many rural areas around the world. In this essay, I am going to mention some reasons for this problem.
First, most medical schools and universities are located in large cities, and graduating seniors end up working in some local hospitals or medical centers. After graduation, moving to a rural area means few job opportunities because some of these areas do not have sufficient facilities and resources. Few doctors are able to work there by volunteering through NGOs.
In addition, there is the fact that people want to have the best quality of life possible, and some rural areas cannot offer comfort and meet most people's expectations. For example, living far away from your family, not having nearby schools, shopping centers, places for leisure time, etc. could be a big inconvenience for many. Not to mention that some of these areas are very unsafe and have a shortage of public services (water, electricity, gas, Internet, etc).
In short, some doctors do not see working in a rural area as a real option for them, and this is a big social problem for a territory. Perhaps the government should invest more resources in these areas and promote some social programs to attract more and more health professionals. People living in rural areas are generally the most in need of medical services and care.
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Most healthcare professionals want to work in places where they would get a rewarding job and make a lot of money.
However, there is a scarcity of doctors in many rural areas around the world.
In this essay, I am going to mention some of the potential reasons for this problem. In this essay, I am going to mention some of the potential reasons for this problem.
First, most medical schools and universities are located in large cities, and after graduating, seniors often end up working in sommore remote local hospitals or medical centers.
First, most medical schools and universities are located in large cities and after graduating, seniors often end up working in more remote local hospitals or medical centers.
After graduation, moving to a rural area means fewer job opportunities because some of these areas do not have sufficient facilities and resources to accommodate a high number of job seekers. After graduation, moving to a rural area means fewer job opportunities because some of these areas do not have sufficient facilities and resources to accommodate a high number of job seekers.
Just writing "some of these areas do not have sufficient facilities and resources" gives off a negative impression that the areas don't have enough facilities and resources to do the purpose the facilities and resources are there for, i.e. don't have enough to help everyone medically (in this context). :)
FewSome doctors are able to work there by volunteering through NGOs.
Some doctors are able to work there by volunteering through NGOs.
In addition, there is the fact that people want to have the best quality of life possible, and some rural areas cannot offer comfort andthe level of comfort required to meet most people's expectations.
In addition, there is the fact that people want to have the best quality of life possible, and some rural areas cannot offer the level of comfort required to meet most people's expectations.
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A few examples are living far away from your family and not having nearby schools, shopping centers, places for leisure time, etc.
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These could potentially be a significant inconvenience for people that want to move to rural areas.
Not to mention that some of these areas are very unsafe and have a shortage of public services (water, electricity, gas, Internet, etc).
In short, some doctors do not see working in a rural area as a real option for them, and this is a big social problem for a territory.
Perhaps the government should invest more resources in these areas and promote some social programs to attract more and more health professionals.
People living in rural areas are generally the most in need of medical services and care, after all. People living in rural areas are generally the most in need of medical services and care, after all.
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This was a very well-written essay, I felt like I was nitpicking with some of my corrections. Depending on the country, I think that affordability and pay is a serious concern for many healthcare professionals, especially when in many first-world countries wages have stagnated compared to the rising cost of living.
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Most healthcare professionals want to work in places where they would get a rewarding job and make a lot of money. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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However, there is a scarcity of doctors in many rural areas around the world. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In this essay, I am going to mention some reasons for this problem. In this essay, I am going to mention some of the potential reasons for this problem. In this essay, I am going to mention some of the potential reasons for this problem. |
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First, most medical schools and universities are located in large cities, and graduating seniors end up working in some local hospitals or medical centers.
First, most medical schools and universities are located in large cities |
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After graduation, moving to a rural area means few job opportunities because some of these areas do not have sufficient facilities and resources. After graduation, moving to a rural area means fewer job opportunities because some of these areas do not have sufficient facilities and resources to accommodate a high number of job seekers. After graduation, moving to a rural area means fewer job opportunities because some of these areas do not have sufficient facilities and resources to accommodate a high number of job seekers. Just writing "some of these areas do not have sufficient facilities and resources" gives off a negative impression that the areas don't have enough facilities and resources to do the purpose the facilities and resources are there for, i.e. don't have enough to help everyone medically (in this context). :) |
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Few doctors are able to work there by volunteering through NGOs.
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In addition, there is the fact that people want to have the best quality of life possible, and some rural areas cannot offer comfort and meet most people's expectations.
In addition, there is the fact that people want to have the best quality of life possible, and some rural areas cannot offer |
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For example, living far away from your family, not having nearby schools, shopping centers, places for leisure time, etc.
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could be a big inconvenience for many.
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Not to mention that some of these areas are very unsafe and have a shortage of public services (water, electricity, gas, Internet, etc). This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In short, some doctors do not see working in a rural area as a real option for them, and this is a big social problem for a territory. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Perhaps the government should invest more resources in these areas and promote some social programs to attract more and more health professionals. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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People living in rural areas are generally the most in need of medical services and care. People living in rural areas are generally the most in need of medical services and care, after all. People living in rural areas are generally the most in need of medical services and care, after all. |
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