My lovely wife is used to waking up and going to bed exactly on schedulon time. My lovely wife is used to waking up and going to bed on time.

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For most of my life I worked until almost the morningdawn and woke up whenever I wanted. For most of my life I worked until dawn and woke up whenever I wanted.

- until almost the morning sounds a little weird. Changed it to until dawn but there are a variety of ways you could phrase this

For most of my life I worked until almost the morningmorning was about to start and woke up whenever I wanted. For most of my life I worked until morning was about to start and woke up whenever I wanted.

However, in marriage this sometimes becomes a problem and now I'm trying to shift my work hours earlier. However, in marriage this sometimes becomes a problem and now I'm trying to shift my work hours earlier.

adding now just makes it a bit more natural and clear you are trying to change your behavior now

However, inf you're marriaged this sometimes becomes a problem ands I'm trying to shift my work hours earlier.work earlier and earlier in the day. However, if you're married this becomes a problem as I'm trying to work earlier and earlier in the day.

However, in marriage this sometimes becomes a problem in our marriage and I'm trying to shift my work hours earlier. However, this sometimes becomes a problem in our marriage and I'm trying to shift my work hours earlier.

So, I planned to work thisin the afternoon.s So, I planned to work in the afternoons

Changed this sentence to match the tense in the following sentence as they don't match

Andbut every time I do that, something goes unpredictable wrong. but every time, something goes unpredictable wrong.

Never start a sentence with And, it's not allowed in English

And every time I do that, something goes unpredictabley wrong. And every time I do that, something goes unpredictably wrong.

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And every time I do that, something goes unpredictabley wrong. And every time I do that, something goes unpredictably wrong.

Today I did everanything except thelse but work! Today I did anything else but work!

A short trip to zoo marketthe zoo turned into a long journey through the mountains to the sea. A short trip to the zoo turned into a long journey through the mountains to the sea.

- zoo market doesn't make sense, I presume you mean just a zoo where there are animals

A short trip to zoo marketthe zoo turned into a long journey through the mountains to the sea. A short trip to the zoo turned into a long journey through the mountains to the sea.

A short trip to zoothe market turned into a long journey through the mountains to the sea. A short trip to the market turned into a long journey through the mountains to the sea.

I'm not sure what a "zoo market" is

Now iIt's night outside.right now. It's night right now.

AgaiSee you soon :) See you soon :)