Last week, the illustrator of my live 2d model, Testu no Kusari, drew illustrations for mythat I commissioned live on YouTube. Last week, the illustrator of my live 2d model, Testu no Kusari, drew illustrations that I commissioned live on YouTube.

Last week, the illustrator of my live 2d model, Testu no Kusari, drew illustrations foron my commission live on YouTube. Last week, the illustrator of my live 2d model, Testu no Kusari, drew illustrations on my commission live on YouTube.

The appearance of her character is kind of scary, and her comments on Twitter are sometimes very chaotic sometimes, but she is a really nice and interesting person. The appearance of her character is kind of scary, and her comments on Twitter are sometimes very chaotic, but she is a really nice and interesting person.

The appearance of her character is kind of scary, and her comments on Twitter are very chaotic sometimes, but she is a really nice and interesting person. The appearance of her character is kind of scary, and her comments on Twitter are very chaotic sometimes, but she is a really nice and interesting person.

The appearance of her character is kind ofsomewhat scary and her comments on Twitter are very chaotic sometimes, but she is a really nicekind and interesting person. The appearance of her character is somewhat scary and her comments on Twitter are very chaotic sometimes, but she is a really kind and interesting person.

Your sentence is correct. This is just another way to say it.

I ordered three line art drawings and one icon pic of the face of my live 2D model. I ordered three line art drawings and one icon pic of my live 2D model.

icon pictures are usually of the face, so while specifiying that it's a picture of your character's face isn't wrong, it sounds unnatural.

I ordered three line art drawings and one icon pic ofor the face of my live 2D model. I ordered three line art drawings and one icon pic for the face of my live 2D model.

The three line art drawings awere for reference material. The three line art drawings were for reference material.

The past tense seems more appropriate here.

I told her that she could draw them on her live stream if she wanted when I commissioned ther to draw theming. I told her that she could draw them on her live stream if she wanted when I commissioned the drawing.

I told her that she could draw them on her live stream if she wanted when I commissioned her to draw them. I told her that she could draw them on her livestream if she wanted when I commissioned her to draw them.

Fortunately, I could join and stay on the live stream from start to endfinish, so I communicated with her and other viewers through the chat. Fortunately, I could join and stay on the live stream from start to finish, so I communicated with her and other viewers through the chat.

Usually people would say "start to finish" or "beginning to end"

Fortunately, I could join and stay on the live stream from start to end, so I communicattalked with her and other viewers through the chat. Fortunately, I could join and stay on the livestream from start to end, so I talked with her and other viewers through the chat.

Fortunately, I could join and stay on the live stream from start to end, so I communicated with her and other viewers through thein chat. Fortunately, I could join and stay on the live stream from start to end, so I communicated with her and other viewers in chat.

It was interesting to witness thear impressions of my character bymade on others. It was interesting to witness the impression my character made on others.

"hear" suggests others would be talking in the live stream too, if that is correct then there is no issue with it Otherwise "witness" is more neutral as you could also witness the live chat messages etc.

It was interesting to hear the impressions ofthat my character bygave others. It was interesting to hear the impressions that my character gave others.

It was interesting to hear impressions ofwhat people thought about my character by others. It was interesting to hear what people thought about my character.

This is more how'd we say it in the US.

They said things like below…: They said things like:

"like" could be replaced with "such as" to make it sound more formal, but I doubt that is what you are going for here so it is all good :)

They said things like the sentences below… They said things like the sentences below…

They said things like what is written below…: They said things like what is written below:

They said things like those below… They said things like those below…

-He is like a character who bothers a heroine at the beginning inof an anime. -He is like a character who bothers a heroine at the beginning of an anime.

-He is like a character who bothers a heroine at the beginning inof an anime. -He is like a character who bothers a heroine at the beginning of an anime.

へー、失礼。

-He looks like a villain who talks in a femalinine manner. -He looks like a villain who talks in a feminine manner.

-He looks like a villain who talks in a femalinine manner. -He looks like a villain who talks in a feminine manner.

-If he was in a band, he mustwould be a bassist! -If he was in a band, he would be a bassist!

-If he wasere in a band, he mustwould be a bassist! -If he were in a band, he would be a bassist!

I realize someone else wrote this but I wanted to point out that this sentence should be subjunctive case. 賛成した！