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Robins day in life
Hello,everyone,welcome to Robins day in life. Today is Tuesday when i decide to write this passage,so i have a history class and PE class in the morning. However,i am absent for the history class because i do not want to use my time in having this meaningless class,maybe you will say why.On the one hand,the teacher and the class are very boring,on the other hand,they can not improve my history ability.Although i really like history and i study it very hard in my senior high school.So,i get up at 9 am.After a simple wash-up,i go to the Luckin Coffee and buy a coffee.Todays weather is very well,i basked in the sunlight ,listening to the sound of the gentle breeze rusting through the treetpos.
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Robin's day in the life Robin's day in the life
We say "day in the life" in English. You could also say 'A day in the life of Robin'.
Hello, everyone,w. Welcome to Robinsa day in lifethe life of Robin.
Hello, everyone. Welcome to a day in the life of Robin.
Today is Tuesday when i decide to write this passage, so iI have a history class and PE class in the morning.
Today is Tuesday, so I have history class and PE class in the morning.
You don't really need to add 'when I decide to write this passage', but if you wanted to include it, it would sound better if you said I decided to write this passage today, on a Tuesday. Today I have history class and PE class in the morning.
However,i am absent for the I skipped history class because iI do non't want to uswaste my time in having this meaningless class,m. Maybe you will say onder 'why?'.
However, I skipped history class because I don't want to waste my time in this meaningless class. Maybe you wonder 'why?'.
If you don't go to class, you can use the verb 'skip'. In English, if you're spending time doing something you think is meaningless, you can say you're "wasting your time". In the final part, if you want to address the reader, I would write it in present tense, and use the verb 'wonder' instead of 'say'.
On the one hand, the teacher and the class are very boring, on the other hand, they can nolass doesn't improve my history abilitknowledge of history.
On the one hand, the teacher and the class are very boring, on the other hand, the class doesn't improve my knowledge of history.
You wouldn't say 'improve my history ability' in English. I changed the last sentence to make it sound more natural.
Although iI actually really like history and iI studyied it very hard in my senior year of high school.
Although I actually really like history and I studied it very hard in my senior year of high school.
I would also add another sentence here at the end like: “I just don't like this specific class, not the subject itself."
So,i I get up at 9 am.
So, I get up at 9 am.
After a simple wash-up,i, I go to the Luckin Coffee and buy a coffee.
After a simple wash, I go to Luckin Coffee and buy a coffee.
Today's weather is very well,igood. I basked in the sunlight , listening to the sound of the gentle breeze rustling through the treetpops.
Today's weather is very good. I basked in the sunlight, listening to the sound of the gentle breeze rustling through the treetops.
In English, you don't use 'well' to describe weather, but you can use it to describe your personal mood/health
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Very good! Most of my corrections are just to help you make your writing sound more natural, but I can understand what you wrote.
I felt exactly the same about history class - I really enjoyed it during high school, but I found the history classes at university really boring! I hope you find another subject that you enjoy.
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Robins day in life Robin's day in the life Robin's day in the life We say "day in the life" in English. You could also say 'A day in the life of Robin'. |
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Hello,everyone,welcome to Robins day in life.
Hello, everyone |
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Today is Tuesday when i decide to write this passage,so i have a history class and PE class in the morning.
Today is Tuesday You don't really need to add 'when I decide to write this passage', but if you wanted to include it, it would sound better if you said I decided to write this passage today, on a Tuesday. Today I have history class and PE class in the morning. |
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However,i am absent for the history class because i do not want to use my time in having this meaningless class,maybe you will say why.
However, If you don't go to class, you can use the verb 'skip'. In English, if you're spending time doing something you think is meaningless, you can say you're "wasting your time". In the final part, if you want to address the reader, I would write it in present tense, and use the verb 'wonder' instead of 'say'. |
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On the one hand,the teacher and the class are very boring,on the other hand,they can not improve my history ability.
On the one hand, the teacher and the class are very boring, on the other hand, the You wouldn't say 'improve my history ability' in English. I changed the last sentence to make it sound more natural. |
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Although i really like history and i study it very hard in my senior high school.
Although I would also add another sentence here at the end like: “I just don't like this specific class, not the subject itself." |
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So,i get up at 9 am.
So, |
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After a simple wash-up,i go to the Luckin Coffee and buy a coffee.
After a simple wash |
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Todays weather is very well,i basked in the sunlight ,listening to the sound of the gentle breeze rusting through the treetpos.
Today's weather is very In English, you don't use 'well' to describe weather, but you can use it to describe your personal mood/health |
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