Dec. 15, 2024
Day 37
In order to resolve the reclusive problem, we need to put the priority into setting up some support center and help them to blend with the society. Normally, recluses usually live in their own houses or go outside rarely. Therefore, we need to lead and give them more chances to hang out. However, the most important thing is the warm eyes for them and step by step changes. If we force them to change, then the opposite result or situation can be more serious. The comfort and wanting to communicate or being treated by themselves are also important.
Để giải quyết vấn đề cô đơn ẩn dật, trước tiên phải thiết lập trung tâm hỗ trợ và giúp họ thích ứng với xã hội thông qua tư vấn. Thông thường, những người cô đơn ẩn dật thường chỉ sống trong nhà hoặc trường hợp ra ngoài rất ngắn. Vì vậy, cần phải dẫn dắt và cung cấp cơ hội để những người này có thể thường xuyên ra ngoài. Nhưng điều quan trọng nhất là nhìn họ bằng ánh mắt ấm áp và chờ để thay đổi từ từ. Nếu chúng ta cố gắng thay đổi thông qua sự ép buộc thì kết quả trái ngược xảy ra hoặc triệu chứng có thể nghiêm trọng hơn. Điều quan trọng là có sự thoải mái xung quanh và làm cho họ muốn tự mình giao tiếp hoặc điều trị.
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Day 37
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In order to resolve the reclusive problem, we need to prioritize setting up some support center and help recluses to blend with society.
Normally, rRecluses usually live in their own houses or go outside rarely.
Recluses usually live in their own houses or go outside rarely.
Many people choose either "normally" or "usually," and generally do not use both in one description.
Therefore, we need to lead and give them more chances to hang out.
However, the most important thing is the warm eyes for them ands are to treat them warmly and to encourage step -by -step changes.
However, the most important things are to treat them warmly and to encourage step-by-step changes.
If we force them to change, then the opposite result or situation can be more serious.
Their comfort and wantingdesire to communicate or beingget treated by themselves are also important.
Their comfort and desire to communicate or get treated are also important.
Dec. 16, 2024
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In order to resolve the reclusive problem, we need to put priority into setting up a support center and help them blend in with society
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Normally, recluses live in their own houses and go outside rarely.
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Therefore, we need to lead them and provide them with more chances to go outside.
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However, the most important thing is to give them warm eyes (?) and guide them step by step.
If we force them to change, then the opposite result or situation can be more serious.
If we force them to change, the opposite result can be more serious.
The comfort and, wanting to communicate, or being treated bytreating themselves areis also important.
The comfort, wanting to communicate, or treating themselves is also important.
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Dec. 16, 2024
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In order to resolve the reclusive problem, we need to put the priority into setting up some support center and help them to blend with the society.
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Normally, recluses usually live in their own houses or go outside rarely.
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Therefore, we need to lead and give them more chances to hang out.
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However, the most important thing is the warm eyes for them and step by step changes.
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If we force them to change, then the opposite result or situation can be more serious.
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The comfort and wanting to communicate or being treated by themselves are also important.
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