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My Hiking Story

I love hiking. It’s my escape from the daily routine. In Hungary, my current stay, there’s no good mountains. Only hills. First I fell in love with hiking while living in Armenia. The country is dotted with charming yet challenging mountains. At my first time I was invited by a guy. The weather conditions were not quite appealing: cloudy sky, wet slippery grass and fog. Along the way, I was picking berries. But those 12 km were a good start. Not as enjoyable as I’d like to get, but yet pleasant. My following hikes were more exhausting yet rewarding, with breathtaking scenery.
My highest peak was around 4000 m high. The mountain has a steep slope which is exhausting on the way up and extremely dangerous on the way down. And the boulder hopping section. Oh, gosh. After the way down at the base, being drained and sore, you have to push yourself one more time. But it was a good experience. Hope best hikes lie ahead of me.

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My Hiking Story

I love hiking.

It’s my escape from the daily routine.

Only hills.

First I fell in love with hiking while living in Armenia.

The country is dotted with charming yet challenging mountains.

But those 12 km were a good start.

My following hikes were more exhausting yet rewarding, with breathtaking scenery.

My highest peak was around 4000 m high.

The mountain has a steep slope which is exhausting on the way up and extremely dangerous on the way down.

And the boulder hopping section.

Oh, gosh.

After the way down at the base, being drained and sore, you have to push yourself one more time.

But it was a good experience.

My Hiking Story

I love hiking.

Only hills.

But those 12 km were a good start.

Oh, gosh.

But it was a good experience.

I love hiking.

Only hills.

The country is dotted with charming yet challenging mountains.

The weather conditions were not quite appealing: cloudy sky, wet slippery grass and fog.

But those 12 km were a good start.

My highest peak was around 4000 m high.

The mountain has a steep slope which is exhausting on the way up and extremely dangerous on the way down.

And the boulder hopping section.

Oh, gosh.

Only hills.


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But those 12 km were a good start.


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Not as enjoyable as I’d like to get, but yet pleasant.


Not as enjoyable as I’d like to gethave liked , but yetstill pleasant. Not as enjoyable as I’d have liked , but still pleasant.

Not as enjoyable as I’d like to get would have liked, but yetstill pleasant. Not as enjoyable as I would have liked, but still pleasant.

Not as enjoyable as I’d like it to get, but yetstill pleasant. Not as enjoyable as I’d like it to get, but still pleasant.

My following hikes were more exhausting yet rewarding, with breathtaking scenery.


MyThe following hikes were more exhausting yet rewarding, with breathtaking scenery. The following hikes were more exhausting yet rewarding, with breathtaking scenery.

or My next hikes

My following hikes were more exhausting yebut rewarding, with breathtaking scenery. My following hikes were more exhausting but rewarding, with breathtaking scenery.

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My highest peak was around 4000 m high.


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MyThe highest peak I climbed was around 4000 m high. The highest peak I climbed was around 4000 m high.

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The mountain has a steep slope which is exhausting on the way up and extremely dangerous on the way down.


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The mountain hasd a steep slope, which iwas exhausting on the way up and extremely dangerous on the way down. The mountain had a steep slope, which was exhausting on the way up and extremely dangerous on the way down.

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And the boulder hopping section.


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And the boulder -hopping section. And the boulder-hopping section.

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Oh, gosh.


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After the way down at the base, being drained and sore, you have to push yourself one more time.


After the way downdescent, at the base, while being drained and sore, you have to push yourself one more time. After the descent, at the base, while being drained and sore, you have to push yourself one more time.

After the wayclimbing down ato the base, despite being drained and sore, you have to push yourself one more time. After climbing down to the base, despite being drained and sore, you have to push yourself one more time.

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My Hiking Story


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I love hiking.


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It’s my escape from the daily routine.


It’s my escape from themy daily routine. It’s my escape from my daily routine.

or maybe "the daily grind"

It’s my escape from themy daily routine. It’s my escape from my daily routine.

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In Hungary, my current stay, there’s no good mountains.


In Hungary, mywhere I current stayly live/am, there’s are no good mountains. In Hungary, where I currently live/am, there are no good mountains.

In Hungary, where I'my currently staying, there’s are no good mountains for hiking. In Hungary, where I'm currently staying, there are no good mountains for hiking.

In Hungary, where I'my currently staying, there’s are no good mountains. In Hungary, where I'm currently staying, there are no good mountains.

First I fell in love with hiking while living in Armenia.


FI first I fell in love with hiking while living in Armenia. I first fell in love with hiking while living in Armenia.

First, at the beginning of the sentences, creates a sequence.

FI first I fell in love with hiking whileen I livinged in Armenia. I first fell in love with hiking when I lived in Armenia.

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The country is dotted with charming yet challenging mountains.


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At my first time I was invited by a guy.


AtFor my first time, I was invited by a guy. For my first time, I was invited by a guy.

At my first time I wasI went hiking for the first time because an acquaintance invited by a guyme along. I went hiking for the first time because an acquaintance invited me along.

"invited by a guy" sounds like a date. Is this what you mean?

At mMy first time, I was invited by a guy. My first time, I was invited by a guy.

The weather conditions were not quite appealing: cloudy sky, wet slippery grass and fog.


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The weather conditions were not quite appealing: cloudy sky, wet slippery grass, and fog. The weather conditions were not quite appealing: cloudy sky, wet slippery grass, and fog.

Along the way, I was picking berries.


Along the way, I was pickinged berries. Along the way, I picked berries.

"Was picking" is fine if you include something else with it (I was picking berries when it started to rain). By itself, it sounds a bit odd.

Along the way, I was pickingpicked some berries. Along the way, I picked some berries.

Along the way, I was pickinged berries. Along the way, I picked berries.

But it was a good experience.


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Hope best hikes lie ahead of me.


HI hope bestter hikes lie ahead of me. I hope better hikes lie ahead of me.

HI hope I still have my best hikes lie ahead of me. I hope I still have my best hikes ahead of me.

Hope my best hikes lie ahead of me. Hope my best hikes lie ahead of me.

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