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Hi guys! I wish that y'all good. This is my first time writing i have been studying and watching youtube videos and TV shows in EN for a long time i can understand the speaker but i have some issues when it comes to speaking or writing i do too much input, but zero output. fear and shyness is my enemies. i can't find the right wording i know a lot of vocabulary but when i start talking my brain becomes empty especially when i had to speak in front of people. i think that's becaue of the fear i have of making mistakes, and the stress caused by the listener you can call it anxiety.
i was thinking of it this way: i will just listen and watch too much content and my speaking and writing will improve naturaly, but i was wrong. improving these skills require practice too.
today i decide to break the ice and start writing regardless of the mistakes i'm going to make, but i feel like it's important. if i don't try i will stay the way i'm forever, i want to chat with strangers especially on Reddit but my poor writing skills always hold me back stangers sends me DMs on social media and I avoided to respond just because i don't know how to write will
i know that you'll find my text messy because of my poor punctuation i don't know where or when to put comma or full stop etc.
i found about you guys on Reddit. thank you!

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Day one


Day oOne Day One

Proper capitalization in your title.

Hi guys!


Hi, guys! Hi, guys!

I wish that y'all good.


I wishhope that y'ou all goodare well. I hope that you all are well.

I wishhope that y'all good. I hope that y'all good.

I wish that y'all goodyou all well. I wish you all well.

"Wish you all well" is the correct phrasing.

I wish that y'ou are all good. I wish that you are all good.

"y'all" is a regional term used in some parts of America. It expands out to "you all" and means "all of you", it can't be used as a contraction for "You are all"

This is my first time writting


i have been studying and watching youtube videos and TV shows in EN for a long time i can understand the speakrs but i have some issues whenit comes to speaking or writting


i do too much inputs with zero outputs


fear and shyness is my enemies.


fFear and shyness isare my enemies. Fear and shyness are my enemies.

fFear and shyness is my enemies. Fear and shyness is my enemies.

Start your sentences with capital letters

fFear and shyness isare my enemies. Fear and shyness are my enemies.

Subject is plural ("fear and shyness"), so verb should be "are."

fFear and shyness isare my enemies. Fear and shyness are my enemies.

The first word in a sentence starts with a capital letter. "are" is used for plural things rather than "is", since you listed multiple things, you should use the plural "are" here.

i can't find the right wording


iI can't find the right wording I can't find the right wording

iI can't find the right wording. I can't find the right wording.

iI can't find the right wording I can't find the right wording

Capitalize the "I"

iI can't find the right wordings. I can't find the right words.

i know a lot of vocabulary but when i start talking my brain becomes empty especially when i had to speak in front of people


i think that becaue of the fear i have making mistakes and the stress caused by the listener you can call it anxiety.


i think of it this way: i will just listen and watch too much content and my speaking and writiing will improve naturaly, but i was wrong.


improving these skills require practice too


today i decide to break the ice and start writing regardless of the mistakes i'm going to make but i feel like it's important


if i don't try i will stay the way


i'm my forever


i want to chat with strangers especially on Reddit but my poor writing skills always hold me back


stangers sends me DMs on social media and I avoided to respond just because i don't know how to write


will


i know that you'll find my text messy because of my poor punctuation


i don't know where or when to put comma or full stop etc.


i found about you guys on Reddit.


i founI learned about you guys on Reddit. I learned about you guys on Reddit.

iI found about you guysthis platform on Reddit. I found about this platform on Reddit.

iI found out about you guys on Reddit. I found out about you guys on Reddit.

Correct phrase is "found out about."

iI found out about you guys on Reddit. I found out about you guys on Reddit.

thank you!


tThank you! Thank you!

tThank you! Thank you!

tThank you! Thank you!

tThank you! Thank you!

i have been studying and watching youtube videos and TV shows in EN for a long time i can understand the speakrs but i have some issues when it comes to speaking or writting


i know a lot of vocabulary but when i start talking my brain becomes empty especially when i had to speak in front of people.


iI know a lot of vocabulary, but when iI start talking, my brain becomes empty, especially when iI hadve to speak in front of people. I know a lot of vocabulary, but when I start talking, my brain becomes empty, especially when I have to speak in front of people.

iI know a lot of vocabulary but when iI start talspeaking, my brain becomes empty especially when iI hadve to speak in front of people. I know a lot of vocabulary but when I start speaking, my brain becomes empty especially when I have to speak in front of people.

iI know a lot of vocabulary, but when iI start talking, my brain becomes empty, especially when iI hadve to speak in front of people. I know a lot of vocabulary, but when I start talking, my brain becomes empty, especially when I have to speak in front of people.

Added punctuation for clarity. "have to" (present tense fits better).

iI know a lot of vocabulary but when iI start talking my brain becomes empty, especially when iI hadve to speak in front of people. I know a lot of vocabulary but when I start talking my brain becomes empty, especially when I have to speak in front of people.

i think that's becaue of the fear i have of making mistakes, and the stress caused by the listener you can call it anxiety.


iI think that's because of the fear iI have of making mistakes, and the stress caused by the listener y. You can call it anxiety. I think that's because of the fear I have of making mistakes and the stress caused by the listener. You can call it anxiety.

iI think that's because of themy fear i have of making mistakes, and the stress caused by the listener y. You can call it anxiety. I think that's because of my fear of making mistakes, and the stress caused by the listener. You can call it anxiety.

iI think that's because of the fear iI have of making mistakes, and the stress caused by the listener y. You can call it anxiety. I think that's because of the fear I have of making mistakes, and the stress caused by the listener. You can call it anxiety.

Spelling correction

iI think that's because of the fear i have of making mistakes, and the stress caused by the listener y. You can call it anxiety. I think that's because of the fear i have of making mistakes, and the stress caused by the listener. You can call it anxiety.

improving these skills require practice too.


iImproving these skills requires practice, too. Improving these skills requires practice, too.

iImproving these skills require practice too. Improving these skills require practice too.

iImproving these skills requires practice too. Improving these skills requires practice too.

Singular subject "improving" then verb should be "requires."

iImproving these skills requires practice too. Improving these skills requires practice too.

today i decide to break the ice and start writing regardless of the mistakes i'm going to make, but i feel like it's important.


tToday i, I decided to break the ice and start writing regardless of the mistakes iI'm going to make, but iecause I feel like it's important. Today, I decided to break the ice and start writing regardless of the mistakes I'm going to make because I feel like it's important.

tToday i, I decided to break the ice and start writing regardless of the mistakes i'm going to make, but i feel like it's important. Today, I decided to break the ice and start writing regardless of the mistakes i'm going to make, but i feel like it's important.

“Break the ice” is not the phrase you’re looking for. Break the ice is used when you want to start an activity among a group of people.

tToday i, I decided to break the ice and start writing regardless of the mistakes iI'm going to make, but iI feel like it's important. Today, I decided to break the ice and start writing regardless of the mistakes I'm going to make, but I feel like it's important.

Past tense "decided" matches the action you already took.

tToday i decide to break the ice and start writing regardless of the mistakes i'Im going to make, but i feel like it's important. Today i decide to break the ice and start writing regardless of the mistakes iIm going to make, but i feel like it's important.

As I'm is a contraction of "I am" and includes the pronoun "I", it also gets a capital letter.

This is my first time writing


This is my first time writing. This is my first time writing.

This is my first time writing. This is my first time writing.

i was thinking of it this way: i will just listen and watch too much content and my speaking and writing will improve naturaly, but i was wrong.


iI was thinking ofabout it this way: iI will just listen and watch too mucha lot of content, and my speaking and writing will improve naturaly, but ily. However, I was wrong. I was thinking about it this way: I will just listen and watch a lot of content, and my speaking and writing will improve naturally. However, I was wrong.

iI was thinking of it this way: i; I will just listen and watch too muchlots of content and my speaking and writing will improve naturaly, bly. But iI was wrong. I was thinking of it this way; I will just listen and watch lots of content and my speaking and writing will improve naturally. But I was wrong.

iI was thinking of it this way: iI willould just listen and watch too much content, and my speaking and writing will improve naturally, but iI was wrong. I was thinking of it this way: I would just listen and watch too much content, and my speaking and writing will improve naturally, but I was wrong.

"would" (fits past tense). Spelling correction

iI was thinking of it this way: iI will just listen and watch too mucha lot of content and my speaking and writing will improve naturally, but i was wrong. I was thinking of it this way: I will just listen and watch a lot of content and my speaking and writing will improve naturally, but i was wrong.

"too much" means that it would be bad to watch that much, but since this is referring to your previous thinking where you thought watching that much was good, the phrase doesn't quite fit.

i have been studying and watching youtube videos and TV shows in EN for a long time i can understand the speaker but i have some issues when it comes to speaking or writing i do too much input, but zero output.


iI have been studying and watching yYoutTube videos and TV shows in ENnglish for a long time i. I can understand the speakers, but iI have some issues when it comes to speaking or writing i. I do too much input, but and zero output. I have been studying and watching YouTube videos and TV shows in English for a long time. I can understand the speakers, but I have some issues when it comes to speaking or writing. I do too much input and zero output.

iI have been studying and watching youtube videos and TV shows in ENnglish for a long time i. I can understand the speaker but iI have some issues when it comes to speaking or writing i. I do too much input, but zero output. I have been studying and watching youtube videos and TV shows in English for a long time. I can understand the speaker but I have some issues when it comes to speaking or writing. I do too much input, but zero output.

iI have been studying and watching yYoutTube videos and TV shows in ENnglish for a long time i. I can understand the speaker, but iI have some issues when it comes to speaking or writing i. I do too much input, but zero output. I have been studying and watching YouTube videos and TV shows in English for a long time. I can understand the speaker, but I have some issues when it comes to speaking or writing. I do too much input, but zero output.

Capitalize the "I" and "YouTube" Added full stops to avoid run-on sentences. Write the word "English" properly.

iI have been studying and watching yYoutube videos and TV shows in ENnglish for a long time iI can understand the speaker but iI have some issues when it comes to speaking or writing i. I do too much input, but zero output. I have been studying and watching Youtube videos and TV shows in English for a long time I can understand the speaker but I have some issues when it comes to speaking or writing. I do too much input, but zero output.

It's a little unnatural to refer to the language as EN rather than English. The pronoun "I" is always capitalised

i do too much inputs with zero outputs.


if i don't try i will stay the way i'm forever, i want to chat with strangers especially on Reddit but my poor writing skills always hold me back


iIf iI don't try i, I will stay the way i'I am forever, i. I want to chat with strangers, especially on Reddit, but my poor writing skills always hold me back. If I don't try, I will stay the way I am forever. I want to chat with strangers, especially on Reddit, but my poor writing skills always hold me back.

iIf iI don't try i, I will stay the way i'I am forever, i. I want to chat with strangers especially on Reddit, but my poor writing skills always holds me back. If I don't try, I will stay the way I am forever. I want to chat with strangers especially on Reddit, but my poor writing skills always holds me back.

iIf iI don't try i, I will stay the way i'I am forever, i. I want to chat with strangers, especially on Reddit, but my poor writing skills always hold me back. If I don't try, I will stay the way I am forever. I want to chat with strangers, especially on Reddit, but my poor writing skills always hold me back.

"strangers send" (plural subject).

iIf iI don't try iI will stay the way i'I am forever, iI want to chat with strangers especially on Reddit but my poor writing skills always hold me back. If I don't try I will stay the way I am forever, I want to chat with strangers especially on Reddit but my poor writing skills always hold me back.

In the phrase "the way I am", we don't really contract "I am".

stangers sends me DMs on social media and I avoided to respond just because i don't know how to write will


stStrangers sends me DMs on social media, and I avoided to responding just because iI don't know how to write wiell. Strangers sends me DMs on social media, and I avoid responding just because I don't know how to write well.

stStrangers sends me DMs on social media and I avoided to responding just because iI don't know how to write wiell Strangers send me DMs on social media and I avoid responding just because I don't know how to write well

stStrangers sends me DMs on social media, and I avoided to responding just because iI don't know how to write wiell Strangers send me DMs on social media, and I avoid responding just because I don't know how to write well

"avoid responding" (correct verb form). "well" (spelling correction).

stStrangers sends me DMs on social media and I avoided to responding just because iI don't know how to write wiell. Strangers send me DMs on social media and I avoid responding just because I don't know how to write well.

i know that you'll find my text messy because of my poor punctuation i don't know where or when to put comma or full stop etc.


iI know that you'll find my text messy because of my poor punctuation i. I don't know where or when to put commas or full stops, etc. I know that you'll find my text messy because of my poor punctuation. I don't know where or when to put commas or full stops, etc.

iI know that you'll find my text messy because of my poor punctuation i. I don't know where or when to put comma or full stop etc. I know that you'll find my text messy because of my poor punctuation. I don't know where or when to put comma or full stop etc.

iI know that you'll find my text messy because of my poor punctuation iI don't know where or when to put commas or full stop etcs. I know that you'll find my text messy because of my poor punctuation I don't know where or when to put commas or full stops.

Added full stop to avoid run-on.

iI know that you'll find my text messy because of my poor punctuation i. I don't know where or when to put comma or full stop etc. I know that you'll find my text messy because of my poor punctuation. I don't know where or when to put comma or full stop etc.

Full stops separate sentences, which are usually complete self-contained thoughts. Sometimes sentences can have multiple related clauses, which are usually separated by commas

i was thinking of it this way: i will just listen and watch too much content and my speaking and writiing will improve naturaly, but i was wrong.


today i decide to break the ice and start writing regardless of the mistakes i'm going to make but i feel like it's important, if i don't try i will stay the way i'm forever i want to chat with strangers especially on Reddit but my poor writing skills always hold me back


i'm forever, i want to chat with strangers especially on Reddit but my poor writing skills always hold me back


i have been studying and watching youtube videos and TV shows in EN for a long time i can understand the speaker but i have some issues when it comes to speaking or writting


i have been studying and watching youtube videos and TV shows in EN for a long time i can understand the speaker but i have some issues when it comes to speaking or writing


i have been studying and watching youtube videos and TV shows in EN for a long time i can understand the speaker but i have some issues when it comes to speaking or writing i do too much input with zero output.


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